Date: 06/16/08 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Trusting
Im Sorry! I didnt mean i dont like it! I LOVE this fic! I REALLY do! And your one night in munich one! They aare the best ones i have ever read! Seriously! It was just getting abit slow but after thinking about it last night, you needed that scene to get Eva and Bill together. It all makes sence now i think about it!
Oooooooooh getting juicy now though! His name is Edwarddd! Classy! He seems allright so far in the flashback! But im guessing i gets far worse! Lol! I REALLY love this though! Do keep going!! I acctually look foward to it each evening! (is that really sad?! Looool!!) Haha!
Anyway, sorry for the last comment! I didnt mean to be negative!!! I take it back! Lol!
Keep going with it!
xXx
Author's Response: Don't worry about it!! I didnt think it was negative at all I was just letting you know that I knew it was slow XD... Thanks for all the comments, not just you, but everyone. I'm so glad you like it lol, to me it's just a load of rubbish XD
Date: 06/16/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Trusting
more please...i freakin love this fic...i wish i coukd write this well...mehr wenn du kannst bitte...
Date: 06/16/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Trusting
eva has really changed since bill saw her past its good:) i love how you write it and the fact that we get to see more into Eva's past.
Date: 06/16/08 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Trusting
oooo ooooo oooo im excited! cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06/16/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Emails and Kisses
that had me speechless and breathless. lol
YOudid a good job on the sex scene. I wasnt expecting it to be eva and bill thought so bravo!
Date: 06/16/08 01:15 am Title: Chapter 30 - Emails and Kisses
haha, sorry! that was my comment about needing more detail- i really wasn't trying to be an ass, just a smartass... lol
but i think this went very well then! Bravo! if i could make an observation: they were a little talkative-but i think this works actually cuz it's bill... and well... he loves to talk, hehehe...
ok, i've babbled on enough, i'm really bored tonite....
btw: did ur mother beta this one too, and if so, did she comment? lol
ok, now i really am done, i swear
Author's Response: Mom beta'd this a while ago... BEFORE i added in the sex... so technically she didnt XD. I dont think i'll be leting her beta THIS kind of chapter for a while :P
Date: 06/15/08 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Emails and Kisses
I dont mind not having detailed sex scenes! I think its fine without them! Missed the update yesterday! Your stories are AMAZING! I decided to try to comment on every chapter of this one! I love it so much! I dont want to seem like im telling you what to do, but i kinda think maybe it needs to move on abit?! Maybe im just bitter about them getting B and T but not me! Haha!
Anywayyyy! Keep going with the updates! Love it!
x
Author's Response: I know it's slow... the next few chapters will be more explaining of Eva's past. I hope it's not TOO slow that people are not losing interest XD I just wanted to get my point across...
Date: 06/15/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Emails and Kisses
Wow!It's getting hot in the vampire family! Need to have more!
Date: 06/15/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Emails and Kisses
O_O!! Heilig Scheisse!!!
update soooooooob!!
xoxox
Date: 06/15/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Emails and Kisses
whoa! its about darn time those two FINALLY did something about all that built up "tension" lol! and by the way, i think your sex scenes are fine the way they are!
Date: 06/15/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Emails and Kisses
Oooh more more more!!! xD
Date: 06/14/08 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Lessons
Lmao!! Tom!!
update soooooon!!
xoxox
Date: 06/13/08 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Lessons
ooo..feisty..xD
UPDATE!
Date: 06/13/08 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Lessons
LOL!
I missed your update yesterday!!
Keep writing!!
x
Date: 06/13/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Lessons
Still love this story. Love the lessons, glad they are getting along now, short of :-p
Wonder if the vampires that turned Eva will come back, got a feeling he might ;-)
Update soon!
Date: 06/13/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Lessons
vwahahahahaha bill shot tom. Lol I love this story. Update soon.
Date: 06/13/08 01:16 am Title: Chapter 27 - Knife Point
ooooooh tom tied up to a bed *slaps self* STOP FANGIRLING!
very good chapter-again! can't wait for what happens next-again!
you rocked my socks-again!
Date: 06/11/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Weak
poor eva at first she seems so cruel but realy she is just as vulnerable as anyone else
Date: 06/11/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Weak
awwwwwwwwww!!!
update sooooon!!
xoxox
Date: 06/11/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Weak
Sweet chapter! Now I like her. She's better whan she's "human".