Date: 08/27/08 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
Glad to see an updated ^^
Great chapter ;-)
I glad that Bill told Tom. It shows that he is willing to trust Tom enough to know the hurt that lies in his heart. I bet that Bill feels something lifted from his chest now that he could finally tell someone.
I think it will help them getting a lot closer now to ^^
"That's how he fell asleep, his hand on Bill's waist and his heart heavy, but filled with a purpose: to make Bill happy again."
Isn't Tom a sweetheart and I'm sure in time he will do just that ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter, I love to see how there relationship will bloom. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! :D what a sweet review <3 Tom will help him, he will ;)
Date: 08/27/08 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/27/08 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
awww that is heartbreaking but its good he actually told someone please update again soon please lolz
Author's Response: Yes, we all know letting out things is good :) for what's to come next, keep reading ;)
Date: 08/27/08 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
Well, now Tom knows the whole story. Poor Bill, is his mom ever going to make an apperance in this? Or Marina's mom?
I hope Bill will let Tom make him happy.
Still, poor Bill. Did he sue the idiot driving? Just curious.
Author's Response: I bet he didn't even know who the bastard was, unfortunately D: he wouldn't be still alive, otherwise. We aren't planning on adding any mother to the story though ;) just Tomis ^^ who'll be a hell of a sweetheart! :D thank you.
Date: 08/27/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
*sniff* Poor Billa really does have a hard time of it. D:
Author's Response: *sigh* good thing there's Tomi there then ;D thank you ^^
Date: 08/27/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
well its a relief to finally know what happened to her, but damn. thats horrible, i dont know if id be able to be strong enough to go on after that. i really like bill's strength in this story, im sure its insanely hard to live through something like that, mentally i mean. this chapter was really good. it was kind of simple but the air is now cleared so i feel like it created a path for a new chapter in their relationship. update again soon!!
Author's Response: You girl have a psycology degree! X3 because you've read our minds ;D that's exactly the juice of it. ^^ thank you for your compliments, we hope you'll keep reading ;)
Date: 08/27/08 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
It is, thank you.
I bet Bill will feel alot better in the morning. Everyone needs to let it go once in a while.
Author's Response: Oh yes, he will :) and you'll find that out in the next chapter as well! :D so keep reading ;)
Date: 08/27/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter :'O I hope you continue soon!
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thank you very muchhh ;D we will!
Date: 08/22/08 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
cool story, plz update soon
Author's Response: Thank you :) we will try to ^^
Date: 08/16/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
hmmm, i like this story. i look forward to seeing where you take it. its interesting. keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: Thaaank you :)
Date: 08/10/08 07:05 am Title: Chapter 9
awww pls write more!!
Author's Response: We sure will :) thank you ^^
Date: 08/10/08 12:40 am Title: Chapter 9
YET?! Poor Bill though, his wife... oh man that must kill.
BUT HE HAS TOM NOW!
Author's Response: OH YES HE DOES! :D thank you ^^
Date: 08/09/08 02:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww that chapter was cute. The back look and the whole child thing was interesting. I think real bill would be good with kids so I love that little bit there. Hopefully more tom in the next chapter :D LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! We're honoured you appreciate how we've mixed Bill's life ;) more Tom to come, promise!
Date: 08/08/08 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aww. That was awesome. Poor Billa about him having no children. Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you darling :) Billa is a sweety, isn't he? ^^
Date: 08/08/08 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
:} i can totally see Bill with a GAGGLE of kids!
Author's Response: Eheh X3 thank you!
Date: 08/08/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
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I'm really sad for Billa right now...loving your story by the way. I couldn't read the whole thing and just leave not leave you a decent amount of reviews. ::hugs::
Author's Response: Oh read it slowly, when you can :) we don't mind, as long as you like it X3 thank you ^^
Date: 08/08/08 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
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So sad. poor Billie ;__;
I hope him and Tom will get together ;D
Can't wait 'til i get some more. so please update as soon as possible! :D
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you :D
Date: 08/08/08 10:36 am Title: Chapter 9
aww poor Bill, he will a good father if he has his own kid
and i hope Tom can have a chance to fill in Bill's
update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you :) you're so kind looking out for Bill X3
Date: 08/08/08 09:58 am Title: Chapter 9
owh Bill is so good with kids isn't he ;-)I felt for him, I hope that it will look up for him ;-)
I actually wonder what happened to the baby that his wife had, did she had a miscarriage? Or did the baby die when she died in that car crash since Bill doesn't have any kids. ^^
"That very answer of Bill left Tom wondering whether he’d ever get a chance with the mysterious man he had fallen so hard for."
I'm sure he does stand a chance, he just have to be patient, Bill needs to let him in his heart ;-)
Anyway I adore this story and I can't wait for the next chapter so updated soon ^^
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! We love long reviews where people really say what's in their minds :) first of all, thank you so much for yours! Well, let's just say that poor baby died with poor wife. :/ and Tomi... well, we'll see whether he'll stand a chance or not ;)
Date: 08/08/08 06:56 am Title: Chapter 9
ooooh,,, I don't like it when Bill is sad,,,
I wonder when he is going to open up to Tom and tell him about everything,,,his wife and stuff,, I want to know what happened to her and her baby,,,
^^Bill and kids = Cuteness!
I'm wondering why Tom wasn't feeling at ease in the park,,,
More! X
Author's Response: Ohh, I LOVE it when the audience has questions! X3 here, let me answer. Bill is a very shy and close man, due to everything that had happened in his life, but don't worry, when the right time comes he will open up to Tomi :) what happened to his wife is pretty easy: the cause of her death was said in the Certificate of Death - Immediate Cause: Head Trauma; they were in a car accident, that was why Bill was so agitated when a car spend in front of them one day, and that's the reason for the scars on his body. I hope everything's clearer now :) and Tomi was not at his ease because he doesn't REALLY love kids X3 ...now, who does? :O I don't XP thank you! ^^