Date: 06/08/08 05:40 pm Title: Prologue
wow...
you write so incredible well, your story is amazing!
and I just love the BushidoxBill pairing, hope they end up together^^ (donīt like TomxBill)
yeah, and Iīm really sorry I didnīt comment earlier.__.
Date: 06/08/08 02:50 am Title: Displaced
Damn, I can't make up my mind. Tom or Bushido? Arghh, anyway, I love this story so much, can't wait for more!
Date: 06/07/08 11:59 pm Title: Displaced
Another beautiful chapter. I absolutely love the twist of the fire and Bill being led to safety by his vision. Well, relative safety given where he ended up. I'm sure he's physically safe with Bushido. Spiritually and emotionally safe? Not so much.
I wish Tom would stop being an idiot and putting Bill right into Bushido's hands. I wish SOMEONE had a little more self control. I love the Billshido, but I think I've finally made up my mind and decided I want him to be with Tom. I want him to want to be with Tom and I want him to stop wanting Bushido! (But only after that upcoming incredibly hot and smutty scene you've been talking about.)
Date: 06/07/08 02:22 pm Title: Displaced
Bill is a total hypocrite, accusing Tom of infidelity when he's banging Bushido every other night! But I like all the drama in this, it's very exciting :)
Date: 06/06/08 11:16 pm Title: Prologue
shit. i am flip flopping back and forth between bushido and tom here. i cant makeup my mind. i dont think i could choose.
Date: 06/06/08 03:06 pm Title: Displaced
Damn, all that hard work up in smoke, literally. I was so happy when Bill was w/ tom. And then Daniel. This is just going to be one big mess. update soon.
Date: 06/06/08 02:00 pm Title: Displaced
I'm loving this story so, so much! It's totally awesome and I can't get enough of it! :))
Date: 06/06/08 12:04 pm Title: Displaced
Arrgh! Does Tom want a repeat of his relationship with Daniel? I understand his concern for Bill, and am touched that he would go to such lengths to protect his beloved, but, honestly, if only he knew what he was getting himself into.
Date: 06/06/08 11:06 am Title: Displaced
Oh wow! amazing chapter! I like the way there's always surprises and twists in every chapter!
Date: 06/06/08 10:21 am Title: Displaced
All I can do is repeat myself. This story is amazing. It's my new relgion, really. My nerves are tattered, because after the previous chapter I sort of accepted the Bill/Tom thing and now you put Bushido in the picture again...I cant take it anymore! I totally symphatize with Bill.
Oh, and the part with the child leading Bill out of the house was so beautiful, so magical...This whole fic is just magical.
*sigh*
Date: 06/06/08 09:50 am Title: Prologue
tom really loves bill
he should've told bill about daniel and his other engagements but bill's not a saint too...
he has to decide if it's tom or bushido,he can't be with both...
i'm afraid that tom will find out sooner or later and it'll be bad...really bad...
awesome chappie hun
Date: 06/06/08 09:14 am Title: Displaced
ooh, my heart breaks for Tom. ;__;
Date: 06/06/08 06:15 am Title: Displaced
Bushido love! Yes! You have no idea how much i love this chapter.
And i just find Bu so cute, trying to resist Bill and all. Damn war going on... couldn't have waited a few more hours before the damn thing had to go beep? ::curses under breath::
Date: 06/06/08 04:22 am Title: Displaced
Oh no, not again!!
i think that i start hate Bill here too.
I dont like his double play with two men.
Just let him clear his position,cause i m gonna hit him hard in his face..
Date: 06/06/08 03:26 am Title: Displaced
I must admit I'm really starting to dislike Bill here so much.
Date: 06/06/08 02:41 am Title: Displaced
Alright, I confess. I started that fire in an effort to drive Bill away from the House of Vave. I knew he was going to have that vision that would take him away from his suite; I wouldn't want to hurt Bill in any way, of course not. And now he's with Bushido for a while. Oh goody, my plan worked! *rubs hands together gleefully*
But oh, don't tell anyone! ;)
But in all seriousness, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. When Bushido found Bill running around his garden "at what seemed to be at random" I laughed, I really did. It made for a silly, cute little mental image. :D And I'm sorry, but wow, Bill really doesn't have any self-control around Bushido. None at all, I'd say! But you know what? I, for one, am not complaining.
Thank you, both of you! And congratulations on winning a category in the TH Fan Fiction Awards. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 06/05/08 10:13 am Title: Beichte
OH WOW! I didn't see THAT coming...but I LOVE this. Maybe means we're gonna get a little of Billshido! I miss them together.
Fantastic job as always!
Date: 06/05/08 01:02 am Title: Beichte
Dammit, such a lovely chapter, and then you had to drop a shit bomb like that. Oh noes! Will Bill get jealous, I wonder?
Date: 06/04/08 07:58 pm Title: Beichte
Ah Tom had a sahvahd before Bill! OMG so can't wait for the next update!!! Man I cannot get over how well you two write. You know I love this story, I just simply cannot get enough of it! I'd have to say I'm an addict, it's too good to resist no matter how hard you try.
Date: 06/04/08 07:28 pm Title: Beichte
All this Bill/Tom sex is making me giddy O.o
Ha! I knew as soon as Daniel saw Tom that he was going to be an ex!