Date: 05/01/15 01:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg super freaking cute. Awwwwwwww. Well done. I like the idea for this little ficlet. :)
Date: 03/30/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww so sweet. I thought maybe one of the guys was away and they couldn't be together. This was cute and I like the way Tom indulged Bill and talked to him even though he could have hung up and said something like get over here and I'll talk to you or just go to sleep. Very adorable. I love good fluff.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 06/09/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
?????Interesting??????
Author's Response: Um, thanks.
Date: 12/01/08 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful and so cute! Aww! I can totally see them having the kind of those late night convos, when one of them can't really sleep. This is just so sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 07/02/08 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1
AW! They're rite next to each other? THAT IS JUST TOO CUTE.
Author's Response: Yep, just a few feet away from each other. :)
Date: 05/21/08 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think that the story is really sweet! I really enjoy just listening to other people's voices sometimes, too, regardless of what they actually say.
But shouldn't the lyrics say "Pass auf" instead of "Paus auf"?
Of course, Hiphop has always got a colloquial way to express things (for example "Jeden Tag mit mei’m Cap") but "Paus" means something entirely different than "Pass".
I wouldn't say "die moisten Caps" either, I'd say "die meisten Caps", but maybe it's just Samy's way to talk.
(I'm German, so you can trust me XD)
But it's so nice to see that you chose a song by Samy Deluxe in German. I really love that other people are willing to deal with my mother tongue because of Tokio Hotel!
Author's Response: Yes, the lyrics should say that. Apparently, my search didn't give me the correct ones. Thank you for pointing that out to me, and for doing it politely. I'll be sure to make those corrections.rnrnI chose a song by Samy Deluxe because he's one of Tom's favorite artists, not just because it was in German. Also, I've always loved the language. :)rnrnThank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 05/21/08 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
awww that was just so cute.
...awwww :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 05/14/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is so precious, sweet, adorable, fluffy, cute, romantic and any other word you can use describe awesome. very good story. =]
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that wonderful comment. :)
Date: 05/14/08 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was adorkable. *fluffy*
Author's Response: Hee! Thank you. :)
Date: 05/14/08 05:06 am Title: Chapter 1
it's so cute and aww
lol
like it (Y)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 05/14/08 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm sure I've had the pleasure to read this somewhere before this, but OH! don't I still love it. Is so sweet I have to see a dentist shortly.
Author's Response: I'm ever so thrilled that you read again and still love it. :D
Date: 05/13/08 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just absolutely precious, omg.
Author's Response: That's what I was going for, so thank you. :)