Date: 03/19/09 11:36 pm Title: Snow White
I saw no mistakes. ... but I am sleepy as all get out.
OMfG!! :D You updated! I cannot believe you updated!! I'm so happy! That big 'e'-word that I can't remember how to spell! Ectatic? Extatic? ... I think it was the first one, but anywho... I'm so freaking happy though! :D
It wasn't terrible, and it didn't suck. Considering how sleepy I am and how, ah... Considering how 'persuaded' you were with such little inspiration, I'm exceedingly proud of you, too. Now, if only I could get my own rear in gear... Hum. =(
But anyway, lovely chapter. Kinda hard to think about at first, but I get it now because I'm not over-complicating things. xD Thank you so very much for a lovely chpater! You truly made my day!! :3
Ich liebe dich!!
Date: 03/14/09 07:23 pm Title: Snow White
It wasn't terrible in fact it was rather good!
*throws away the rotten tomatoes and hands You a large cookie instead*
It felt nice to finally find out that both the curses were lifted...
I still love that sweet cuddly Bill of Yours!
Now I can only hope You write some further chapters and explain the premonition...
The story is too good to be left unfinished!
The kiss is Perfect!
Thank You!
Anders
Author's Response: Thank you as well! Nice to see you're still reading :)
Date: 03/13/09 02:32 pm Title: Rocket Science
I love Bill’s apprehension about drinking from a straw very cute! *giggles*
"Bill, you're drinking a smoothie, not disabling a bomb. – ha ha
However, as Tom inched Bill's body closer to his own, the catboy found himself relaxing in his owner's warmth. Bill let out a soft purr - awh snuggly boys!
He found himself drinking more and more of it, and, holding the glass with two hands, continued to suck it down with a newfound gusto and appreciation for Tom's smoothie making skills.
"Woah, Bill, you might want to slow down before--" – oh-no!!!! eeee *giggles*
"Want a belly rub?" Tom offered, and Bill looked at him with unbelieving Bambi eyes. – they are so cute *giggles* this is getting so soppy *grins and flutter claps*
Mmmmmhhh nummy belly rub!!!
Bill stared at his retreating back for a moment, his jaw hanging open unbeknownst to him, feeling terribly as if he'd just been given the cold shoulder. – awh Billa! *kisses him* it’s ok!
So Bill sat down on the bed, indian style, but Tom immediately shook his head. "You're getting a belly rub. Lay down, Billabong," he reprimanded with no real animosity in his voice. "Are you warmer?"
stroked his stomach in rhythmic patterns, not really paying attention to where his hand went. – dangerously low??? *waggles eye brows*
soon enough, there was a full-on cuddle-palooza occurring in Tom's bed. And where there are cuddles, tickles are soon to follow. – Soppy!!! *giggles*
"Really?"
"Really."
"Really really?"
"Really really." - *smacks namenlos’s hands for getting really soppy*
With one last, forlorn glance at the door separating Tom from Bill, the dread-head grudgingly headed downstairs to welcome his parents home.
Suddenly, the world wasn't quite as bright without Bill hanging off his arm. – awh poor Tomi
*hands out complementary baskets of fluff* Anyone feeling excessively cuddly now? – cuddly yes but all soggy! *shakes head* almost too much!
Date: 03/13/09 01:45 pm Title: Secrets, Secrets, Secrets
I like the playboy and princess Billa…I’ll hold it in my memory to see if it ties into more of the story someplace else. *nods*
"I wish I could love you," he whispered – who says you aren’t?
He was immensely conflicted, trying to see through the confessions, the touches, and the kisses. It all made his heart race, and for the first time, Tom questioned his feelings towards Bill. - *grins* this is well played my friend!!!
Tom slowly rubbed circles into Bill's stomach, and apparently that was the right thing to do, as Bill closed his eyes and purred contently. Tom continued for a few moments, before he realized his belly-rub had actually put Bill back to sleep. - *wrinkles nose* awh that’s so cute!
"Mmm, give me a moment," Bill muttered. He stretched down and grabbed at his feet, hooking his fingers underneath his toes, and then stretched to one side, then the other. He turned his torso left and right, grabbing each hip respectively, and cracked his back.
