Date: 06/24/08 05:57 am Title: Chapter 7
wow!! i love it!
i can`t wait fo` za necst chap!
keep goin`!!!
Date: 06/06/08 05:25 am Title: Chapter 6
wow!! i love it! more pls!
Date: 05/19/08 11:20 am Title: Chapter 2
HHAAHAHA Bushido!!!
Rofl
Lmao
XD
Date: 05/19/08 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
HEY Demi!!! Can't tell by the name but its Makayla :D GREAT story, I love the "I am a fat ass right now!I can't fit in my clothes anymore even though they were supposed to be oversize!" line
i'll keep on reading
Date: 05/16/08 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
ooh!
imagining tomi fat is really funny lookin'!
now i feel bad. -hangs head in shame-
plz add!
Date: 05/16/08 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, getting the correct word is nice. :)
Date: 05/16/08 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, mischievous smile works much better than an evil look. Sorry for late message, I went on a spur of the moment trip. [almost 1600 miles total.]
Author's Response: of course.rnsometimes i jsut need time to get the correct word :P
Date: 05/14/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
haha, niceness! I love this story, and I love the last three lines of this chapter!
Date: 05/14/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
aww cute ^^
I love your story ^^ Audrey and Alison (am I right??) are great ^^ want to be like them ^^
Author's Response: Audrey and Alicia :Drn
Date: 05/14/08 07:50 am Title: Chapter 3
lllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkeeeedddd it
alot
great chapter!
Date: 05/14/08 07:29 am Title: Chapter 2
bushido in this fic too ??!! wow now thats interesting (you know how i feel about bushido right??!!)
poor tomi ...you really made me sad with that guitar thing ...
i really wonder how his face will look like when he s fat !! ?? ...
i realllllly like this fic ...its soo cute
and thank god no one s bullying bill in the school this time ...poor tomi ...
bill should help tomi more ...
and that was nt a good way to impress a girl tomi ^___^ ...i cant believe he can lose his skills in that someday
Author's Response: im glad you liked it :Drnthe story is realaty based..the story had nto ended yet..the guy who is Tom really exists..and he likes me 0_o tho he's not that fat._.rni cant spoil to you what happeing to him..just read on !!!
Date: 05/14/08 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG TOMi FATTTTT !!!! great idea for a fiction ....hahaha poor tomi
how can they get kicked out of their own band !!!!
ahhhhh ...i can never imagine that in real life though ...
great idea really
Author's Response: well that what happend to me and ginger..i started our band a yar ago and then my band mate did that. well thats not the band im in now...rnbut they took our name,shows,and all the shit.rni only left becos i felt liek there is no point staying without my twin
Date: 05/14/08 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooo, evil look should I be afraid?
Author's Response: maybe i shold have said a mischievious smile lol
Date: 05/13/08 07:33 am Title: Chapter 4
well he need to chaznge right?
Date: 05/12/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm kind of scared. I'm wondering why there's this huge 'HE ADMIRED IT.' But other than that, I like this chapter. ^-^
Author's Response: he needs higheer self esteem. you ll get it later on *evil look*
Date: 05/12/08 11:42 am Title: Chapter 4
this sounds so gr8
update soon
luv it
100/100
ly
xxx
Author's Response: im happy you liked it. thanks :) plaese promote it for me if you don tmind:P
Date: 05/12/08 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, it is pretty classic, but I was pretty proud of myself because I can never aim a ball. My name's Melina. I have two [and a half] older brothers. They know pretty much nothing about what I do when I'm on the computer. [Which is like... All the time.] I've tried writing reality based stories, but for me, it wound up pretty boring. Heh, my brothers are pretty stupid. One's in jail [I'm driving 800 miles tomorrow to go see him too.] and the other is a pain in the ass. But the half brother of mine, I don't know.
Author's Response: wow you are a great sister..i hope this story will spice up something for you :)rn
Date: 05/12/08 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1
lol, I can totally imagine it. I kicked a ball and hit my old PE teacher in the balls... Three times in a row... I honestly didn't mean to either. Granted, he's now the vice principal so I have to go visit him a lot more often.
Author's Response: aww deareast...hahaha thats classicrnmy name is Demi btw. i m acutally having a bit of troubel wiritng this sometimes.i have a twin sister if you didnt know..well she found out that i was writing somethign liek this and now she wants to be in it0_0 so i had to put us in there..well since the story is kind of reality based, i think itll be fine..the guy as TOm in my school had lots 2 kgs in a day...he came to me and he was so fucking excited.