Date: 07/22/11 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really beautiful. Loved the way it was done from Tom's point of view but also managed to show Bill's character so strongly through how his brother viewed him. Well written.
Date: 06/17/11 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such a beautiful story. I love it!
Date: 04/11/10 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww, touching.
Well-written I think, and well put together for a one-shot.
The dialogue seems a bit unrealistically dramatic but I get that that's what you were going for and it fits in nicely.
Well done.
Date: 05/20/08 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, so sad and so sweet. I really like your writing :)
Date: 05/20/08 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, Bathala. Absolutely lovely.
Date: 05/19/08 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Adored it!! Love your writing =)
Date: 05/19/08 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
That last line just clicked the entire fic for me. It was amazingly well done and so simplistic, showing how no matter how the twins look they're still the same on some level. It was a pleasant read and I'm now going to look and see if you have any more fics.
Date: 05/19/08 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This fic is so heartbreaking :( but its beautiful. I love the backpacks.