Date: 09/26/09 06:25 pm Title: Prologue - My former life rewritten
well, the start is very promissing, it sounds like the beginning of an interesting story... you should write the rest though, the only way to say for sure wheather a story is good or not is to read it to the very end... i think you have the talent to be a fictional writer, so you should finish this story and, if i might state my opinion, keep writing other stories, no matter the subject and characters... good luck :)
Date: 05/06/09 05:55 pm Title: Prologue - My former life rewritten
Oo my heart stopped for a sec xD Is Tom dead ? :O
Date: 05/18/08 11:57 pm Title: Prologue - My former life rewritten
this is very nice.
i like the story telling as your approach.
and i for one, would like to know their story. I do hope you continue this one.
Date: 05/18/08 03:10 pm Title: Prologue - My former life rewritten
that is really good and please continue, but is it supposed to be 1968 instead of 1989? im a lil confused
please continue tho
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :) and yes, it's supposed to be set in 1968, not 1989 ^__^