Date: 09/23/08 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Omg i wonder what will happen next.
Date: 06/07/08 10:51 am Title: Chapter 6
aww :D This was cute.
Date: 05/25/08 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
You're damm right!!! Hope it will be hooooooot, that it will make us all sweat xD
LOL
Don't take too long please
Date: 05/25/08 07:17 pm Title: Reflection is what you want
"I watched him walk away. The water dripping down his back and to his…(clears throat)."
LOL
Make super hot next time
Date: 05/25/08 07:02 pm Title: intro
I Love spin the bottle, best game ever (you can see why xD)
LOL
Date: 05/19/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
i think this is an amazing story and that you should keep it up!
FANTASTIC!
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I don't liek this Jade kid...i kinda wanna beat him up! lol
Date: 05/19/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
PLEASE update SOON!!!
Date: 05/19/08 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
wonderful chapter!! more soon??
Date: 05/19/08 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
im liking it :)
Date: 05/16/08 12:51 am Title: Reflection is what you want
moremoremore! please! omg im hooked! please!!! morrrrreeeee! more! ok... i think you getthe point, this story is amazing
....more!!!
Date: 05/14/08 09:56 pm Title: Reflection is what you want
OMG! I loved it! I could totally see Bill looking like a wet kitten!
Date: 05/14/08 08:28 pm Title: Reflection is what you want
love this great job!! Billa is going to cave soon I can just feel it :D keep working on him tom ;)
Date: 05/14/08 04:51 pm Title: Reflection is what you want
jeeej, you made a longer chapter :D
a bit confusing, the POV-changes, but also funny! love this story, keep going ;) :D
Date: 05/14/08 03:13 pm Title: Reflection is what you want
More !!!
Date: 05/14/08 02:43 pm Title: Reflection is what you want
Cute =)
Date: 05/14/08 02:19 pm Title: intro
i like it...
no noo nooo i LOVE it :P
update soon please
Date: 05/14/08 01:49 pm Title: Reflection is what you want
update soooon :-D
Date: 05/13/08 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like it! :D Just, try and write some more comma's(sp?) in between the bits were they are talking. Besides that, its great (:
Date: 05/12/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
your welcome :D I love how have written jade he fits the part like a glove great job ^__^
Date: 05/12/08 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
nice!
this is really good darling, both fun and hot at the same time
my favorite parts so far are Tom's dirty thoughts especially the comment on how he presumed Bill was wild in bed...oh and the last part in this one when he goes 'his body, his hips, his...ok can't get carried away' rofl ;) great
hope you'll update real soon because I want more of this
pretty pretty please *bambi eyes*
love luce