Date: 05/23/08 09:59 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
I love this story
Date: 05/23/08 09:49 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
OMG! That was to short. I need more
Date: 05/23/08 07:35 am Title: Thursday 8:00 P.M.
hey you!
i'm back(beware i'm a stalker XD)
no, i'm not, i just proposed to feature your fic! it must be featured!! it must!
you rock!'love ya!
Date: 05/23/08 06:56 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
i just need for you to save Bill from this.
That's my secret hope:(
Date: 05/23/08 05:42 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
Hello!
I haven't read yet, i went directly for a review. Thanks for posting so quickly (well,i don't know how long the other readers had to wait but in my case it was less than 20h so...Hehe!)
I didn't read yet and my heart's racing. You know what, those images won't leave my already troubled mind O___O...*sighs deeply* hee i go...
Finished the reading!
ç___ç,uh! i want to give a bi
g bear hug to tom. And make bill safe immediately so they can be happy ever after...I have few questions:
1/If Tom has those dreams...Bill too , right? While his agressor's raping him, he might hallucinate,his mind is craving for tom so bad that he might give their secret away. I mean, their relationship's a secret, right? So in those horrible video, the other man may post it again and what will tom do then? Will he deny that he and bill are "in love"?Or will it appear as bill's in a "délire" under the circumstances...?
Oh my, or I think too much and ask some stupid questions? If you didn't understand what i wanted to say it's okay lol...
2/“It's been an hour since He took my breath away.”
===> stockholm syndrom? you can laugh at me, but hey, it can be interpretated that way, d you think? LOL
But, i just hope that, Bill means that he has suffered once more one hour ago.
Oh , thank you for your answers to my previous reviews^^. You're right, leave the parents thing for our own imagination!!!!lalalalala!
Did I say that GUSTAV AND GEORG ROCK!
They're the best friends ever! seriously,i just want to crush them in a big hug too!
well, it's time to go, i hope reading chapter 9 VERY soon :p, and i hope i didn't annoy you too much with my nonsense review *bows deeply for apology*
à bientôt!
Author's Response:
Bill and Tom's secret will not be an issue in this story. I'm keeping the focus very limited to keep it from becoming too much. The trauma does have Bill in a bit of a state of delirium and yes, it is possible that he would say things to his captor that would reveal it. However, it wont come out to the public. Bill and Tom have enough to deal with.
You aren't the only one who interpreted the last line to indicate Stockholm Syndrome. It can be interpreted that way, but that is not how it's meant. In the first line, Tom is talking about having his breath taken away because of pleasure. In the last line, Bill is talking about having his breath taken away by agony. It's the sort of pain that is so unbearable that you can not breathe because it hurts so badly.
Date: 05/23/08 03:04 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
*dies a little inside*
Date: 05/23/08 01:31 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
no.no.no.no.no.....
I can't believe Bill is going to fall for this kidnapper.. no Stokholm syndrom, please...
or... the last line means the kidnapper strangled Bill to death!?!?! *lost*
Author's Response:
Ugh. No Stockholm syndrome. No way!
The last line is literal, not figurative. Tom means it in the figurative sense and Bill means it in the literal sense.
Date: 05/23/08 01:08 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
Im dieing over here...
its jsut so painful
this story
and I still cant stop redaing it
i love it
Date: 05/23/08 01:03 am Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
wow this is amazing!
Date: 05/23/08 12:55 am Title: Saturday 6:00 P.M.
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG THAT ISN'T FAIR ON THEM!!!!!!!!!!!! AND ISN'T FAIR ON ME THAT I DON'T KNOW WHAT IS HAPPENING!!!!!!!! BILL BE OKAY!!!!! AMAZING STORY!!!
Date: 05/23/08 12:13 am Title: Thursday 8:00 P.M.
omg
i love your writing
just go on
i'm really scared now
and i feel so sorry for bill
Date: 05/22/08 11:47 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
This is amazing! The anticipation is killing me x.x
Date: 05/22/08 10:18 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
very good :) can't wait to see what happens next! woo!
Date: 05/22/08 10:03 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
that's...it?!?!?! WHERES THE REST OF IT!!! that was terribly short. hurry up and post the rest. i love this story
Date: 05/22/08 08:36 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
I just started reading this, but I love it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 05/22/08 08:29 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
oh gosh. You have to post more!
**panics**
What's going to happen Bill?
Date: 05/22/08 08:28 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
Oh, no. How can Tom put that kind of blame on himself? Poor baby. *huggles Tom*
Have I mentioned how much I love Gustav and Georg? I don't think I have. I've thought it throughout this whole story, but never expressed it. They are such good friends to Tom and Bill. I love that they are constantly there, suffering by Tom and offering their support as best they can.
Date: 05/22/08 08:15 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
O.o ooooommmmgggggg!!!!
more more more
Date: 05/22/08 07:40 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
I can't remember if I reviewed this in real life or only in my head, anywho I just want to say wow. I adore this story. It's amazing. Thank you for writing it. I love the two ilnes at the end of each chapter.
Date: 05/22/08 07:34 pm Title: Sunday 4:00 A.M.
Omg. that dream scared the crap out of me. well, it was hott at first but then when bill was in all thi spain and he was ... *shudder* ... it just was scary. BUT GOOD! You wrote it soo well! the transition between bliss and agony seemed effortless. that's amazing! *drooool*