Date: 11/14/12 01:21 pm Title: Snow White
Pretty pretty PRETTYYY please, continue this story! *kitten eyes* I know it's been years, but I hope you know it's most certainly not forgotten!
B.
Date: 11/10/12 11:39 am Title: A Rude Awakening
THis fic just randomly popped up in my head! I hope you'll continue it! :) Re-reading it ^_^
Date: 09/07/12 11:08 am Title: Snow White
*bins the tomatos* Gosh darn!!! This storey is so perfect
Date: 06/07/12 08:52 am Title: Snow White
please go one with the story, I really like it!!..
xx
Date: 06/16/10 02:15 pm Title: Baby Steps
i`m looking at my own cat with renewed interest. way to add intrigue in my life.) this is very cute and very engrossing
Date: 03/10/10 06:49 pm Title: Snow White
This isn't bad :) At least its something posted after soo long of not having anything
Date: 02/21/10 09:58 pm Title: Snow White
Nuuuuuuuuuu there's no "Next" button...!
Date: 12/12/09 02:28 am Title: Snow White
This story which i really want you to finish it.. it is amazing!! :D I love this.. it just makes you read it!
Date: 10/13/09 07:32 am Title: All in Good Time
die gordon die. myahah
Date: 09/12/09 06:02 am Title: Snow White
twilight has effected your brain.. it shows
Author's Response: How? I wrote this before I even knew Twilight existed.
Date: 06/26/09 07:36 pm Title: Snow White
more. this is my all time favorite story and it isn't updating D'X
Date: 06/10/09 03:41 pm Title: Snow White
Lovely story simply wonderful with great writing and imagery. Shame that it hasn't been updated in so long I'd hate to see such a good story never get finished
Date: 06/09/09 12:47 am Title: Snow White
Ah, I just found this story, and it's quite intriguing! I'm faving this in hopes that you'll continue it, because I'd love to read more! ^_^
Date: 03/27/09 01:59 pm Title: Snow White
*throws away the rotten tomatoes*
that was awesome!!! and unbelievably fluffy!!!! so cute!
more soon....pleeease?
Fern xx
Date: 03/26/09 06:08 pm Title: All in Good Time
Finally when the entire family had assembled, Gordon peered at Bill and said calmly, "No animals at the table." - lol ha ha that’s AWESOME!!!!!
Bill's lip was curling and he was baring his teeth. - *grins* nice!
"He's vermin, that's what's wrong with him," Gordon snapped. "We need to get rid of him. He's nothing but a burden." - *gasp* oh my!
"Want a belly rub?" Tom asked with a smile, and Bill returned it, laying on his back. - yes yes yes!!!
beta moment..."Bill? What on Earth hare you doing up?" - oops hare?
"You smell good."
"You smell like alcohol," - just as long as you don’t puke it’s ok.
I really am wondering what is in downtown. I’m sure it has something to do with the curse but what will he find?
They had reached their destination. - dun-dun-dddnnnnnnn!
Date: 03/25/09 09:02 pm Title: Repentance
"Never. I've known him my whole life, he's never hit me before," Bill whispered. He put his arms over his chest in a defensive pose, and nervously pressed his fingertips together over his mouth. – awh poor Billa *giggles*
More time passed, and Bill wondered if maybe he was supposed to be lost. Maybe this was the universe's way of telling him Tom was better off without him. – awh Billa!
"Bill! Thank god, there you are!" – oh yeah!!! He has been found!
"You had full right to. I was a dick." – good boy!
While searching for his lost kitten, Tom had been getting more and more anxious as the time passed and still he couldn't find Bill; the things that could have happened to him were numerous and frightening. Bill could have run into traffic again, or gotten himself kidnapped, mugged, raped, killed, or any other horrible, unmentionable thing. – yeah huh!!!
In a way, Tom wasn't sorry he'd hit Bill, and even though it had probably shaved a few years off his life worrying, he knew what his feelings for Bill were now. – poo for the hitting of Bill. Hooray for the realization that Tom has about his feelings.
"Everyone makes mistakes. Your heart was in the right place, and that's what matters. Besides, I did say that if I ever do something wrong, you can just hit me," he reminded Tom, pawing at his face. – funny boy!
Bill turned a few degrees in Tom's lap to face him better and just let Tom pet him. He was just about to suggest going home when Tom lifted his face, and before Bill knew it, a warm pair of lips were on his own. – yeah hopefully it will work this time.
