Date: 06/05/08 08:42 pm Title: Charlie 2/2
Interesting... So Bill has been seeing Charlie for quite a while then. I really want to know why he's the only one though, is Charlie a ghost...? Or something similar?
Another thing I like about this, is your characterisations Anne. I like the relationship the boys have, especially Bill and Tom. The way they pick on Georg is very similar to the way they act in interiews etc. Also, lol at childish David, it's a different portrayal to the norm in fanfic for him. Trying to think of con-crit, but I can't really at the moment... ^_^
Author's Response: Aw! You're too kind Emma! I've tried to write them as I see them. And that means that the twins have to pick on Georg and that Gustav have to be grumpy most of the time. lol at David too! I don't know why I wrote him like that. I just did! rnI love it that you ask questions! That's the whole point in the plot. To make people curious. The only ones who knows the answers to the custions are me and tink. I had to send her a copy of the story line because i needed her help with something. I'm really glad you like this! Your opinion means a lot to me!
Date: 06/05/08 08:25 pm Title: Charlie 1/2
...Oooh, I wanna know more about Charlie now! He's very interesting... What happened to him? why he can't tell Bill? Why he can't see himself? All very intriguing! I like how original this is Anne :) And it's well written too!
*Onto chapter three* ^_^
Author's Response: As I've said to tink in an earlier review. He's bound to be, Bill is the only person he has talked to in 11 years. There's kind of an explanation to why he can't tell Bill in chapter 5. Well, it seems like there's a lot happening in chapter 5 huh?rnI'm glad you think it was original. I was hoping to do something that hadn't been done already. Thanks Emma!
Date: 06/05/08 08:18 pm Title: Meet Bill
Ooh, I really liked the first chapter, Anne. I'm sorry I haven't read this before, now. I'm intrigued to know who this Charlie is... ^_^
*goes to read the next one*
Author's Response: I'm so honored that you find this interesting Emma! It's only an experiment though, to see if anybody would read it if I posted anything. Sorry that I kind of made you read it. ^_^
Date: 06/05/08 06:39 pm Title: Going Home
Its very interesting. More soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm halfway through chapter 5. so it should be up in a couple of days. ^_^
Date: 06/05/08 03:47 pm Title: Going Home
You know already that I like it and I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks! You're the best you know?
Date: 05/21/08 07:36 am Title: Charlie 2/2
charlie is soo creepy but in a very good way. can i have him please? ily.
Author's Response: When the story is finished he's all yours honey! Love you too! ^_^
Date: 05/19/08 11:33 am Title: Charlie 1/2
This is fantastic, darling :) Keep it up.
Author's Response: Aw, you liked it? Thank you SO much!
Date: 05/18/08 12:03 pm Title: Charlie 1/2
shit.
i was so excited to see this updated ;)
and dedicated to ME! oh gourd i love you
Author's Response: Ofcourse it's dedicated to you. You wrote me a whole oneshot at one point remember? This is the least I can do. I'm so glad that you like this!
Date: 05/18/08 11:28 am Title: Charlie 1/2
GIH!!! I love it! I seriously do! :D
AnnePanne kanne skrive bra...nne! ;D
Author's Response: Really? Oh Alva! That means the world coming from you!
Date: 05/18/08 11:12 am Title: Meet Bill
Oh, seeing how this is going, I'm almost sad it's a General :p
But I like it! I really do! ;D
Author's Response: Oh Alva.... I love you know... ^_^ It has to be a General, if there were somekind of pairing in it, it would draw the attention away from the main plot.
Date: 05/18/08 11:08 am Title: Charlie 1/2
Charlie is an interesting character...
Author's Response: He's bound to be. Bill is the only person he's talked to in... Well... I can't say that out loud yet... Thank you again! It means the world to me you know?!
Date: 05/17/08 12:52 am Title: Meet Bill
Please update!!!
Author's Response: Okay ^_^
Date: 05/16/08 08:41 pm Title: Meet Bill
omgomgomgomg i love this
MOAR PLEASE SOON ;_;
Author's Response: O_o Oh Lacey! Have I mentioned that I love you? *winks* More to come... I've finnished chapter two already so it should be up sometime soon.
Date: 05/16/08 08:38 pm Title: Meet Bill
Just in case you failed to read my e-mails properly - it's intersting ;)
...and I'll always have the patience to do those things for you
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie. It gets more interesting later on. *winks* And thanks again for the help..