Date: 05/15/08 06:38 am Title: Touched
*placeholder for real review when Froggy's brain works again*
Date: 05/15/08 06:00 am Title: Touched
Why god whyy, are you making this so hard for us? Why are you making Bushido likable?! I don't want Bill to do what Tobi did, to poor Tom. But I imagine this is exaaactly how you want us to feel, you bastards ;)
This is quite an amazing world you have created, I must say! It must have taken some time to come up with and I am extremly impressed with your amount of fantasy and patience. There's only one thing I'm wondering about and I don't know if it has been explaind and I just missed it. But how is it determined that you're a second male, the one that acts as the bride?
Date: 05/15/08 05:52 am Title: Touched
Oh shit. Shit hitting the fan. Shit son.
I continue to be amazed. Each chapter so far has only been better than the last.
Date: 05/15/08 05:31 am Title: Touched
Words cannot express how I love this story. I'm utterly speechless right now and a bit relieved to see that this might actually turn out to be a Billshido. I swear I've picked up the habit of praying for this pairing before going to bed:)
Date: 05/15/08 05:28 am Title: Touched
I feel so bad for Tom :( poor guy
Date: 05/15/08 05:12 am Title: Touched
.....sorry I'm at a loss of what to say. I scroll up, there's tom, I scroll down, there's bushido ... I'm in a happy place.
Date: 05/15/08 05:03 am Title: Touched
THAT WAS A POSITIVE RESPONSE BTW
*shoves face in ice cold water*
Date: 05/15/08 05:03 am Title: Touched
AHHH OH MY FUCKING GOD
Date: 05/15/08 04:52 am Title: Touched
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MY................
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Date: 05/15/08 04:17 am Title: Penance
Ughh I can't believe I didn't favorite this .. I missed four chapters! Glad I got to catch up though, so much has happened. I'm thinking I'm definitely more of a billshido fan these days, so I was delighted at the turn of events. Though the tension between tom and bill is also delicious. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 05/14/08 06:56 pm Title: Penance
I think this is the best AU fic I've ever read, in any fandom. Absolutely wonderful.
I think the best part is the apprehension--I honestly have no idea who Bill's going to choose, and normally I'm pretty good at being able to tell.
So yeah. Much love
Date: 05/14/08 04:26 pm Title: Penance
Oh. My. God.
I just read the whole thing and now I'm...
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I cannot use plain words to describe the super-special-awesomeness of this story. Gah, I can't wait for the next chapter! Please write more, and write FAST!!!
Date: 05/14/08 02:30 pm Title: Penance
OH MY GGGWWWAAAAAADDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/14/08 01:56 pm Title: Penance
FA BU LOUS !!!
I don't usually say that but: MORE PLEASE
Date: 05/14/08 09:49 am Title: Penance
omgomgomgomgomg
best chapter EVER! *_* (LLLL'
I NEED MORE!
Date: 05/14/08 09:33 am Title: Penance
So much better than the snippet.
Lord. (Bushido)
Date: 05/14/08 06:57 am Title: Penance
... can not be coherent right now...
update as fast as you can, please.
Date: 05/14/08 06:05 am Title: Penance
come on Tomi babe!!
fuck him hard, make him see stars, make him non even think Bushido again.
Date: 05/14/08 05:50 am Title: Penance
Once again... Oh my GOD. I cannot get enough of this.
Today was such a long day, packing up and moving back home from school; it was the thought that there might be another chapter of this waiting for me at night that kept me going. :)