"You know what happened last time," Bill mumbled. "We agreed we wouldn't do this, Tom. And now we're... doing it anyway? I'm confused." – oops I guess not.
"Did you feel something too?" Bill was almost afraid to admit what he had felt; a swirl in his stomach, a flutter in his heart, and tingles that had spread throughout his entire body, making him feel warm and... loved. – awh!!! Yeah!
"I just... I guess I have bad instinct in the city. I would have gone right," Bill said, although that wasn't exactly why he wanted to go right. He glanced back in that direction, and the hairs on the back of his neck stood up. – Bill has a different kind of instinct for what’s over there. *smirks*
Still, the finer aspects of the curse still hadn't worked themselves out yet, and Bill had turned his brain to mush by the time they arrived home. – well curses can be complicated!
Date: 03/25/09 01:12 pm Title: So Close but So Far
"I don't like dogs," – *giggles*
Tom followed with a mellow enthusiasm for Bill's excitement. He didn't really care where Bill went or what he bought; seeing him out in the real world and so excited was enough kept Tom happy. – awh!
"Can I help you, miss?" - *snorts*
Trying to be thrifty and still trendy, the two of them spent most of their time in small thrift shops where prices were dirt cheap for the most 'incredible' things, as Bill said. – yeah for carful shopping!
Bill had found sparkly sunglasses in the shape of stars, which had been pushed into his hair like a headband, and a much more retro pair of sunglasses was covering his eyes. A long, fluffy hot pink feather boa was wrapped around his shoulders, and lastly, one of his arms was covered in cheap gold bangles. Bill grabbed one end of the feather boa and struck a diva pose, one hand on his hip, with his other arm straight up in the air. – that is super cute!
When he put a hand on Tom's shoulder and began purring in Tom's ear, Tom just about lost it. – me too!
He tried to pretend that for two seconds, Bill hadn't actually managed to turn him on. Desperately, Tom glanced over at the crummy old Playboy magazines, but the girls on them weren't as pretty as Bill. The one with the cowgirl outfit was not as cute as Bill was with the cowboy hat on that he'd just found in the costume box. It was too big and falling over one eye, and Bill had this goofy expression on; he wasn't posed or professionally made up, he was just trying on a cowboy hat. - *grins* uh-oh Tomi’s in trouble!
Tom wondered how Bill would look in a real, legitimate princess outfit.
At that thought, Tom had to mentally slap himself-- Bill is a dress? He was obviously going crazy. – lol Bill’s hot in a dress!!!
"I look like a cat?" – lol way to stick your foot in your mouth!!
"Hmm, food sounds good. Just nothing that involves lots of utensils. I don't want to make a fool out of myself in public, too." – awh lol
But his thoughts turned more conceptual as he watched Tom interacting with the cashier; he didn't understand how people that were complete strangers could interact so naturally. Bill felt completely uncomfortable with strangers, but Tom seemed to be fine ordering his cheesecake. – interesting conundrum.
"It's cheesy... but cakey," – no!!! it’s squishy and tangy.
He replaced the fork on Tom's plate, looking at it thoughtfully. Since Bill and Tom had alternated using the fork, then was it like an indirect kiss? Bill felt butterflies burst into existence in his stomach at the mere thought of it. – dork!
A mental image of Bill naked, with cat ears and a tail, flashed through Tom's mind. – mmmhhh thanks for that!
However, by far the weirdest thing was that Tom didn't even care that Bill was a guy. Gender wasn't even factoring into the equation, and Tom was perplexed. – thanks for putting this in here I thought that was werid too!
He smacked Bill on the side of the head to try and drive the point home.
It wasn't a hard blow at all; in fact, in a different context, it could have been taken as playful and teasing. But in the present situation, it was probably the worst thing Tom could have done.
Bill looked up at Tom with wide, hurt eyes, appalled that he could have messed up so bad that he'd actually prompted Tom to hit him. Bill made a strangled noise that was meant to come out as an apology, before ducking out of the prison created by Tom's arms and sprinting away. – no good Tom you don’t hit people when you’re angry it comes across wrong…uh-oh little kitty lost in the big city!
Date: 03/24/09 04:54 pm Title: Smile For Them
Review #400
Nice dream…shaded meanings but nothing that gives too much away. Good job…you could have made it a mess!
Gordon was home.
