Date: 05/22/08 07:21 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
Can you please rescue bill?! This is gettin a bit too painful. update soon.
Author's Response: I think it's been dragged on about as long as anyone can stand. Like I said, only a few more hours. I'll update soon.
Date: 05/22/08 07:11 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
Oh please bring Bill back to Tom! you're an amazing writer!
Date: 05/22/08 07:08 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
This story is so heart-breaking. I can't wait to see how it ends.
Date: 05/22/08 07:07 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
awwww i'm already crying... damn i wanna find that dickead and kick some shit out of him... *adding to favorites
incredible
Date: 05/22/08 07:00 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
My heart is totally breaking for Tom :(
Date: 05/22/08 06:48 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
Wow. All i can say is that I cant wait for the next update. I'm on the edge of my seat every time you update, god. T.T
Date: 05/22/08 03:33 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
Absolutly perfect.
Date: 05/22/08 01:35 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
OMG!!! I follow ths story and it´s absolutely one of the best on this site. It can't end soon, I wanna know exactly what happens in the future :p I want Bill to survive and come home to Tom and after that you should write about when he's home :D How Bill feels and his way "back to life", helped by Tom :) Just a wish from me because I like this one so much!
Date: 05/22/08 10:27 am Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
OMG
I'm still here, i read and read and read all over again...I'm getting crazy!! You know what, i just can't quit the story, lol !! i'm still a bit disturbed, okay, VERY VERY disturbed. I just can't erase some horrific images of Bill off my mind. something worse than "saw" or over horror movies. It's playing in my head again, non stop. And i really feel sick. I think, you just made all of us thinking we're in Tom's place and you play with our emotions. That proves how talented you are...Dod, I think i'm talking nonsense, do I?
It's not my fault, it's yours! if you could post chapter 8 please? I'm in agony here *on her knees*
(Did i mention i'm french? So don't be surprised if there's something you didn't get in everything i said,lol.I'm trying hard not to think in french and make french structured sentences)
well, i'm leaving now or else i might turn insane just imagining things!
Author's Response: This story is driving me crazy too. The scary thing is, all the images are in my head. I don't write all of what is in my head down because it would just be too much if I did.
Date: 05/22/08 10:14 am Title: Saturday 9:00 A.M.
oh, my review just disapeared while i was writing it. Whatever, BRAVO for that great story,i'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Poor Bill, and Tom...Er...I have a question, you didn't say much(or not at all)about their mother's reaction. I know, it maybe was the last thing on tom's mind to call her,but surely she heard something about what's goind on?
Your story is very realistic, my eyes are still sore from crying.
Merci de partager une si belle histoire, j'espère lire davantage.
Bon courage à toi!
Author's Response: I've thought several times of bringing in the parents. I've written paragraphs explaining where they are and what's going on, but they seem to detract from the dramatic tension of the chapters and I always end up taking them out. I suppoe the readers will just have to fill in the blanks themselves when it comes to how the parents react.
Date: 05/22/08 06:19 am Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
I can't take this..... Please give me ONE more chapter. PLEASE!
Author's Response: As soon as my beta reader gets it back to me it goes up.
Date: 05/22/08 01:11 am Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
i love it. very disturbing but its a good read. now just hurry up and post the rest!!
Date: 05/21/08 09:26 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
OMG what'd it say?! You are the queen of suspense, you know that? Lol, I think you've got a ton of reader response, so please write an ending to this story that's not 2000% angsty? 1995% is okay. :P
Author's Response: I meant that how I ended the story would depend on readers response to the "ending". If the ending I have planned is not satisfying enough I may consider an epilogue or even a continuation of the story. I would never base plot decisions on number of reviews. It's immature to hold a story hostage like that.
Date: 05/21/08 07:57 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
oh mein gott! You can't stop there!!! You have to post more! I'll burst! That bastard! **reaches into computer and kills person who hurt Bill**
Post more sooooon!
Date: 05/21/08 07:19 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
omfg i cried grrrrr i'm getting pissed but the story is WONDERFULL update soon
Date: 05/21/08 06:35 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
Holding my breath, that's all I can say. Just please bring him back to Tom..
Date: 05/21/08 06:12 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
I want the story to end happily. The guy getting caught and going to jail and what not. Bill should probably be pretty traumatized but to shoulc be able to make him better. Update soon.
Date: 05/21/08 02:03 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
Wow. :o
BILLAHHH!! NEIN!! D:
Poor Tom.
And Bill.
And the 'G's.
GOSHDAMNIT!
GIMME MORE WOMAN!!
Date: 05/21/08 01:35 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
OMG....NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*cries*
Date: 05/21/08 12:30 pm Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
*breathes frantically* MORE!
poor Tom and Bill! :'(