Date: 05/21/13 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
i....loved it....my head is even making sick, twisted sequels ;)
Date: 03/16/11 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
D: oh.my.god you killed Tom
Date: 12/18/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really dont read stories like these but this was amazing. It was so real like you were really there. Very well dont i enjoyed mysealf. I can picture mysealf reading this again : )
Date: 09/21/10 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG O.o coool!!! it was interesting...
Date: 07/20/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this very much so!! Beautiful beautiful narrative. A perfect combination of blood, gore, BDSM and intimacy, sex and twincest. It couldn't be any better! The sudden cut in the end which left the readers to assume the ending for themselves was genius. I've always liked those kinds of endings even if they kill me. Your vivid use of descriptions and details is marvelous. You definitely have a blessed talent of writing violence and smut in such high levels. Most writers don't have that and you should be proud to have it. MAGNIFICENT fic. Definitely going to my Favorites.
Date: 05/05/09 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sooo, did he die? Or did he kill Lisle? What??????
Date: 01/18/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
This makes me cry every time I read it.
Seriously. It's beautifully written, but the words hurt. For some reason, I wish I were Bill. Not so that fucking scum could touch me, but so that Bill would be okay. And maybe save Tom and get out.
I want this story. Like, I want to own it.
However sick that is.
Rachelle
Date: 12/10/08 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Woah...that..was..um, really good o.o *blinks* I like these kind of stories for some reason..I'm so horrible!!! anyways,yeah. I liked it :]
Date: 10/05/08 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This needs a sequel
Author's Response: And you need to learn how to use HTMLs xD
Date: 08/25/08 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Crazy. I was turned on and then horrified. You wrote this very well and I enjoyed the read. I'm totially covered in goosebumps now! Great job.
Date: 08/10/08 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god ! ;O
Your a good writer! :)
Is this the end of the story?
Date: 08/09/08 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the way of how detailed it is. I just feel bad for the twins. Fuckin' Alex or Lisle whatever his name is...no offense.
Date: 06/25/08 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1
wow.. :o that's the only thing i can say right now... You're good. ^^
Date: 06/15/08 02:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I think I spent a lot of that fic on the verge of passing out because I kept holding my breath.
You should be so proud of your writing, putting such strong emotions into words and giving the reader the ability to feel it all is an incredible feat.
And now I must go fix my broken heart with something sickeningly fluffy.
Author's Response: You're okay now, though, aren't you? :)
Aw, -blushes- thank you! :D
Lmao, I hope that works :)
Date: 06/11/08 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1
O-M-G!
I don't know where I found the strength to review,it was FUCKING BRILLIANT!!
Sorry about that,I couldn't contain myself...
You described the character's feelings and thoughts so good.
*favorites story and gives Tink a ton of cookies*
Author's Response: -eats all the cookies- -rubs belly- Yum! Lol, thank you :D -licks- ♥
Date: 06/06/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
*remains speechless*
Okay, I'll try to write something coherent.
*First of all : WOW ! what a fic!
Second of all : congrats, you did a *really nice job, very well-written!
*Great build-up
*You described Bill and Tom's making love wonderful! It was hot and sexy.
*The rape and violence-part was also very well described. It was so scary. Because it seemed so real. I felt like I was in the same room as they were and I couldn't do anything. I felt like screaming. NOOOOOOOO !! I got really caught up in this fic.
Very nice job! Thumbs up!
(Hope you can make something out of this, English isn't my native language)
Author's Response: No worries, English isn't my native, either :)
And thank you for this wonderful review :) It made my day! ...well, night, seeing as it's already 2am xD
Date: 05/26/08 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tink!
Where's the fluffy person I know?
Oh my god!
I've been reading this with wide eyes!
It's fucking amazingly written.
But.
I'm pretending that Bill wakes up in Toms arms, hugging his teddy, and it was all a dream.
Is Tom dead or not, I'm rather confused.
Love it, unfortunatly.
Amazingly hot, for the first part at least.
Author's Response: Dunno, is he dead? :P
I'm so writing a sequel, so you just wait ;)
Date: 05/22/08 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Very well written and very powerful.
Although sad, I feel like reading it over and over again.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 05/21/08 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1
wow tink..just fucking wow. yeah. wow.
Author's Response: Interesting... -scratches head- :P
Date: 05/18/08 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my gosh, i'm so... sad/terrified. this story absolutely broke my heart. but in the amazingly good way. the beginning turned me into a puddle of goo. seriously, words can not describe how hot the sex scene was. but after that, oh my gosh, i feel like i died a little inside. however, despite the pain reading this story caused, i still think that you are an amazing writer. the plot is absolutely genius and i just couldn't wrap my mind around how realistic it was. seriously amazing, just incredible. :)
Author's Response: *pets the puddle of goo* ;)
See now, I should watch more Criminal Minds ;) They have this effect on me, lol
Thanks :)