Date: 06/12/08 06:36 am Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06/12/08 06:05 am Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
I cant believe it's already chapter 15!
It's such a great story that you dont feel time passing by. This chapter was simply heatbreaking, especially the closing scene, where both Bill and Bu know that Bu will never come back from the front.
Oh and in the previous chapter it was such a joy to read immature and petulant Bill. He was truly acting his age and it contrasted so well with Bu's mature behaviour and self-restraint.
Your characters are unbelievably well-worked out, spot-on and real.
Why isnt this a featured fic yet?
*confused*
Date: 06/12/08 05:56 am Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
Does he suspect? :O
I wanted to cry when Bushido was explaining to Bill the meaning of his vision, about the Bioarmor and what it meant... when Bill whispered, "Don't you dare." And then again at the end. ;__; This is so sad!
Date: 06/12/08 05:49 am Title: Prologue
i think bratBill is adorable and very realistic. :) he's young and his visions, forbidden love, and tom's lies are a lot for him to deal with, especially since he's so scared about being married off to a random guy he barely knows. i'd be a brat too if i were in his place.
Date: 06/11/08 07:06 am Title: Check
Great chapter, as always.
More?
Date: 06/11/08 01:48 am Title: Check
This story keeps getting better and better.
Date: 06/11/08 01:14 am Title: Check
Now this is interesting. It's clear that Bushido is deeply in love with Bill. I hope that Bill truly does love Bushido as he says he does... and by choice.
But oh noes, the talk of betrayal within Bill's vision has me concerned. D: I want Bushido to tell Bill about the significance of his visions... and soon.
And Bill is being a brat, haha. But... eh, whatever. He is young, I guess. I have to admit, Bushido scolding him made me smile a bit.
Date: 06/10/08 11:05 pm Title: Check
Poor Bill. He is being a brat but it must suck to feel like a pawn of the gods. I don’t know how you guys feel, but I see the comments complaining about hating Bill and his actions and I have to wonder if they’d feel the same if you reversed the pairings. Hmm. I can’t decide who I want him to be with so I’m just along for the ride and loving every smutty scene you give us.
I really love the world you guys have created. It's all so interesting. I'm curious how we'll see the treachery going on, if we'll get any closer and more involved than just seeing Bill's visions.
Date: 06/10/08 10:53 pm Title: Check
Wow. That chapter, alone, was epic. Alone, your fics are very good. Together, you are amazing. Breath-taking.
I can't imagine how this is going to end up. I know what you've alluded to, but ... I don't want to think you'll actually go there. I can't see anything in this but pain for everyone. And it's still so good.
Date: 06/10/08 07:14 pm Title: Check
I adore this so much. Just so, so much.
Date: 06/10/08 04:04 pm Title: Check
Bill's getting on my nerves. I know he can be a bit of a bitch but he was really annoying in this chapter. I think my problem is I'm not a Bill/Bushido fan. That's kinda my problem though. I like the plot line and I want to know how it's going to end. Update soon.
Date: 06/10/08 02:28 pm Title: Check
Every chapter makes me speechless, this is just so amazingly well written! I love the originality of the plot! I loved the passionate moments in this chapter!
Date: 06/10/08 10:21 am Title: Check
Yep, agree with Bu here. Bill is acting like a real spoiled brat and i don't like it. He's supposed to have a bit more brain power working for him what with all the prayers and everything, but he's just being...well... diva!Bill we all know and love
Extra points for the Bu love in this one! Loved every hot minute of it.
Date: 06/10/08 09:18 am Title: Check
Wow, so Bill's strong feelings incite the visions? That's a very cool idea. It's all starting to make more sense now, why both of them felt that attraction and 'love' for each other so suddenly. How 'forbidden' their relationship is makes the passion even stronger. It's so sad for Tom though, since he probably wouldn't understand why that happened to him a second time as he is not a devout.
I liked how Bushido is slapping some reality into Bill. Bill's reaction was also very realistic. I love this chapter.
But the ending....isn't it very dangerous? Unless one of them is going to wake up real early and disappear, lol.
Update soon!
Date: 06/10/08 08:58 am Title: Check
I have no words for this story!
I just love it *__* (L'
Your writing is like, the best i've ever seen ;o
Date: 06/10/08 08:16 am Title: Check
Oh come on.
I want Tom earn him.
I dont like this double game.
i m so angry of Bill.
i can imagine what happen if Tom find out about all that..
Date: 06/10/08 08:10 am Title: Check
this is ridiculously well written
Date: 06/10/08 06:43 am Title: Check
Oh god so intense and delicious, I'm so so curious as to how this will all pan out.
Date: 06/09/08 09:28 am Title: Displaced
Absolutly breath taking. I can't describe how much I LOVED this chapter. I'm so glad Bu's back. And I love the fact that Bill unconsciensly found safety in his house...however it's almost frustrating how they've never able to finish their love act properly lol. Anyway fantastic job as always and thank you for the looooong chapters!!