Date: 10/02/08 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Quote:
"They made a kaleidoscope of a person on the cream colored duvet. "
I LOVE that. And I love your imagery, brilliant. I like how this one is completely different from your other one, ending-wise. And I reeeally like how you ended it.
I hope you update and post something soonish =) I really enjoy your work ^_^
Date: 09/13/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow.......
That was excellent!!
Date: 08/18/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter 1
completely beautiful :)
Date: 06/12/08 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey! r u sure that the pairing is Bill/OFC ,cause that clearly doesn`t sound like a Bill..more like Tom. He`s the one havin` those one-night stands. I thought Bill was the romantic one, the i-am-looking-for-the-one guy type... clearly i`m very confused ... :-?
P.S:Story rocks!
Date: 06/12/08 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey! r u sure that the pairing is Bill/OFC ,cause that clearly doesn`t sound like a Bill..more like Tom. He`s the one havin` those one-night stands. I thought Bill was the romantic one, the i-am-looking-for-the-one guy type... clearly i`m very confused ... :-?
P.S:Story rocks!
Date: 05/09/08 12:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Bentley! I love this more every time I read it!
I hope you decide to post more. Your words are magic...
Date: 05/08/08 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely fantastic!! ;)
Date: 05/08/08 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
fantastic. to the point, realistic, sad, and vivid.
loved it - very well written.
Date: 05/08/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
i've had dreams like this before....a few time. but can you blame me? when he's up on stage like "you want me and i know it" flaunting it.
anyway.....
very well written. the way everything is described is wonderful.
Date: 05/08/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
short but it was amazing and i liked the idea :)
Date: 05/08/08 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it. Raw and straight to the point.
*hugs*