Date: 05/13/08 06:17 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
Oh wow. This is simply amazing! I love it *_*
Date: 05/13/08 05:55 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
The slowest torture i've ever had ti face. LOVE IT!
Date: 05/13/08 05:51 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
Tom tom tom tom
ehhehehe
Date: 05/13/08 05:17 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
it's getting even hotter by the chapter... how do you manage this?? ))
Date: 05/13/08 04:46 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
Oh GOD. ...Is all I have to say. *fans self frantically*
Date: 05/13/08 04:24 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
One word: MORE.
Date: 05/13/08 04:09 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
@_________________@ :o :o :o mmmmoreeeeeeee ♥ and thank you, girls!!! :) :)
... ugh I am still rooting for tom. whatever.
haha :)
Date: 05/13/08 03:53 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
I'll have to get back to you with real words later...
Guh...
Just... oh. my. god.
Someone needs to fuck Bill. I don't care who. Somebody needs to fuck him. Right. Now.
Date: 05/13/08 03:27 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
Ohhhhhh such inner conflict for Bill! I am rooting for Tom, as dry as he may seem, I still need Bill/Tom and Tom is still rather tender with him. I want them to fall in loooooove. :3
Date: 05/12/08 10:13 pm Title: Presentation
neeeein.
i love, LOVE billshido but but .. TOMI!
im looking forward to more, update soon!
Date: 05/12/08 09:29 pm Title: Presentation
your story is full of details that make me crave for what will happen next.
When a plot shows a little bit of what might happen in future it means it's well thought and yours seem to be developing into something very emotional and deep with every character.
I'm loving it.
Date: 05/12/08 04:35 pm Title: Presentation
I love it. seriously!
but I don't know if I like this Billshido thing XD
I have my thumbs up for Tom! :'- D
and I even love Bushido irl ;- P
maybe because of his music, or yeah,
i dont know.. I don't know what to write x DD
UPDATE SOOOOON : ))
Date: 05/12/08 03:07 pm Title: Presentation
This is such a fascinating read
Date: 05/12/08 02:31 pm Title: Presentation
i prefer Tom win Bill and not Bushido.
The fact is that i hate reasl Bushido and i match every person in the fics with that bastard.
besides i love tom/bill's relationship and love.
Date: 05/12/08 11:54 am Title: Presentation
crossing my fingers hoping it'll be Tom /Bill.
yay for possessive tom
Date: 05/12/08 08:48 am Title: Presentation
i am in love with this fic, it's so effin amazing.
Date: 05/12/08 07:33 am Title: Presentation
Possessive Tom is hot. I can see him becoming less of an ass, too; the more he gets to know Bill, and the more he comes to realize his attraction to him.
I'm still rooting for Bill/Tom, even thought Bushido is quite charming, and I could hug him for the way he saved Bill from that perverted old creep.
But I love the dynamic between Bill and Tom. How, one minute, they're getting on perfectly, and then the next they're all but bickering with each other. It would be too easy for Bill and Bushido to get on, and that, to me, is dissatisfying. Plus, I won't lie, Bill and Tom make the prettier couple in my mind.
Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait to see more!
Date: 05/12/08 07:13 am Title: Presentation
I dont know where to begin. This story is so amazing, so original and so right up my alley that I've become obsessed with it from the very first chapter. I love AU when it is really another universe and the world you have created is so detailed, so clear and you have achived this clarity with such succintness that I have to bow down before you.
As for the pairing, the moment Billshido comes up, my OTP Tom/Bill evaporates. Poor Tom simply cant hold it up in face of such competition. I wish so unbelievably that this fic is Billshido eventually! Please tell me it will be so. I dont care how many chapters of budding T/B I have to wade through, but in the end it must be Billshido.
Well, it's quite a long review I have written here, but this fic deserves at least twice this much.
I'm getting incoherent. All I say: UPDATE and NOW!!!
Date: 05/12/08 06:36 am Title: Presentation
Oh My Heavens!
I am so very sorry that I have not reviewed this earlier!
It is just such an amazing story and deserves an appropriate review, which is why I decided to wait until I had the time to express my feelings about this more clearly.
This story is most likely one of the best I’ve ever read and it holds one of the top places in my favorites! I have always been intrigued with magic and fantasy and this story brings it to another height. The way you manage to keep your plot so strong from the very first chapter and not get lost in some by-story that only confuses the readers is great. I was at first a little concerned when I read about Anis being at the front, but I am very happy it didn’t turn out to be a war or anything like that, it would only hurt the story in my opinion.
Both of you have a very extreme way of writing and this story never seems to bore me, it rather keeps me on edge at all times. But in some ways it also relaxes me, you write so that the reader can enjoy, you give us a couple of breathers if you know what I mean.
The way you describe things is also brilliant! When writing fantasy it is easy to get caught up in describing the alternative world too much and end up with long boring paragraphs, but you have your own way. I feel like I know more of this world they live in after four chapters than I would after a whole book from a respectable author. The way you hint and symbolize all over just blows my mind away, unbelievably good!
My feelings about the story in itself are very confused, your fault by the way! I can not explain how much I want Bill and Tom to be together and judging from the way they each get a magical electric shock every time the touch (which you describe so breathtakingly beautiful) I would say that the spark is definitively there. But I also can’t help the nagging feeling that Bill finds happiness in Anis as well. And of course these worries cause me to long for another chapter as soon as possible.
Which brings me to my question; how often do you think you will update this? I just have to ask in order to save my sanity! At least I hope it will be quite often, this story is too good to put on hold. I must say I actually like it better than Lufthansa…much better really, and that is saying a lot considering I love that one as well.
Much love
And best of wishes on the next chapter
Lucy
Ps. Sorry about freakishly long review
Author's Response: Lufthansa will not be abandoned, it has an update scheduled for tomorrow night or Wednesday night. But this...it has become the reason we get online. We are always a chapter ahead when we post and enjoy updating as much as you enjoy finding an update. So, honestly? Probably every other day or so, at least, lol.
Date: 05/12/08 06:10 am Title: Presentation
I'm gasping for it, bb.