Date: 05/12/08 05:44 am Title: Presentation
Oh lordy, you are making me like the Billshido! :O
MUST RESIST.
I think it's easy because Tom is such a dry little bugger in this lol. As always, I love his dialogue. :)
I liked seeing Bill get pissed over Raphael's gross suggestion, Bill seemed so meek and mild up until that point. ;)
Date: 05/12/08 05:31 am Title: Presentation
Sophia, I already babbled at you over IM while I read, but since Megan didn't get to see it all I will try to remember everything.
I love Bill's with and that touch of snark he has. He's a feisty little lion and I love him to death.
I love Tom's possessiveness. Just a chapter ago I was complaining that he behaved like an ass and I didn't like him much, but now I am utterly in love with him. He is so possessive and yet so gentle. Whenever that gentleness and concern for Bill flares up it makes my heart swell.
The UST is the best I've ever read. Even with nothing explicit happening yet, this whole thing is romantic and sensual.
I've never before found myself so torn over a pairing in Tokio Hotel fiction. I honestly do not know if I want Bill to be with Tom or Bushido. You have done an amazing job of making me fall in love with them both.
This story is incredible.
Date: 05/12/08 05:28 am Title: Presentation
omggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!! i want bushido/bill SO BAD it's not even funny. UGH
Date: 05/12/08 04:40 am Title: Presentation
I don't know what to say but that this fic is exquisite and I am always longing for more of it. And I would like to let it be known that I feel so bad for Bushido. He wanted a spouse and thought he'd found just the right person, only to find that Bill has already been claimed; and now the attraction he feels for Bill is only going to intensify. :(
That said, I loved Bill's revelation at the end!
Date: 05/12/08 04:29 am Title: Presentation
i get the feeling this is going to be one of those stories where i can't decide who i'd rather the main character end up with. that drives me so crazy! i think i'll enjoy it this time though.
Date: 05/12/08 04:19 am Title: Presentation
wow, it's so good!
Date: 05/10/08 11:27 pm Title: Distress and Disappointments
Awe poor Bill, this is getting so addictive. More soon please! Great work.
Date: 05/10/08 12:17 pm Title: Distress and Disappointments
Ack. Nuuu, this is going to complicate things. As hot as the "crossed wires" wet dream was, I want Bill to be with Tom. Though he is being a bit of an ass to Bill right now, I can see that slowly starting to change.
That kiss was sweet and sexy, and I love to see the boys all flustered.
Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait to see more!
Date: 05/10/08 11:27 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
Wow, it's great! Really really good.
Date: 05/10/08 07:19 am Title: Prologue
this story is amazing.
Date: 05/10/08 06:03 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
The sublime eroticism of this whole story is just too much to bare.
Date: 05/10/08 05:32 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
Kissing is good Tom's attitude is not. I'm starting to understand more about this world you've built and I like it a lot. It seems to take the idea of a patriarchal society to an extreme while putting it into something between a medieval and futuristic setting. The religion Bill follows reminds me of Hinduism or Buddhism, did you draw from either of those?
Date: 05/10/08 05:11 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
Gah, I'm too tired to leave a proper review and tell you all the reasons why I loved this chapter. It was awesome though. The story is amazing. I'm really not liking Tom much. I hope he stops being an ass.
Date: 05/10/08 04:27 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
Oh wow, I have always hated the idea of arranged marriages and such, makes me uncomfortable, I really feel for Bill here. The story is so interesting so far, I love the characterisations, especially Tom's - the way he talks to his concubines! Well done ladies. :D
Date: 05/10/08 03:58 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
mmm... so good... the detail, mmm...
Date: 05/10/08 03:54 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
Mmmmm, Anis.
This is great. I can't decide between Tom and Bushido. :) No really, it is great.
Date: 05/10/08 03:52 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
Guh, I am so loving this. Also, I've recently been swept up in something of a Billshido crazy (no doubt because of Em's When In Doubt), so you get double-- no, triple-- points for including good ol' Bushido in this. Moooooorrrreeeee please! :D
Date: 05/10/08 03:33 am Title: Most Auspicious Meetings
I wanna know what Froggy asked too. What is the determining factor of a sub or dom when they're born?
I'm so proud of you guise. This is such a creative piece, and I really am craving the billshido lately. The last paragraph was a gut clencher.
And ok srsly who made ur banner. it's the best i evr seen.
Date: 05/08/08 03:20 pm Title: Most Auspicious Meetings
MMM! Different and attractive.
More please..
Date: 05/08/08 02:34 pm Title: Most Auspicious Meetings
moooooooooore
this story captured me
yayyy tom will take bill into his bed *smirk*