Date: 04/08/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 5: Confession
the story in it self is really good, but it's really annyoing with the german frases. cause they're not correct. i speak german, and you don't say "kann sie warten" in german, you only say "Kannst du warten" cause you only say "sie" to teachers, royal people, policemen, etc. just pointing out.
Date: 07/03/08 05:24 am Title: Chapter 9: Desperation
"Just that..." That what? HUH? OH, gosh you're evil, plain and utterly evil. Well, one of my favorite chapters so far, keep it going this way and I'll give you a chocolate cake :D
Author's Response: lol this one is kind of on hold until I can get my computer back... which is in California with my mom until the spring...
Date: 07/03/08 12:17 am Title: Chapter 9: Desperation
cute loved it keep up the good work update again soon
Date: 06/17/08 12:07 am Title: Chapter 8: Nothing Stays Hidden Long
Hmm, not much happened in this chapter. Are they going to tell. It's probably not the best idea.
Date: 06/01/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 7: Manicure and... skirts?
awesome!
update soooon!!
xoxox`
Date: 05/12/08 10:45 am Title: Chapter 2: Introduction To Bill’s Life
Ok, first of all, a LOT of German grammar problems:
Not "Gehen nicht!" - "Geh nicht!"
Not “Gehen Sie weg, Bill!” - "Geh weg, Bill!" (Sie is for Older people, or plural)
But quite fun!
Author's Response: Yeah I kind of figured I was going wrong with the German somewhere, but I don't know much, and I'm basically teaching myself, so I really don't know how the sentance structure goes... so that would be why it was off...
Date: 05/11/08 12:26 am Title: Chapter 5: Confession
cruel place to stop. Update soon. I'm really sad bill reacted that way. But not suprised. It's more realistic than most of the other stuff I've read, and supprisingly new.
Date: 05/10/08 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: Afterparty
I hope Tom tell's the truth and doesn't beat around the bush.
Date: 05/10/08 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: Afterparty
Oh man! What will Tom do!?
Date: 05/09/08 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: Introduction To Bill’s Life
Once again, I adored it =)
Date: 05/09/08 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: Introdution To Tom's Life
Loved it. ♥