Bill let out a content sigh, and if Tom thought the stretching session was over, he was sorely mistaken. Bill grabbed his ankle and twisted it back, so his leg was folded, and pulled his lower leg in a complete one-eighty [or farther], and it was when Bill reached for the other ankle when Tom burst out laughing.
"Bill, we're going downstairs, not going to the Olympics," – very, very funny!!!
"You... are just being a show off," Tom said, trying insanely hard not to imagine how good a body like that could be in bed. – mmmmhh yes!
Watching the catboy, Tom tried not to think how cute he was being, how alluring his ditzy innocence was, and especially the incident that had just happened when Bill thought he was asleep... what did it mean? Why couldn't Bill love him, if he wanted to? And did Tom want Bill to love him? – I like how conflicted Tom is.
"Tooomi!!!! Are you dead?!" Bill asked, and before Tom could say anything to stop him, the feline boy had pounced from the doorway and onto him in one fluid movement. Bill was sitting on Tom's stomach, lanky legs spread out in stead of being folded up. Tom looked up at him, as Bill looked right back, eyes coy and curious and demure. Bill cocked his head in a manner much like he had in Tom's dream, continuing to have no mercy with his cuteness.
Tom let his head fall back down, his eyes rolling into the back of his head.
Oh god, was he fucked. – ok I like this whole bit!
"Bill, they're just cornflakes. If you don't want them--" Tom started, feeling a bit bad for the cereal.
"No!"
"They're gonna get soggy."
"That'll teach them," Bill muttered, before poking his spoon into the cereal. "Hah! Take that!" - *snorts*
He wondered idly if Bill was naked under it. – horn ball!
Bill was keeping it in mind not to lick out his cereal bowl for the last traces of milk in it, a painful choice.
Noticing this, Tom reached into the fridge, got the half-empty milk carton and handed it to Bill. With an excited squeal, Bill grabbed it, popped it open, and immediately took a long drink. –awh that’s very sweet Tom!
"Bill's just some freaky tranny that doesn't get out much--" - *gasps and sputters* OMG!!!!
A week might be too late for anything. – what? I’m so confused!
Date: 03/13/09 12:51 pm Title: Revelations
Why is he trying to convince Damien of who he? Why does it matter?
David paused, and turned a fraction towards Bill. "I'm sorry I don't recognize you, but... I lost my memory, eighteen years ago. I can't be bothered with my past." David knew he was pushing it. No one was supposed to know he'd ever been anyone else- Damien wasn't supposed to exist anymore, whoever he was. Those men had made it pretty clear. Now he was David Jost, a regular business man, clean and insignificant. – interesting and *giggles* Damien is David Jost *grins* that’s so perfect!!!!! Aweseome!
His stomach was swirling unpleasantly, and not long after Bill had emptied his bladder, he'd emptied his stomach as well. – Very nice sentence! Very eloquent!
"He doesn't look too good," Georg observed.
"Nah he's fine," Tom said flippantly, as Bill settled into the booth beside him. The dreadlocked male wrapped an arm loosely around Bill's waist, leering at him drunkenly. Bill, feeling like shit and having successfully rid his system of alcohol, decided he didn't really like Tom like this. - *smacks Tom cause she doesn’t like him either!*
Snorting, Tom answered, "Of course he's not my cousin." – oops!
"Your... cat?" Georg asked, confused. He could understand maybe Tom meant sex kitten, but not an innocent airhead like Bill, especially not when Bill suddenly lived with him. - *grins* yes sex kitten!! *grins more*
"He's telling the truth Georg. And I'm sober." – why are we confessing to a drunk Georg?
the more Bill would pout and have a horrible time, the more they'd tease him and insult him and inform him that he was ruining their night. When they finally stepped out of the bar, Tom and Georg completely wasted, Bill was practically in tears from frustration and had the firm resolve that he would never go drinking, ever, ever again. - *pouts with Billa* Damn Tom and Georg are asses!
