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Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 08:36 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

;o
OMG NEIIIN!

Mehr, bitte. o_o

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 08:29 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

.......... O___O

*sobs with Tom*

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 05:31 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

Oh dear god. Poor little Bill :(
This is spellbinding.

Reviewer: Ravyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 05:15 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

Wow....just, wow. No other words can describe this story nor the heart wrenching and brilliant way it has been written. You portray everyone's feelings so tangibly, I can feel their anguish and their pain. Tears sprung to my eyes as I read this and the description of the video they were watching was almost too painful to read. Seriously amazingly written and incredibly addictive.
Looking forward to reading more of this!

Reviewer: kris10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 05:06 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

aaah, This is so sad. I almost had to cry when I read this. I want to know what happens next. I hope that Bill's kidnapper die an very painful dead :p
Update soon, I love this story! ;-)

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 04:58 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

No... omg... Go on!

Reviewer: kazenoarashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 04:51 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

I'd already suspected what happened to Bill from the first chapter, but this still breaks my heart *sniffles*

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 04:27 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

O.O ............................................ OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Dizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 04:18 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

oh....my gosh...BILL!!!! no. poor baby. oh i want to cry!!! why would this crazy guy do this???!?!?!? *dies*

Reviewer: liebetub Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 04:16 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

Bill has been kidnapped, and now raped...
Poor little Bill:'(
Tom must save him!!
Please let Tomi save Bill^-^

Reviewer: Ciamore Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 03:41 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

Oh my God, when I got the e-mail that this had updated I screamed at the top of my lungs and went as fast as my internet could take me.

God, this chapter killed me. So short yet so.. Emotional.

The pleading really hit home for me, but I didn't break down until I read the "Tomi!" That just broke my heart in two.

God, so wonderful!

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/08 03:39 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.

*screams*

I'm going to have a fit. That really tore me to the quick. Poor Bill... Just... just know you've rendered me speechless.

Reviewer: Redrabbits Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 11:52 am Title: Saturday 8:00 A.M.

NNNOOOO!!! WHY DOES IT STOP HERE?????Great work though. Keep it up.

Reviewer: Soltseig Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 03:13 am Title: Saturday 8:00 A.M.

Oh my god o_o

I really like the short, sporadic chapters even if it kills me wanting more..

Reviewer: br_in_a Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 03:17 pm Title: Saturday 8:00 A.M.

What! are you crazy? you can't just end it like that? Give me more, i need it XD
But it's so great, I love the story. What are they doing with Bill? tell me, tell me, tell me! AAARG I'm going mad

Reviewer: Toasty Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 02:20 pm Title: Saturday 8:00 A.M.

Froggy you've outdone youself this time. Its a really great suspenceful story. Almost like CSI or Law and Order xD. -Toasty

Author's Response: Strangely, I don't even watch CSI and Law and Order. Suspense shows and movies kill me. Thanks for the complement though. xD

Reviewer: La_Sjoeka Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 02:01 pm Title: Saturday 8:00 A.M.

love this story

Reviewer: taschatokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 04:34 am Title: Saturday 8:00 A.M.

OMG PLEEEASE MORREEE!!

Reviewer: taschatokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 04:24 am Title: Friday 3:00 P.M.

I didn't get the email saying this had been updates ;_;
LOVED IT!!

Reviewer: paarthea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 02:45 am Title: Saturday 8:00 A.M.

eeeee, scary. i'm so scared for bill, although most of the bad stuff has probably already happened to him we just don't know about it, i feel really sorry for tom, poor kid. please update soon!

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