Date: 05/18/08 04:56 am Title: Sight Unseen
First, let me applaud the two of you on catching me completely off guard with this chapter. It wasn't something I had expected at all, but I loved it... As I have all the others, hehe.
Second, DON'T YOU DARE, JORG. Actually I kind of want it to happen. I'm sorry, what can I say? I'm a sucker for Bill the victim.
And ah! I see you explained (subtly) how males in this universe are deemed first or second. That was cool, I liked it. :)
Date: 05/18/08 04:52 am Title: Sight Unseen
Wow, this story is absolutely great! I love it. So original, I love all your stories. I wonder what is going to happen. What will Bill do and who will he end up with. I can't tell and I so want to know:p
So please update soon, I can hardly wait:D
Date: 05/18/08 04:16 am Title: Sight Unseen
I love this plot, please update soon!
Date: 05/18/08 04:04 am Title: Sight Unseen
......what is going to happen?!
Date: 05/17/08 08:37 pm Title: Prologue
no please dont let him be with bushido
do you believe i cried for tom?
wonderful story
you are the best
Date: 05/16/08 12:11 am Title: Touched
Why do I get the feeling Bill's confession is going to get him in trouble? D:
Date: 05/15/08 08:39 pm Title: Touched
You're killing me here. This story is on my mind all day at work. I wan't to write when I get home but I HAVE to read this first and then I am so conflicted the desire to write vanishes. I don't know which pairing I want to succeed. Either way I will feel bad for the other one. You are awesomeness. :P
Date: 05/15/08 08:31 pm Title: Touched
OMG. I hope Katherine or whatever her name is doesn't over hear this conversation!
SHAME ON YOU BILL! You have to resist temptation! You have everything you need, yet you want more? SHAME!
Date: 05/15/08 07:45 pm Title: Presentation
OMG. No, Bill, no! RESIST!!
Date: 05/15/08 05:26 pm Title: Touched
HOLLY MOLLY !!!!!!!!!!!
omg omg omg!! I can't breathe!! POOR ANIS!! He must regret so bad that he didn't get to have Bill first!! Awwwwww !! I love that Bill/Bushido relationship here!! I really don't know what to expact but I LOVE THIS!!
Date: 05/15/08 03:49 pm Title: Touched
*dies*
Wow, just wow...
This fic is one of the best AUs EVER. End of Story.
God, you had me chewing my nails, I can't wait to see what happens next. Please write more!!!!
Date: 05/15/08 03:20 pm Title: Touched
and just when i started wondering how could this get any better...you come up with this chapter.
the best AU i've ever read, and i'm craving for more =)
PS: Love or duty, eh? i guess it's harder to decide when you are not even sure of which one is what. Poor Bill...
Date: 05/15/08 02:35 pm Title: Touched
oh Bill is such a whore.
he cheated on Tom.
How he could??
go on girls please
Date: 05/15/08 12:16 pm Title: Touched
I love, love, love the conflict in this chapter. I really don't know what Bill should do now, because there is always the risk of regretting the decision. If he continued staying with Tom, then he might one day slip up and that would be disastrous. Not to mention, he would forever be pining for another man. But if he went with Bushido, then there would be serious consequences from his father and Jorg, and Tom's heartbreak. And the flame between him and Bushido might also die and he might regret not following the 'safe' choice.
Lol, I tend to overanalyse stories a bit too much. But this is a real dilemma I really want to know the ending to. Very good job so far guys. It's very well written and engaging. Update soon!
Date: 05/15/08 11:21 am Title: Touched
Wow. That was...um...er...yeah. Hot, lol.
Tom was so sweet during Bill's first time; it broke my heart to know that Bill doesn't return his tenderness. Not in the way he would like, anyway. He's so adorable when he's all smitten, too.
I want to be pissed at Bushido, but, damn, when he acts so amorous like that it's kind of hard to be, lol. I am, however, not pleased with Bill, which isn't fair, 'cause I'm a firm believer in the whole "you can't help who you fall in love with" nonsense, but, well... I think it's obvious by now whom I want him to be with, even if it does seem like a futile desire by this point.
Date: 05/15/08 10:12 am Title: Prologue
I love it already! The plots are unfolding quite nicely, and this world you guys have made up is effing imaginative! :D
Date: 05/15/08 09:38 am Title: Touched
x'OOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OHMEINGOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!
no words can describe how much I love this chapter, and this story!
YOU GUYS ARE AMAZING.
Date: 05/15/08 07:49 am Title: Touched
OMG! This is so good! Omg. Omg. I have no words! I love it!
Date: 05/15/08 07:31 am Title: Touched
This chapter was not what i expected. In a good way. The slash goodness was... good
Date: 05/15/08 06:59 am Title: Touched
...I'm sorry, but you ladies have struck me speechless. I can't... form... the words... *gapes*
MORE. This is incredible. *___*