"How was it, Billabong?" Simone asked softly, using one of Tom's favorite nicknames, assuming it would be Bill's favorite too.
The catboy curled up beside his mother, and she draped an arm around him, petting his slightly mussed locks. It was more than natural for her to feel such motherly affection for Bill, and he had the type of effect on people that made them instantly attracted to him.
"Georg and Tomi made fun of me," he whimpered. "They aren't nice when they're drunk." – awh poor little Bill!
"I'm not a bother... and I'm not an idiot. Am I?" Bill muttered to himself. He feared that everything Tom thought about Bill that he kept to himself by day, had come out when his drunken mind was too stupid to keep the truth back. What if Tom was disgusted by Bill? What was Bill good for, anyway?
Bill silently cried himself to sleep. - *pouts* are you seeing what you are doing to your sweet little kitty who you love? Self absorbed prick! *smacks Tom upside the head*
Damien skidded to a halt, and crouched down beside the small kitten, which was cowering against the grimy wall of the alley. He picked it up, cradling the fragile animal in his arms. – Nice that he’s able to save Billa!
"There's the traitor!" – nice that they just wiped his memory and didn’t just kill him!
Bill wasn't human. Or so he assumed. No human was born like Bill was. But if he wasn't human, what was he? – yes what is he?
It didn't take a rocket scientist to figure out that Bill was being distant. Tom could see it, even as sick and half asleep as he was feeling. He made his way back to the room, seeing Bill still in his clothes, curled up on top of the duvet. – you broke him you big numb scull!
Before Bill knew it, Tom was wrapping his arms around Bill's waist, pulling him in for a hug. He freed one hand, wiping away Bill's tears. – well that’s a start to a good apology!
Tom exhaled slowly, rubbing Bill's back comfortingly, and the catboy wondered how Tom could possibly know exactly where his tense spots were. His other hand was gently caressing Bill's face, keeping more tears from falling at the same time. There was something different about the moment; they weren't cuddling just to cuddle, Tom was holding Bill to comfort him, and it made Tom realize there was something inside him for Bill that was more than just 'pet-master' affection. Much more. But whether it even toed the boundary between friendly love and true love, Tom had no idea. – uh-oh *waggles eyebrows*
"I love you, Tomi."
…"I love you too, kitten. Just get some sleep, I'll make everything up to you tomorrow." – oh god it just go sooooooooo soppy *giggles* it’s cute but oh go so soppy!
Date: 03/13/09 12:11 pm Title: Tipsy Tomi, Bashful Billa, and Gargantuan Geo
He licked along his upper lip, savoring the last traces of the creamy treat- or at least, to Bill, it was a treat. – ok that’s so cute that he drinking warm milk at a bar *giggles*
Bill wrinkled his nose, not fond of being likened to a Disney character. – me neither!
Confused, Bill risked looking up to the bartender, who was giving him a greedy smile. – hum? That makes me worry.
The bartender chortled at the catboy's adorable behavior, as the mug was lifted in two hands to meet the rosy lips of his customer. Of course he hadn't put anything in the drink; he wasn't that clever. However, now the delicate young man across from him was giving him ideas. - *squints to see if she can see anything between the lines* nope I can’t see anything yet!
As much as he loved being around Bill, it was nice to feel curves and see curly, smooth blonde hair for once. Another girl was hanging off his shoulders, and in front of him was another, eyeing the two girls on him with resent. – I know Tom is awfully cute but why is he so popular??
They were all so fake. And the only person in the entire club that Tom had ever considered naturally beautiful, had been left forgotten at the bar, with only a mug of warm milk and a much-too-friendly bartender for company.
Suddenly getting laid wasn't important at all anymore. – nice transition from fake to real…a little contrived but not painfully so. Well done in changing his mood but not doing it with a forceful hand! *nods in approval*
"Irish creme, kind of like milk, but it has other flavors in it, I think you'll like it. – hum I don’t trust this bartender!!! He makes me nervous is he just being nice and he’s interested or does he have darker motives???
"Heeey Tomi," he said with a happy smile, twirling in his swivel chair. – um yeah darker motives!
