Date: 02/28/10 02:13 am Title: Truly Unfair
I was listening to Hear You Me by Jimmy Eat World as I read this and almost bawled my eyes out at the end.
Date: 08/17/09 12:40 am Title: Truly Unfair
woah...even though I knew it was just a story I couldnt help but cry a little....and I NEVER cry at what im reading....The total shock and numbness totally came across...you could tell he was just wanting to wake up and realize it was a nightmare....you have a great gift for atmosphere in your writing, please continue!
Date: 08/17/09 12:39 am Title: Truly Unfair
woah...even though I knew it was just a story I couldnt help but cry a little....and I NEVER cry at what im reading....The total shock and numbness totally came across...you could tell he was just wanting to wake up and realize it was a nightmare....you have a great gift for atmosphere in your writing, please continue!
Date: 07/01/09 10:22 pm Title: Truly Unfair
Aww, I just read it, and I feel like I'm about to cry! Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
Date: 05/22/08 07:17 pm Title: Truly Unfair
oh my god thats sooo sad!!!! but beautifully written. its a really good story (aside from the fact that tom dies :( )
Date: 05/22/08 07:17 pm Title: Truly Unfair
oh my god thats sooo sad!!!! but beautifully written. its a really good story (aside from the fact that tom dies :( )
Date: 05/11/08 09:49 pm Title: Truly Unfair
Good story! I personally think though that if Tom really died, then Bill would go with him, and vice versa. But anyway.
Author's Response: I'm thinking of continuing it, for another chapter or two. One from Tom's point of view for the crash and then bac to Bill and the offcial after shock.
Date: 05/11/08 08:19 pm Title: Truly Unfair
OMG im crying! these death fics always get to me and i insist on continuing to read them... i loved it :'(
Date: 05/11/08 04:57 pm Title: Truly Unfair
I'm crying, and.. Omg, this is beautiful in a.. heartbreaking kinda' way..
Date: 05/11/08 04:46 pm Title: Truly Unfair
*cries*
Date: 05/11/08 04:19 pm Title: Truly Unfair
Oh my god.
That was so sad.
*tries to stop tears from spilling*
T^T