Date: 06/29/08 12:46 pm Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
Mwaahahah, I knew some of this :D
Yay xD
Omfg, Tom feeding Bill *dies*
Author's Response: That'll be fun *mwahaha*
Date: 06/28/08 06:14 pm Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
ooh more please when you come back from holiday...
Author's Response: of course!
Date: 06/28/08 04:01 pm Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
have a nice holiday!
Ahh loved this chapter^^
Was über long and also über cute^^
Poor Bill being cursed twice:(
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 06/28/08 02:00 pm Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
Awww what an excellent chappie! I'm glad you got some inspiration back, and I'm glad I could help! I see you took my suggestions and even dedicated it to me! :D I feel very, very flattered! And you gave me some great ideas as well, so check my new series soon and expect to be mentioned as well.... ;)
Lots of things in this made me laugh, especially Siemone going: Tom, are you going to take a bath with Bill? XD
And one other thing made me smile, because I do it myself all the time: [Tom] wondered if maybe [the conditioner] was too much, [...] but it was too late, since he couldn't put it back in [the bottle]. I think that a lot when I've just been to the hairdresser and my hair is shorter and I've got too much conditioner in my hands: I can't put it back so I might as well use it XD
I can't wait for your next chapter! Too bad for us you're going on holiday, but yeyy for you! :D Have a lot of fun!
Author's Response: It's one of the sad facts of life - entropy! [hurray, I learned in physics this year ^__^!!!] Thanks Koosi :D!!!
Date: 06/28/08 10:52 am Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
those evil man suck :-p That they can do that to a little babby, can't believ that Bill's mam just geve him up. I'm glad we got his history now but those guys seem to have done a terrible job. Bill already feels something for Tom and Tom seem to begin seeing him in a diferent light. Well I don't know, I just hope they messed up :-p
But I have a feeling that there is more to it or that it will have some consequences, maybe it's just me :-p
Bill is a real cuty. There a lot of things that we people think as normal that he doesn't know, I think it's pretty funny, we don't realize it :-p
The bathing was so sweet. I wanted to pinch him in his cheeks :-p
I can't wait to see how Tom is going to learn him how to eat :-p
I like this long chapter very much ;-)
I will as patiently as possible wait for when you get back :-p
Have fun at your holiday ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^___^
Date: 06/28/08 08:44 am Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
LMAO n___n
Awww. Naive Bill is so cute :3
More!
Author's Response: Aww, isn't he? ;D Thanks :]
Date: 06/28/08 03:59 am Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
okay, is that long enough for you or should I do it again?
I LOVE THIS STORY. It's so kawaii and it's just. -insert odd sound here- Amazing.
Author's Response: LOL you stretched the page to twice it's width with that xD *feels appreciated* Thanks!!
Date: 06/27/08 11:26 pm Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
Three weeks? Aww. :( Well, at least this chapter was really long. I appreciate it.
Poor Bill, but obviously that spell didn't quite work, in fact, the cat spell didn't seem to quite work either. I mean, he's obviously not a cat anymore, and he really loves Tom (hence his jelousy of the girl friends, and his feelings in the chapters as a human), and I wouldn't say that Tom feels nothing for him (romantically I mean). Tom's moving towards loving Bill, I doubt much could change that.
I'm glad we got more info on Bill's history. He was a specialy little kid huh? To be awhare at that age (if you can call it that). Did he have magic that was taken away from him? Is there more to the curse then what we've been told? There are more than two curses right? I think you mentioned that there were several.
I really want to know what happened to break the curse of him being a cat, and quite frankly I'd say that the inability to love thing never really kicked in. Unless it manifests itself in different ways (ie. some sort of inability to have sex - don't get any ideas!).
The bath scene was so cute. Tom's such a sweetheart to do all that for Bill, he definately loves Bill as more than just a pet or a best friend.
I can totally imagine Bill trying on those tight clothes for the first time. I bet they were uncomfortable. Tom's mom is such a nice person.
Can't wait to learn more, update soon! And please don't start a new story just yet, I want more of this one!
Author's Response: Thanks for such a long review, god I think it was longer that the chapter ;D!! There's still a lot more about Bill's past to be unearthed. Bill never had magic, but the reason he can see so easily into his past is partly due to the magic used on him; he can see back to those moments through the magic. And Bill only had two curses, but they're both rather complicated. Thanks again! And actually, my other story already has a lot written for it, but of course it wouldn't take priority. Still, I've decided to wait until after holiday to post it, just incase.
Date: 06/27/08 10:48 pm Title: Storytime and Soapsuds
Oh darn, 3 more weeks?
Aw well, it's worth the wait!
Author's Response: I'll do everything in my power to get it up asap, but I most likely will not have internet. Sorry. x]
Date: 06/19/08 09:36 am Title: Hakuna Matata
0_o I missed this update too! :O
fukin hell!
(i think something went wrong with the email notification or something because i missed a few updates inc this one:/)
Anyway this was a lovely update!
Tom giving bill a bellyrub and the names they have for each other so kawaii!
"Well I gotta restring it first since instruments don't usually come with good strings when you buy them, no matter how amazing they are."
0_o is that true? I never knew that!!!
And how do you know which strings are good then?
The guitar tom got seems really cool first i thought huh? but then when you described it that he could play higher notes something started ringing^^
hehe, anyway still love this story!!!
and good luck with your exams!!^^
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, it's true, you should always restring any instrument when you get it. ;)
Date: 06/16/08 03:27 am Title: Hakuna Matata
Update soon, I say! Destroy those exams!!
Date: 06/10/08 10:15 pm Title: Hakuna Matata
Wait. There isn't more! **whines** I want more!
Date: 06/09/08 06:20 pm Title: Hakuna Matata
awww, I want a Bill-cat !
Author's Response: Ohh me too x]!!
Date: 06/06/08 07:40 am Title: Hakuna Matata
He peered closer at the screen, reading the information on it. "Look here, they've got them for boys as well. Click," he urged, pointing.
Tom clicked indeed, making the small mental note in the back of his head that Bill could read, and saved it for later.
Haha! I was also like: Bill can read?? XD
I hope you'll write more soon!!! I love it.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, more... eventually xD
Date: 06/06/08 07:20 am Title: Baby Steps
Awww so nice! I'm glad Siemone trusted them... And I love how Bill is with Tom.
Now if only my own cat Billy would turn into a man someday ;)
Author's Response: I wish xD
Date: 06/05/08 09:52 pm Title: Hakuna Matata
soo cuute! hope to hear from u soon!!!
-xxx-
Author's Response: Thank you! New chapter as soon as Outspoken is updated :]
Date: 06/04/08 03:16 am Title: Hakuna Matata
heehee yays to a good chappie and an update!
keep going and you'll recieve more enthusiam than Bill could ever have!!*
*that's probably a lot too!
Author's Response: That's a lot of enthusiasm! xD! Thank you! :D
Date: 05/31/08 09:20 am Title: Hakuna Matata
All that I can say is OULIKKIES!
Too oulik! More
[oulik = cute]
Author's Response: Thank you!! x3
Date: 05/30/08 09:40 pm Title: Hakuna Matata
aw this story is just way too cute
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 05/29/08 03:21 pm Title: Hakuna Matata
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
cutttttteeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bill is way to cute for Tom to handle him
Moreeeee pleasy?
Author's Response: True ^_^ Thank you, and more soon :D