Date: 06/28/11 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awwwwh! I love the ending! Great work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. ^^ I'm glad you like it.
Date: 06/28/11 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Kelly's such a whore. I'm glad that Tom put her in her place.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. ^^ She is a whore indeed. :P
Date: 04/07/11 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
LUVS IT!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Date: 07/10/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww, this was my fav one-shot from the yabbie forum and I'm glad you re-wrote it as a 2-chapter story! It's so awesome! :D
Author's Response: Thanks Mimi! I'm glad you like it! :D
Date: 06/29/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
and they wrote a fantastic song :P
nice nice
Author's Response: Thanks Arianh! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing both chappies XD More reviews, more dots! :D
Date: 06/29/08 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
:O:O
i read this songfic before and it got to me...this story is amazing, it calls out my emotions, don't ask me why
great job
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much Arianh! I'm glad I got to touch people with what I wrote, the song touches me whenever I hear it. I'm surprised you could still feel that way after reading the Lesbian Feminist fic XD
Date: 06/08/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was a flawless piece of writing! This is exactly what a one-shot should be, and you tied in the story with the conclusive song very well. Great flow, strong characters, and wonderful idea!
If I had to offer one suggestion, maybe it would be just a tad more descriptions for Kelly... even though I do believe it was absolutely perfect without!
Author's Response: Thank you Mary! *feels flattered* I decided to keep Kelly's description low on purpose, because the story is more about Bill's pain after she cheats on him. And she was just a bitch... XD I wanted to keep her vague... I can't really explain it, I hope you get it anyway! XD
Date: 06/01/08 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Woow Koos... That's is simply Amazing with big A ;)
I loved it so much! :D
You like, got every detail in that little bit!!
Really amazing! I tell you!
Author's Response: Aww thanx Linn! I'm glad you liked it so much! :D
Date: 05/18/08 03:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow!
One of the best hets I've read.
Love it!
Great job, Koos... =D
Author's Response: Woohoo thank you!! :D
Date: 05/13/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I know I am late, Koos, I know!!!
Don't shout at me!!!
Anyway, I have to admit that this is waaaaay better than YaBBie's!
Great! ^_^
Author's Response: Ok, ok I won't shout at you :P Thanx! I also agree it's better than Yabbie's, but I kept that other one deliberately short. Here, I could go all out! XD
Date: 05/12/08 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm, excellent! Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Date: 05/12/08 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a lovely interpretation of the song, cariņo.
Bill doesn't need her. He deserves someone like the girl I've got.
Author's Response: Awww you're so sweet, baby! *squeezes you to death*rnrnThank you so much for reviewing!