Date: 05/18/08 08:44 pm Title: Forever with me
A banner would be cool. I really didn't like the IM conversation back and forth. It felt really wrong to me. They should have had that conversation through a closed door or something. Your descriptions of Tom's feelings are good though. Will Bill believe him if he tells him he wants him back? I think Bill would want it but he'd be skeptical. Update soon.
Date: 05/18/08 07:33 pm Title: Hell is cold.
So Im only on chapter 2 and the thole thing is confusing and moving a little fast. How did things get turned around so that it seems that Bill is the one that's done wrong when it should be the other way around? Bill had every right to yell at Tom and what he said wasn't even offensive. But I guess that's just the way I see it.
Date: 05/18/08 05:00 am Title: Hell is cold.
O My Fucking God! Can I kick Tom's balls?
Date: 05/18/08 03:31 am Title: Love The Lie.
i am gonna kick tom's ass until he tells bill that he loves him back ...
love this story update soon please
Date: 05/17/08 07:07 pm Title: Hell is cold.
:OO
whaaaat?!
tom's gonna get battered! *crazy eyes*
Author's Response: oh god.rnO.Orndon kill 'em!!rni need him for the twincest stories!rnXD
Date: 05/17/08 07:06 pm Title: Hell is cold.
fuck Tom is a real asshole... i wanna kick some shit out of his skinny body. 'coz WTF? i hate him because he caused so much pain to BiBi <333
Date: 05/17/08 10:21 am Title: I regrett you.
*tear* That was such a sad chapter. I was like "Yes! Hot twincest of the AU genera!" And then drooled over chapter one. Then chapter two came up and I perked up and was like, "It gets better?!" Then I read the chapter and a little bit of me died. So, you must come out with another chapter quick to revive that dead part of me, even if its just angst or drama.
Author's Response: sorry.rn-_-'rni've got the first four chapters pre-written.rnbut i'll throw in something good for you in chapter five, deal?rnhaha
Date: 05/17/08 10:07 am Title: I regrett you.
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
sad.... BUT STILL AMAZING
Date: 05/17/08 07:41 am Title: I regrett you.
ohmygosh!
tomi! :O
why would he be so cruel?!
*sobs hysterically*
hold me while i cry ='[[
Author's Response: oh, alright. dont soak my shirt though..rnhaha.rnit'll get worse before it gets better though.rn=[
Date: 05/16/08 10:06 pm Title: I regrett you.
I like this very much!!!
Poor Bill!! *glares at Tom*
Please update soon *puppy eyes*
Date: 05/15/08 04:50 pm Title: Love The Lie.
that was sweet :D
is it completed, or are you continuing?
*hopes for continuing* ^-^
Author's Response: continuing of course!rnwhat would i be if i caused you to suffer?rnC:rn
Date: 05/15/08 04:19 pm Title: Love The Lie.
that was both...hot and cute!!!x3