"I know that, but it doesn't taste like whiskey," he said, frowning at his glass. – That’s why I like Baileys too!
Go dance? No, dancing wasn't an option. Tom hated to think of what types of lecherous activities went on there, and didn't want his innocent kitty to be in the midst of it. – awh! His kitty huh?! lol
"Thank you for the company, Mr. Bartender," Bill said, turning his million watt smile to the mane behind the counter, and Tom felt a pang of jealousy. He wasn't worthy of Bill's smile. – no Mr. lecherous is not worth Bill’s big smile!
Still thinking about what Bill had said, Tom couldn't help but feel guilty. He had been ignoring Bill all day because he'd had Georg over, and then got rid of him as soon as they had arrived at the bar so he could flirt with some blondes who were faker than McDonalds' chicken tenders. And all just to get drunk and get laid, when he could be having a fun time with Bill, without the alcohol, the tits, and the bleached hair. – this is a much more subtle internal shift this one is much better!
"Not quite yet. We can if you want to, Billabong, but not just yet." – awh nickname alert!
Bill seemed to shrivel at this statement, knowing quite well what 'bringing a girl home' meant. – will he still hide under Tom’s bed when Tom brings a girl home? lol
Bill gulped, his eyes growing wide, as he studied the man's features. There was no doubt.
"D-Damien?" - oops
Date: 03/12/09 03:59 pm Title: Cuddle Free Zone
Tom was tilting Bill's chin upward, his fork full of lasagna, and it's final destination seemed to be Bill's mouth. - *giggles* ok that’s just too cute!
"Oh... oops," Bill said, embarrassed, and searched for a napkin to wipe it off. Tom however beat him to it, scraping it off with his forefinger, and stuck the finger in his mouth greedily to lick it away. – *raises eye brows* food play huh? *giggles*
You got the idea of the level of difficulty with lasagna correct. Well done…they are curel to offer that as his first food alone.
Bill hummed as he thought, wriggling his fingers in Tom's hand since he couldn't wriggle his toes as he walked. "Mmm, full tummy, nothing too strenuous," he said, rubbing his stomach to exemplify. – ok he’s still a cat on the inside.
"Yeah! What do you think I do when I get bored?"
"Uh, sleep, honestly," Tom admitted. "Wait... you mean, as a cat, you'd just... watch TV when no one was around?" – lol I’d love to catch my cats watching tv lol
"What?" Tom asked more desperately.
"Nothing, nothing..." Tom gave her the bitchy 'I'm not amused' look, and she sighed, letting her will bend. "Well come on, you guys are always cuddling, you took a bath together, and now you're feeding him lunch..." – uh oh her mom radar should be on full alert.
Tom blinked, confused, expecting a bigger punch line. "Of course it's cute. You can't involve Bill in anything and have it not be cute," Tom said gruffly, before realizing that that had probably been the least threatening sentence ever to leave his mouth in his eighteen years and one day. – lol
Tom just smiled, scooting close to the arm of the love seat, and then patted his lap. Bill caught on immediately, and crossed to Tom's side, sliding onto Tom's lap but making sure Tom could still see the television. He felt one arm loop around his waist, and Bill unfolded his legs, letting them mingle with Tom's. Bill slumped against the dread-head's body, turning his head so his fluffy mane of hair wouldn't be in the way either, and Tom took it as an open invitation to rest his chin in the open space. – Tom our cute little thug just invited a boy into his lap *snorts* um…ok we’ll pretend it’s not gay for the moment.
Tom was a bit too comfortable to move by then, Bill's weight and boney frame not registering at all. But he had the feeling he would have to move anyway, and sure enough, his precognitive skills turned out to be genuine. The doorbell rang – I have that kind of timing too! *eye roll*
"Hey, happy eighteenth. I'm taking you out tonight to celebrate, and no complaints alright?" Georg said after a masculine man hug, and jabbed a finger at Tom's chest.
Simone cleared her throat, raising an eyebrow at the brunette, who added hastily, "With Simone's permission of course." - *giggles* very nice detail!
