Date: 06/16/08 11:03 am Title: No Good Deed...
Ooooh very dramatic chapter! :o
Date: 06/16/08 10:29 am Title: No Good Deed...
That was a nice chapter. David/Jorg is cute, and all the Tom/Bill was just really adorable and fluffy :) Though I reallly wish that Bill would stop pining over Bushido x( Tom/Bill is the true love if you ask me :D
Date: 06/16/08 07:41 am Title: No Good Deed...
great-great-great!!!! so, not all the visions come true.. that's getting more intricate...
and i loved the chapter - the fury was vivid!! ))
Date: 06/16/08 05:57 am Title: Penance
This fic is so hard to read! I AM SO TORN!! Bill shouldn't be with Tom because he feels guilty, but because he loves him. He obviously does, but omg, Bushido! Bushido makes him feel alive! THEY BELONG TOGETHER!! I usually know what pairing I want when I read a fic, but this fic has me so confused.
(Listening to bushido's songs while reading isn't helping either.)
Date: 06/16/08 05:08 am Title: No Good Deed...
Oh no! This chapter was so long and there was so much happening... I watched the scroll bar in despair as it neared the bottom of the page.
I feel so bad for Bill, after that scene at the Gree Ha. He must have felt horrible when reality didn't turn out like his vision. Too bad it didn't. :( And Tom too, I can understand his anger over the public humiliation...
This chapter: amazing! I actually became a bit teary-eyed when Bill broke the news to Andreas of Bushido returning to the front lines. And Andreas's "... Are you alright?" just... struck something in me.
Date: 06/16/08 04:55 am Title: No Good Deed...
This is not fanfiction, people. This is a book. It's well written, intriquate, unputdownable, has complex characters, a great plot and an atmosphere.
This should be published I tell you.
It's so good.
Date: 06/16/08 04:46 am Title: No Good Deed...
Oh Bill. I’d love him to be right but I’m afraid him not fulfilling the vision of the confrontation makes Bushido’s vision happen. :(
I love all the chapter titles, btw. This one had me on pins and needles even before anything happened because I was nervous of the “…goes unpunished” bit and wondered when it would show itself.
Date: 06/16/08 03:51 am Title: No Good Deed...
David and Jorg are being cuter than i would have thought possible. I hope Bill won't get into even bigger trouble for Bu, but i hope to God he won't die.
Date: 06/16/08 03:36 am Title: No Good Deed...
oh god that last scene lol @_@
hm... eaaaaagggggeerly awaiting the next installment...
Date: 06/13/08 03:00 pm Title: Prologue
your whole story is so beautiful
but so heartbreaking at the same time.
I really want him to be happy with Bushido, but it seems so unlikely now;_;
anyway, a really brilliant Story of yours:)
Date: 06/13/08 02:05 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
ohh my...jealous tommy is nice..
i want to see his reaction when he'll find out about bill and bushido
maybe a hate fucking...(u know what i mean)*cough*
updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Date: 06/13/08 12:10 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
god ): i don't know what to think right now
Date: 06/12/08 09:04 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
Foolish, ignorant Tom. Seems like he's slowly (very slowly) starting to catch on to something, though.
As for Bill, I'm torn. His petulant behavior towards most things makes it hard for me to feel truly sorry for him, but at the same time my heart goes out to him in his confusion. And to Bushido, of course. Even though I still don't support them as a couple, that doesn't mean I don't support them as indivdual characters. The prospect that Bushido might die is scary, and I hope... I don't know. I really don't know what to expect at this point.
Excellent chapter, as always. And I look forward to seeing more.
Date: 06/12/08 04:16 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
i love the ay tom acts...i like his jealousy...if he knew...
i hope he'll find out after the wedding...
Date: 06/12/08 03:45 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
i dont know what to say.
All these confused me.
if Bill loves Bushido,let be with him.
i just hate his double play.
Of course i prefer bill/tom, but in honestly feelings no fake love or something.
i m so anxious for the next chapter.
i imagine the worst.
Date: 06/12/08 01:52 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
T_______________T snif...snif...
aaah it's so complicated...(and i'm loving it)
Date: 06/12/08 12:50 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
Uneasy b/c he's begining to see something's off w/ bill/bushido's relationship or b/c of the news that bushido was going away again and it didn't sound entirely like a routine thing? update soon. And make bill happy w/ tom. please?
Date: 06/12/08 10:57 am Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
God, even I felt the tenseness of the scene at the end. *shudders* and damn, he's going to war when Bill's getting married? It's so bittersweet...
Update soon!
Date: 06/12/08 10:00 am Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
Awww poor Bushido. Though I still think that Bill shouldn't have gotten so wound up with him. Oh, well...
I can't to see what happens!
Date: 06/12/08 06:44 am Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
shit...this was cruel of you to write my dears, but i still loved it.