Date: 05/17/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
strawberries... aw, it's so creative.
I love when it comes to things like ero-guro. It's much softer than it but I really love it :D
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 05/17/08 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
i dont know what to say.
i cant even breath..
i am all tears now
Author's Response: You don't need to say anything else ;) Thanks :)
Date: 05/17/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg... I was a bit shocked by this story o.o I've never read something like that before and I thought I could handle it, but, when I was reading it, I wanted to give up but I had to finish this and...wow...Great story O.O
Author's Response: Lol, yeah, it can be catagorized as weird. I know it is very violent, even brutal, and it's creeping me out that I can write something like that, too O.o I'm glad you finished it ;) Thanks :)
Date: 05/17/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG this fic was sooo well written. Loved this story even though it was heartbreaking to read even though it is just a fic. Loved the sex scene at the beginning with the twins. But what Lisle did to them afterwards was just horrible
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 05/17/08 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
OHHHH MYYYY FRRRIIICCKKKEEENNN GAAWWWDDD!!!! That scene with Tom and Bill (italics) was reaally hott!! Then when I read all the things Alex (er Lisle) was doing I nearly cried. This is EXTREMELY EXTREMELY EXTREMELY EXTREMELY WELL WRITTEN!! Seriously! Really great job! But now I gotta fricken kill that son of a b.......
Author's Response: Lol, thanks :D
Date: 05/17/08 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Tink. That was creepy, you got that right, and brutal. It was damn good though. Really well written and painfully descriptive at times... You've been watching too much CM, lol
Seriously though, this was really very good and I just love how you got this from strawberries, really creative. Definitely worth the wait!
Author's Response: Indeed, too much Criminal Minds for me O.o
Thanks :)
*runs off to youtube to atch more CM* Lol
Date: 05/17/08 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1
So sad...so cruel...But very well written! Amazing job, I'm telling ya! :))
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 05/17/08 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW!
I really don't know what to say. I'm the type of girl who loves happy endings but this was amazing. I really loved it. Awesome job, you should do more like this one.
Author's Response: Oh, lol, this one was a one off, nothing I've ever been thinking about to write more of :)
...but, thanks :)
Date: 05/17/08 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
This is remarkable. I mean. "Oh. Dear. Lord". I'm speechless.
A couple of errors, like you said. But this is amazing.
Gahhh
x
Author's Response: Indeed, reading 11,000 words of my own writing would have been too much, lol ;)
Thanks :D
Date: 05/16/08 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was very brutal. It's not my cup of tea, but it was a decent effort from you, and sometimes you've just got to write what your muses tell you too. :D One thing. I think you should add the Horror genre in your story info. And character death. Unless you were leaving those out on purpose.
Anyhow, kudos.
Author's Response: Character Death was left out on purpose, because it shouldn't be in there ;) And I thought I'd put Horror, lol O.o Oh, well, gonna put it now, if I haven't yet :) Thanks :D
Date: 05/16/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just really sad. You obviously spent hours on it so I aplaud you perseverence but honestly where did you get this idea?! It was really pushing it, even for me. Maybe b/c it seemed to possible. IDK. You did a really good job though.
Author's Response: The whole story is the effect of too much Criminal Minds for me; the original idea came to me while watching youtube vid Criminal Minds: Evolution of Reid, did not contain the sex scene, but two rapes, on both Tom and Bill, and even more violence; it devolped to a story in which an OMC (Alex, or Lisle) drugs Bill, and takes him away to his hotel room, where he rapes him while Bill is unconscious, and end with Tom barging in; and then it finally came to me to write a story that would be a mix of the two, while I was watching, again, Criminal Minds. It turned out longer than it had been planned, lol.
Thanks :)
Date: 05/16/08 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. i literally was shaking while i read this. very intense! this was extremely well written and really descriptive. i can't really think of anything else to say except that this was really really good! =]
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 05/16/08 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
ouch! poor boys
bit obvious but i dont like lisle!
cool story!
Author's Response: Thanks :)