Bill didn't even bother questioning why. – I would have after I found a nice hiding spot.
where he could almost sit fully up beneath it. – dude how is that possible?!
Bill could have cried. Gordon hadn't seen him, and immense relief spread all over Bill. He relaxed a bit, and uncurled his toes: the fatal mistake. Gordon noticed the movement, and his gaze shifted to underneath the headboard, where a boy was curled up in the corner, dressed merely in a small pair of black boxers and a red shirt of Tom's. A gasp was heard, and Bill's eyes opened at just the wrong time, locking immediately with Gordon's.
"Bill?" – crap CRAP CRAP!!! On multiple levels!!
he found a rather disturbing sight in his driveway.
Gordon's car.
After waiting for three whole seconds for the car to just disappear [it didn't] – lol!
Confronting Gordon had been the scariest thing so far in the last few days. – dude yeah!
gently pushed Tom onto his back so that Bill could lay on Tom's chest. – I love that he does that. Awh! *sigh*
Bill sighed and turned his head, nuzzling Tom's chest and holding his shoulder gently. Tom felt his cheeks heat up, and he cleared his throat to push away the thoughts that were coming up in his mind. He wasn't going to think about Bill like that; he never had and he never will. There was nothing between them, Bill had made that pretty clear.
Tom's heart sank at that thought: he was disappointed. – awh poor poo-bear.
"I wish I had my tail," Bill said idly, scrunching his nose. – I know what you mean I wish I had one too. Although… http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=911&chapter=1 might help!
I like Tom’s process to break down the can Bill love issue and how he’s now starting to see Bill as a person.
Tom realized how the catboy was wrapping himself around his former owner. Bill was like a vine that rewound itself around its' captive object as soon as it was pulled away, unwilling to break contact. – *grins*
"Sometimes I wonder if... is there anything else I'm good for than cuddling? I mean, what's my point?" – I like that Bill’s trying to find his new niche in life.
I need a life, literally. I don't have an identity, I have a name and adoption forms from a pet store. I guess what I'm trying to say, is that we need to start looking into the future and try to figure out what to do with me. I can't just... hang around forever. – nope, glad you’re thinking about the future Bill!
Tom and Billa sitting in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g…. *giggles*
Date: 03/24/09 04:05 pm Title: Truth Covered Lies
"It's no big deal," Bill mumbled dejectedly. "Don't worry about it, okay?"
It was then that Tom realized for the first time that Bill might actually have his own things to deal with, things Tom didn't know about. Dangerous secrets that Bill was keeping from him. – dangerous? I don’t know that I would jump to dangerous…but then again I’ve never met anyone who used to be a cat?!
Hesitantly, Tom followed Bill into the bathroom. He quickly put an arm around the weak boy, who almost immediately collapsed against him. Bill eventually found his footing, but still leaned heavily against Tom. He needed the comfort and help even if he didn't want it. – good boy Tom!
Now feeling slightly more relaxed, Bill finally took a glance at Tom in the mirror. He met Tom's eyes, and immediately felt his gut churn again; Tom knew something was up and he probably hated Bill for keeping things from him. If Bill trusted Tom, he should tell Tom everything. But telling Tom everything.... – I like the conflicting thoughts between the two boys how the other thinks that the other thinks that he must hate him.
But when he tried to open his mouth and explain, he just couldn't. – binding spell?... *reads more* oh no just overwhelmed *nods* ok
"Bill, you can tell me anything. Please, I want to help you. Don't keep shoving me away, dammit."
Unexpectedly, Bill burst into tears. "See? You are mad at me! I--" – and his third curse is that he’s emotionally a girl! Oi!
"Tom, I was cursed so that I can't love anyone, and that no one can love me. And now I'm so confused because Damien tried to undo the curse, and I don't know which emotions I'm feeling are right and I don't think it's possible for anyone to ever love me back even if I could love, and, and..." – but he does love Tom can’t he see that? And Tom loves him. *makes face* I guess they can’t.
like with the k-kiss..."
Tom took in a sharp breath; had the curse gotten in the way of the kiss? Tom had assumed it was only because he wasn't ready, but if Bill had felt the same thing Tom felt, or rather, the lack thereof.... – well at least this bit got cleared up!
Never had he felt so low, and he crawled closer into Tom's embrace, trying to bury himself mentally and physically. – awh snuggly kitty!
