Date: 05/11/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ugh, it didn't send all of my last review. So, this is what I meant.
I laughed sooooooo hard at that line, my dad thought I was going crazy.
Author's Response: tion to make youi laugh even harder..actually this story is kind of based in real life.there is a guy in my school like Tom. And my middle name is actualyl audrey 0_0rnhahah well i smashed the guys with a rugby ball earlier.."its an accident" rn
Date: 05/11/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
“Bushido was sent home cos his balls were smashed...”
Date: 05/11/08 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
gr8
its toally kl
awesome
update soon
i lvoe it
ly
xx
Date: 05/11/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
'e's balls were smashed' NICE ONE!!XD LOBVE I!!!!
Date: 05/11/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 2
I'd be willing to beta for you... If you haven't found one already.
PS. I'm not one of the site's beta's because I didn't want the full commitment of always having something to do.
Author's Response: wow great news for me then..how can I contact you? i just post ch3 maybe you could help in the next ones.rnmissmod had alr offered.so i ll see we can work things out:P
Date: 05/10/08 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww upadte soon plz
100/100
ly
xx
Author's Response: i hope i can get featured :P well its hard tho..rnthanks :)
Date: 05/10/08 12:56 am Title: Chapter 2
omg this is getting intesting *sorry i can't beta for u!*
Author's Response: its alright:) as long as you review for me :P xoxo
Date: 05/10/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter 2
NOOOOOOO
what what what?
Author's Response: waht?! 0_o
Date: 05/09/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
very interesting ;)
Author's Response: so did you like it :) ??
Date: 05/09/08 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sooooo good!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 05/09/08 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
AMAZING ! ! !
like always.
talented writer over here,
CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
lmao toms fat in this story!
aha. sort of hard to picutre. but deffinatly caught my attention to want to read more!
SOO. POST MORE SOON :)
Author's Response: yes..and we need some hardore stuff!haha
Date: 05/09/08 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1
lol, its aaaalllwwaaayyys about what the girls think!XD i love it
Author's Response: you got it ;0)
Date: 05/09/08 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
i know its hard to imagine tho xD
Date: 05/09/08 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like how Tom is fat in it. MOAR
Author's Response: haha thanks :) please BETA FOR MY LIFE!!shoudl i send you the next chapters??