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Reviewer: screamtillyoufeelit Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 01/01

you should really make this into a chapter story, it would be really good

Reviewer: wenny Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/09 10:19 am Title: Chapter 01/01

Loved it!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/08 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 01/01

A demon hunter, an emissary of higher powers reduced to scraped knees and puberty; it was faintly ridiculous. - *giggles and groans* well yes human stuff gets in the way of a lot of stuff.

"I've noticed you watching me," Bill suddenly said and threw normal out of the window. - *cringes*

It was clear Bill had quite an interesting imagination, but the light was dimming, so he encouraged more. The fact that Bill seemed to lack true malice was adorably cute – get those paparazzi with flash bulbs!

And so he sat them down and told them everything. He told them about the powers on high; their/his/her/its (depending on your perception) messengers, the angels; the immortals that were not angels and not human; the demons; and mortal kind. He explained the balance between light and dark, good and evil and he explained Bill and Tom's place in it and the whole time the twins sat on the bed, holding each other close and listening to everything he had to say. – very subtle way to get that information across without actually having to explain it!

"How long have you been in love with me?" – I didn’t think Bill would let that one rest *eye roll*

It was time to face the music and he had no idea what would come next.- me neither want to write another one?

Reviewer: MarieCaroline Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 01/01

Really interesting...the story line as well as the ending.

I'm impressed.

Reviewer: caitykaulitzx3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/08 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 01/01

this is adorable,
you're an amazing writer[:

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 01/01

Omg. How do you come up with these things? I loooooovvvvvveeeee it!!!!! You are do creative. I'm sehr sehr sehr SEHR jealous! :$

The BJ from Gus to Bill was fruggen sexy beyond belief too! Wow.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoy my fics. I have great fun coming up with these things :).

Reviewer: Ryuu Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 01/01

The End? Damn. I wanted more.

Author's Response: Thank you :).

Reviewer: psychogirl5312 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/08 10:50 am Title: Chapter 01/01

ok i don't know what it is but your stories are always AMAZING!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoy my fics.

Reviewer: Allymarie1121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/08 10:43 am Title: Chapter 01/01

SOOOO amazing!

Gustav/Bill is my favorite pairing! and they are so rare!


AND THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY! that has been favorited!
keep going please!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased you liked the pairing. I enjoy all combinations of the boys ::g::.

Reviewer: pandapanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/08 09:53 am Title: Chapter 01/01

^_^ yay! I really like your writing style

Author's Response: Thank you :).

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/15/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 01/01

This was great! Bill and Tom could be angels, I suppose, if you look at them.

Well done, love! x

Author's Response: Thank you :). Fallen angels maybe; there's a bit of devil in both of them ;)

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