Date: 03/05/10 06:43 pm Title: Epilogue
This fic wrecked me. Breathtaking and raw and utterly perfect. I'm not a Bushido fan, but you endowed his character with a nobility & passion that astonished me and totally won me over.
Date: 02/14/10 11:51 pm Title: Epilogue
AHH did Bill die?? or just go into shock? D: What did Zil tell him before?? it can't be the end yet!!! i hope that's why you have question marks there :)
Date: 02/10/10 03:50 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my Lord! This story is absolutely amazing, breathtaking!! I loved the world you created and the depth of the characters, just wow! I can't even find words good enough to express how beautiful and amazing this story is.
Anyway, I'm on to "a broken hallelujah" now...=)
Date: 02/06/10 11:22 pm Title: Epilogue
Very nice, I truly enjoyed the ending, of this story anyway. I can say that I did in fact enjoy the Bill/Bushido pairing and you two are like gods to me. Your writing inspires me so much and actually motivated me to continue with my stories (which will end soon). Your work is absolutely magnificent, gorgeous detail and all else.
Date: 02/06/10 11:16 pm Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
*Sigh* I'm not sure I am happy, but I don't feel too disappointed. This is truly the ONLY story I ever have and EVER will like Bushido in (I think because it's not the current real him) so it was sad to see him go. I wonder what will happen now though.
Date: 02/06/10 07:14 pm Title: Checkmate
I'm not sure what mindset I fell under because I went back and forth all the time in my mind. I am very curious as to what Zil told Bill, I do hope I get to find that much out. Either way I like your story a lot.
Date: 02/06/10 08:14 am Title: No Good Deed...
This is coming at a very slow pace for me, there is so much detail to process that continue to read at a slow pace. I like to think about how things will be and guess at what will happen next. At least it's giving me a long time to enjoy myself.
Date: 02/06/10 12:45 am Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
It's sad really, not knowing rather Bushido will live. I wonder too if Bill and Tom will work out. I think Tom is catching on though, even if he is just getting an impulse off the vibe between them or whatever.
Date: 02/05/10 11:52 pm Title: Check
*sigh* I wish you guys would give me a reason to justify Bill craving Bushido so much already. I like this story a lot but ugh! I'm impatient dammit, why can't I know now??! It's a lovely, creative story you have here though, very captivating.
Date: 02/05/10 06:43 am Title: Displaced
God, Bill can be such a slut (excuse my outburst) here Tom is, truly loving Bill and caring about him. Tom think that Bill's in oh so wonderful hands with Bushido when really all he's doing is setting it up so Bill can be a cheater cheater pants. *sighs*
OH! "I was not the unfaithful one," Tom told him, tersely. "Daniel is far too friendly to be married to any man." He hesitated. "And perhaps you are far too particular." That part scared me a bit hen Tom said "I am not the unfaithful one" I totally thought Tom had found out about Bill and Bushido.
Date: 02/05/10 06:01 am Title: Beichte
There's always some consequences and I was beginning to wonder where they were. I like this though, makes for a very interesting twist.
Date: 02/04/10 08:42 pm Title: Love Is...
From what I can gather Bill become more obsessed with Bushido, but he loves Tom in a way. Bill gets that feeling of doing something wrong and it makes him sick but when he's around Tom he feels at ease and protected. I think even the readers (I certainly do) feel drawn between the two men that Bill does.
Date: 02/04/10 03:26 am Title: Push and Pull
Ugh! Why does Bill have to lust after Bushido so much. Truthfully I'm just as confused as Bill. I'm completely unsure if Bill should be with either of them. Tom loves Bill but it's quite hazy if Bill loves Tom the same way, surely he cares but things are definitely a bit stiff. This story is pure creativity too by the way and it's like a magnet you can't get away from. The only problem with this story is I often read this instead of doing the things I should be doing, I need to prioritize better sadly. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this chapter a lot and I'm so excited to finish this story to start the next, I'm so very curious to find out what magic it holds.
Date: 02/04/10 01:23 am Title: Bittersweet Surrender
More and more complications arise, makes for a very interesting story though. I wish I just knew what was supposed to be known between Bill and Bushido. This story is taking me longer to read than any other story I've ever read because more crud keeps coming up. I rather like how protective and loving Andreas is, he's one of my favorite people to read about in stories so it's nice you included him so much.
Date: 02/03/10 10:15 am Title: Sight Unseen
God do I ever hope this thing with Bushido ends but I'm beginning to wonder if it's best though. Both Bill and Anis himself seem to actually be in love, or atleast lust. As much I hate to say this maybe they need to just have sex and get it over with even it's bad. I do hope that Tom and Bill's relationship improves greatly and they fall in true love.
Date: 02/03/10 06:06 am Title: Touched
You guys always end the chapters in wonderful cliff hangers. I truly enjoy how much work is put into one chapter all the time, it makes for a very enthralling experience. The whole Bill ad Bushido thing will NEVER be something I enjoy but I suppose I can handle it in your story though. I am so inquisitive as to if Tom will ever find this stuff out.
Date: 02/02/10 10:36 pm Title: Penance
God, what a chapter. I was so worried that Bill was going to allow Bushido to take his "untouchedness". Anyways I love how this is going so far and it never ceases to amaze me more and more. I am so curious as to how everything will progress in the world with the parents and diplomatic areas.
Date: 02/02/10 08:43 pm Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
The whole Bill/Bushido thing is something I have always had a VERY strong dislike for, I could even say hate. Something about the way Bill longs for Bushido is sickening in a way to me but arousing at the same time, it's worse than a guilty pleasure. They keep saying Ann Kathrin is gaining weight and it's so hard for me to picture but it's still amusing in one sense. I absolutely love how you call the mistresses concubines too.
Date: 02/02/10 08:34 am Title: Presentation
That was definitely very event filled chapter that held my attention. I love how you can turn the smallest and simplest events into a wonderful, captivating, life filled story, it's truly magical. You never failed to entertain me with your stories, they're phenomenal.
Date: 02/02/10 07:46 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
Sometimes I hate how cocky Tom can seem and how submissive Bill is, it truly fits well though so you have done a great job. I love how nicely it's flowing too. The uniqueness of the world enthralls me a lot too. I hope things get explained more and more through out the story because the world is truly captivating. I absolutely love how emotion you can put into something like this and just suck the reader in, making them see everything in their head like a movie.