Besides, if this Damien guy had already undone part of the curse, then was it possible that the rest had just unravelled itself like a sock? Was Bill just making mountains out of molehills? – true, true…a sock? Why a sock? I’ve never had a sock unravel I’ve had a sweater unravel but never a sock?!
Tom was used to him looking soft and innocent and cuddly. Now he just looked cold and hardened and upset. – nice description!
"Oh. Um, well I'll let you bathe in peace," he said silently. – can you say something silently *grins*
Bill didn't want to tell, but that was okay, because Tom didn't want to know. – nice parallel.
Finally, two hours before midnight – odd way to say 10pm?
As Tom crept closer, he realized Bill had his head down; he was no doubt waiting, but it was entirely plausible that Bill had fallen asleep sometime during his wait. A smile slowly spread across Tom's face; it was the little things Bill did for Tom that he adored so. – and you don’t think that’s love?
which felt thick and scratchy after he'd spent most of his time waiting for Tom crying. – awh poor Billa
"Just... everything with the kiss, you know, and the curse and that whole issue... I've decided that I trust your judgement and whatever you feel for me is what I feel for you." – smart boy I like that logic! Sad but it works and judgment only has one “e”
It was clear Tom didn't like Billlike that, - spaces go between words ;)
There was nothing more than a platonic bond between Bill and Tom, and certainly something like a curse couldn't have any effect on it either way. – hum?!
Bill hated the feeling that he was limiting Tom from being with his friends. – good for bill for realizing that he might be doing that.
"Bye, Billabong," Tom said, rolling his eyes. At those words, Bill practically launched himself onto Tom, but stopped himself when he realized he was being needy and clingy. After a quick kiss on Tom's cheek, Bill said bye as well, and Tom was gone. – that’s so cute!
Date: 03/24/09 03:19 pm Title: Crash and Burn
the soft buzz of the television reporting some mysterious new crop of murders. Suspected to be by the same organization from last week's murders, and blah blah blah. – this is something important!!! Oy!
Bill's heart broke; Tom was injured, and it was his fault. – awh! Hum?! What will happen that will make this event come true.
Bill found himself crying silently as he realized that this was exactly what he was trying to avoid. Not trying hard enough, apparently.- hum? It doesn’t bother him that he can see the future? Hum?!
Bill was currently an emotional wreck, like a tornado had come and hit him, tearing up all his thoughts and emotions, leaving them jumbled and hurt, confused and unorganized. – nice description.
Wrapping himself around Bill in any and every way possible, Tom pressed himself close to the emotionally fragile body he held and nuzzled his face into Bill's slick neck. – awh!!!
"Billa, what happened kitten?" he asked gently, letting go of one of Bill's hands to soothingly rub his stomach, which was clenched tight. "Relax, kitten, relax. I'm here. What happened?" Tom asked again, and after feeling Bill's stomach muscles relax, he moved his hand up to pet Bill's sternum, right over his heart. – this doesn’t strike him as odd? It’s awesome don’t get me wrong but this isn’t his cat any more it’s a human boy.
Bill already felt guilty for something that hadn't, and might not happen. – yeah I do that too.
"Don't apologize for you being you, kitten." – new nickname?
Maybe now would be a good time to try and kiss him, Bill thought happily. - *grins* yes please.
Tom wait for Bill to kiss back, and they both waited for the inevitable sparks to fly and give the all clear for a more romantic, exclusive relationship.
But nothing happened. - *sigh* what?!
He hadn't misinterpreted Bill's look, had he? The way Bill had kept glancing at Tom's lips, getting nearer and nearer with utmost hesitance, and looking at him with pleading eyes. And Tom had kissed him, but... maybe it wasn't right. - *sigh* this is so disappointing!
He wasn't there... yet. He wanted to get there, maybe, but would Bill after that pitiful display? Tom didn't think he'd want to kiss someone again after going through something like that. If Bill had really wanted it, wouldn't he have kissed back? So maybe Bill decided at the last moment that he didn't want to kiss Tom. – oh my now Tom thinks it’s his fault! Awesome! lol
"Yes, and why don't we tuck Bill in and sing him a lullaby?" Gordon sneered, before stalking out of the living area. – oi evil stepfather? *sigh* ok fine!
hum? What’s up with Simone being ok with everything…Tom has never shown any indication of being gay…she should need some transition time to getting to be ok with Tom maybe being gay.