Date: 05/20/08 04:30 am Title: Bittersweet Surrender
Just once, hmm? I hope it's not just once. ;)
But aw, I don't like that Bill and Bushido's... meeting ended so suddenly and on such a bad note. And... Bushido's eyes, "shiny and full of despair". Aw, no. :(
These visions of Bill's... They're fascinating. More than anything I still look forward to seeing the continued development of Bill's relationships with Tom and Bushido; but now I also want to learn the importance of Bill's visions, see where they come into play and how. What do the "gods" (or, hmm, authors?) have in store for little Bill and the men surrounding him?
I can't wait! :D
Date: 05/20/08 04:22 am Title: Bittersweet Surrender
I wonder what the vision meaned. It seems that there is a reason behind it all. This story just keeps on getting better and better ;-)
I want to know where you will go with this, so update soon ;-)
Date: 05/20/08 03:51 am Title: Bittersweet Surrender
omg what is Bill seeing in his visions?! I'm glad he has Andreas looking out for him.
The Billshido was hot but the Tom/Bill still wins for me!
Date: 05/19/08 11:34 am Title: Sight Unseen
You write amazingly well! I love Bill/Bushido pairing. Hopefully there is a happy ending!
Date: 05/18/08 09:03 pm Title: Sight Unseen
Okay. This story has taken a turn from good to suspenseful.
I had no idea that Bill possessed so much power, and that it could do this to him. It's quite amazing, really. A nice twist to what would be an otherwise commonplace romance tale. I fear for Bill, though. Jorg is going to take advantage of Bill's power, and it's not going to be pretty.
And this talk with Bushido...I sincerely doubt it'll put an end to their love affair. *shakes head*
Great chapter, though! Looking forward to more.
Date: 05/18/08 05:12 pm Title: Sight Unseen
I'm completly in love with this story and the world you created. Thank you so much for letting us be a part of it.
I'm so glad everytime I see an update and the waiting for the next one is gonna be harder since I'm a total Bill/Bushido supporter lol. You managed to build a very touching/emotional feeling between them.
I can't wait. BRAVO!
Date: 05/18/08 02:39 pm Title: Prologue
i want bill to love tom not bushido
more
Date: 05/18/08 02:31 pm Title: Sight Unseen
this story is..boah. impossible to describe. i love it so much! i was wondering, there is so many words that i don't understand here, like the words that you have made up (i think), is there by any chance that you can tell me what they mean? like, i understand some of it, but i don't understand the full "story" of the words.
keep up the good work, i nearly had a heart attack when i didn't see this story updated for a couple of days xD
Date: 05/18/08 02:23 pm Title: Sight Unseen
OMg, please, let it end and let Bill be happy with Tom! Please=
Date: 05/18/08 01:41 pm Title: Sight Unseen
Every chapter you post has twisted my insides and I've had to read them a couple times or more. I'm completely enthralled and torn over what I want to happen, so I'll just cling along for the ride and hope it turns out well for all involved in the end. Thank you for bringing us to this fascinating world.
Date: 05/18/08 01:23 pm Title: Sight Unseen
OMG is all I can say! *O*
I want Bill to be with Bushido =P
Update pleaseeee!!=D
Date: 05/18/08 11:58 am Title: Sight Unseen
I wish bill loved tom. Tom obviously loves him. But that doesn't appear to be the way you're going. Update soon.
Date: 05/18/08 11:05 am Title: Sight Unseen
...??? you are so cruel for ending the chapter just there... XD.
is there ANY way to have them both (Tom and Bushido)like...legally competing for the same spouse??? come on! There must be something that Bushido can do...
Date: 05/18/08 07:48 am Title: Sight Unseen
what else can i say.?
please update as soon as possible..
Date: 05/18/08 06:48 am Title: Sight Unseen
that's an official cliffhanger...
agrrrrhhhh....
Date: 05/18/08 06:42 am Title: Sight Unseen
Wow! This is so good! Absolutely fantastic!
Date: 05/18/08 06:12 am Title: Sight Unseen
I hate that I'm always left without any words when I get to the end of a chapter. I want to leave the sort of review that this story deserves.
I am still so conflicted about who I want Bill to be with, but now I'm leaning towards Bushido. When I think about who is best suited for Bill, I think it is Bushido, but then I think about who will be less devastated by losing Bill and I start thinking that maybe it's better that he stay with Tomi.
I think I'm as frustrated as Bill and Bushido are when it comes to wanting to know exactly what the Gods have in mind.
Date: 05/18/08 05:27 am Title: Sight Unseen
*chewing nails*
Oh, I can't wait to see what happens!
Please write more!