Date: 05/14/08 04:53 am Title: Penance
This story is pure genius. I am still trembling here from the delicious Billshido before. Now it's official: it MUST be Billshido. They are intended, arent they?
And now Bill is giving himself to Tom. So not good. So not good.
Date: 05/14/08 03:46 am Title: Penance
I... I don't have any words.
Date: 05/14/08 03:18 am Title: Penance
:O this is so fucking juicy! You better be updating soon please. My godddd
Date: 05/14/08 02:35 am Title: Penance
ohhh yes,yes
tom make love to bill
Date: 05/14/08 01:19 am Title: Penance
Ugh. This is by far the most frustrating chapter I have ever read. Just when Tom starts to show his feelings for Bill, that he's starting to care for him, Bill goes and does something stupid like this! I hope he gets caught. As much as I love Bill, Tom doesn't deserve to be jerked around. (I totally favor Tom, in case you haven't noticed, lol.)
Date: 05/14/08 01:00 am Title: Penance
Wow. It's so great. Wow. I love it.
Date: 05/14/08 12:30 am Title: Penance
Jesus, this chapter was phenomenal.
Date: 05/14/08 12:11 am Title: Penance
I really enjoy this, it reminds me of the good ole' day's of Viggorli fics, which might not make any sense, but it's a compliment! I want Bushido to get Bill, btw. Just throwing that out there!
Date: 05/13/08 11:53 pm Title: Penance
Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God!
*takes a breath* Okay, onto the real review.
Bill seems to use psychical closeness to Tom as a way of assuaging his guilt with his impure thoughts and actions with Bushido, I'm surprised Tom hasn't noticed I mean, Bill SAID he was untouched and all the sudden he's asking for sex, that should send up red flags. His amount of prayer could go by unnoticed since he's the only religious one in the house. Still, it is quite a situation Bill's gotten himself in to and I'm surprised the gods would send him such visions if its against their moral code, I wonder what that's going to turn into.
Date: 05/13/08 05:51 pm Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
all this sexual tension - killing me!
Date: 05/13/08 02:22 pm Title: Prologue
i cant properly put into words how great i think this story is, so i'll just beg you to please write more!! :)
Date: 05/13/08 02:08 pm Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
let Tom have him........
please.....
Date: 05/13/08 11:43 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
Every time Bushido makes an entrance i stop breathing. Can't wait for the next chapters!
Date: 05/13/08 11:09 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
Amazing story...so much sex tension. WOW! And I'm so glad we get a little of Billshido in this. LOVE IT. You guys are genius!
Date: 05/13/08 10:57 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
*fans self* Whoo boy. I think I need a cold shower, lol.
"'Two drinks, Bill,' Andreas replied as he held up four fingers." I could kiss that boy, just for being the adorable smartass that he is.
You know, I almost feel bad for Ann Kathrin. Even though she's a bitch, everyone calls her fat!
Anyway, steamy chapter. Bill is such a tease! I guess that's what happens when you have a lot of repressed sexual urges, lol. I still wish it was directed towards Tom, though. And I kind of feel sorry for him, because he thinks Bill is starting to come around, but really he's thinking of Bushido. *sigh*
I'll still keep my fingers crossed and hope that'll eventually change, though, lol.
Date: 05/13/08 10:41 am Title: Prologue
i really like this story, it's interesting. i hope bill marries bushido and not tom.
Date: 05/13/08 09:41 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
This is such a brilliant story!
I'm still rooting for Tom though XD
...even if Bill might not:P
Date: 05/13/08 06:42 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
I'm thinking there are some rules that go along with being Untouched. You should enlighten me.
And again, fuuuck, this is hot.
Date: 05/13/08 06:19 am Title: One Foot Upon A Slippery Slope
Poor confused Bill...