Date: 05/18/15 09:50 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
Wow, this is gorgeous.
Date: 04/28/13 01:36 am Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
I love this!!!
Date: 08/02/11 01:28 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
aww!!! i loved it! Hagen didn't just fuck Tom: he made beautiful, and sensual love to him :-) this made me smile
Date: 06/03/10 01:56 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
awww ^^
Date: 05/15/10 10:40 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
So cute. The torg sex was hot and the ending was just sweet.
Date: 02/26/10 08:44 am Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
I really loved this.
Date: 05/06/09 08:29 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
Awwww...
Date: 04/19/09 09:09 am Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
i love:)
Date: 03/09/09 06:42 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
Awww, thanks for such a sweet story! Faving it now!
Date: 01/21/09 09:08 am Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
awww... this was soo sweet. i loved it. are you gonna write more?
also, i would like to know if you would mind me using that title? for a song i'm writing. i really loved the title. i woul be so grateful if you'd allow me to use it.
Date: 01/17/09 04:09 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
Warm fingers continued to work at the growing stain on Georg's jeans. It wasn't until a burly man walked by, giving him the nod and wink, that Georg figured out the situation. He had a man, on his hands and knees, rubbing madly at the crotch of his jeans.
Anyone behind Tom would surely let their assumptions explain the scene in front of them.
Clearing his throat, Georg tried to hide the fact that he had a growing problem down below. He swore it had its own mind. What a fabulous time to show up to!
Swift hands worked the denim lightly, non-purposely (or maybe on purpose) stroking the newly formed tent. – hum?! I’m not sure if this is on purpose or not?!
He made a mental note to see a psychologist later - *snorts* mental note see if I’m crazy *nods head*…but later!
“Well, what were you going to say first?” Tom asked - *chuckles*
“Nah,” Tom disagreed but brought his body closer. Gently pressing a couple fingers upon Georg’s cheek, his hot breath trailing down, he finished, “Let’s not talk.” - *giggles*
"I never did catch your name” - *chuckles* creepy. *shakes head* didn’t learn his name?!
“Georg… “Tom tested out the name. He knew he would have fun screaming it tonight - *giggles* awesome line!
By the time they reached Georg’s bedroom, there was a nice pink mark on Georg’s neck, that he secretly wished he would have for ever. – awh they both feel the same way *scrunches face up* that’s so cute!
Georg of course was never attracted to another mans junk before - *cracks up* another mans JUNK?! *giggles and kicks feet*
for. He didn’t want this to be post-pond until dawn then have to leave quickly because Georg had other plans – oh *pouts and crosses arms over chest* I don’t think Georg will kick you out so quickly!
"Geo -- Oohh oh oh fuck... Ohh fuck! – almost he almost got to scream his name *giggles*
Was he supposed to ready it – oops read
Don’t’ leave me in the morning
And Tom didn’t – awh! I hope it worked out for them!
Dudes long PWP! NICE!
Date: 11/29/08 11:28 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
Awwww how cute!!!!!!! You did a great job on this, really! (See? Love at first sight actually happens all the time! awww! I feel like cuteness is gonna kill me...or something!...I mean this was hot and all, but also very sweet!)
Date: 09/28/08 12:47 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
OMG! *teary eyes*
that was BEAUTIFUL!!!! *hugs u REALLY tight*
the sex was hot and the two of them together was just the sweetest thing EVER!!! perfect fic =)
*adds to favourits*
Date: 08/31/08 07:56 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
I wish I could say I liked this, but this story has way too many mistakes in it for me to find it appealing. Perhaps if someone betaed this fic then I could get into more. As it is, I couldn't make it past the drink spilling into Georg's crotch, so I am sorry.
There are silly mistakes like spelling errors, wrong terms and just...overall strange shit going on in this story.
For instance, I'm not clear on whether Tom is a bartender or a waiter. He seems to be serving drinks, but Georg is sitting on a barstool--which tends to be at the bar. If Georg is already at the bar, then he would just order drinks from the bartender. But you guys keep calling Tom a waiter. *is very confused*
Then, after certain sentences there is no period (.) to let the reader know that the thought ends. Also spelling errors and words being left out entirely.
All in all, it's way too many mistakes to be able to read this and say I enjoyed it. Again, if someone could go through this entire fic bit by bit and can fix all those mistakes, then I think it could be a really good read.
An "A" for effort though.
Date: 08/19/08 02:56 am Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
awwww, hot and sweet
Date: 08/15/08 01:26 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
Aw that was HOT and very cute *heart*
Date: 07/30/08 03:51 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
wooooooow! GREAT JOB GIRL!!!
Date: 05/20/08 12:59 am Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
Awwww! That was so hot and then the end was so sweet T_T Amazing!
Date: 05/19/08 10:19 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
*melts*
Aww aww OMG AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Date: 05/19/08 09:02 pm Title: Don't Leave Me In The Morning [1/1]
^^ delicious