Yeah, Georg was confused. – to say the least *giggles*
He was getting all kinds of weird feelings from this guy, and as soon as he and Tom had a private moment, Georg was damn well gonna get some answers, or else. - *giggles* this is fun!
Tom had a sneaking suspicion that his present was probably porn that he would watch once, fail at getting off to, and then Georg would keep for himself. However that'd been his 'gift' last year, so hopefully it was something different. - *eye roll and snickers*
Bill furrowed his brow; Tom's room had been fine last he'd seen, hadn't it? – mmhhh what’s Tom’s plan here?
"Your stuff," Tom said in a hushed voice as Bill walked in, and the latter frowned. Apparently Tom wasn't going to tell Georg. Bill sighed inwardly, he knew what that meant.
It meant he couldn't cuddle with Tom in front of Georg.
Dammit. – awh sad disappointment I know! *giggles*
Date: 03/10/09 10:09 pm Title: Snow White
this was soooo cute!
please please update!
Date: 03/09/09 03:31 pm Title: Snow White
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
i've been waiting FOREVER for this!
I DEMAND MORE
bitte bitte bitte?!
Date: 03/08/09 09:36 pm Title: Secrets, Secrets, Secrets
omg i love the part when bill fights with the cereal he sounds like such a little kid its adorable
Date: 03/08/09 07:59 pm Title: Snow White
wow!!!! i only started reading this story the other day cause i was bored, but i'm really glad i did because it is amazing. when the rents told me to get off the computer i couldn't wait to go back on and read the rest. great job!!! :D
Date: 03/08/09 07:49 pm Title: Snow White
I've been waiting for a new chapter for the, what was it, past three months? :P Anyways, thank you soo so much for getting this out, I really did enjoy reading this chapter. :)
Date: 03/08/09 05:14 pm Title: Snow White
I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCHH XOXOX
Date: 03/08/09 04:30 pm Title: Snow White
wow i like thisss! I'd never guess TOm could have magic too^^
continue soon ja?
Date: 03/08/09 12:22 pm Title: Snow White
What a great comeback! I thought you had forgotten this one! It was sooo cute!
Date: 03/08/09 06:33 am Title: Prologue
...Tom had decided that two things were absolutely truth: One, he was in love with Bill. Two, he was absolutely crazy... - put them together and u get ABSOLUTELY CRAZY IN LOVE huhuhu
wow, the perfect kiss.... *melts into a puddle of mush
*eeeeewwww...seriusly not touching those tomatoes...throw them away, u wont be needing them EVER!!!
Date: 03/07/09 11:33 pm Title: Snow White
you lost inspiration?
:(
shame.
this is an amazing storyy.
and when I saw a new update.
I literally SQUEE'd and happy danced.
x)
I love this chapterrr!
I love the lovey-dove-ness at the end.
:)
Date: 03/07/09 10:40 pm Title: Snow White
No, I'm pretty sure I was threatening you and I shall continue to do so regardless of the quality of your writing (You plot bunnies are still in a cage hanging from the ceiling of my dungon and I'm concidering not feeding them until I get more).
Although (sadly) I must admit that I could tell in your writing that you seem to have lost you passion for this story I must say that it's still amazing (b/c the plot just keeps getting better and better).
I LOVED the part about Tom having magic and that breaking Bill's curse! That's amazing!
And now Tom's gonna have to learn to use his magic. And there's still something going on w/ Gordon right? And what power does Bill have? Any?
LOVE you for this! Thanks for your (hesitant) compliance to my demands.
;)
Hekki
Date: 03/07/09 08:55 pm Title: Snow White
aaack please please please finish this. I love this story to pieces. And of all the places you left it.. But I just love the two of them like that.
Date: 03/07/09 06:57 pm Title: Snow White
Awww.
you know, i was just thinking about you the other day, and wondering when you were gonna update. LOL. Maybe i should think about you more often and you'll update everyday!
I really like your other fic better...the other chaptered one, LOL cant remember the name, but i like this one too, so CANT COMPAIN XD.
Thank you sooo much for updating, and that kiss was amazing! SO SEXY.