Date: 06/21/08 01:54 pm Title: Checkmate
Bushido deserves Bill. True love over duty =(
btw sad, but nice chapter.
Date: 06/21/08 11:55 am Title: Checkmate
I don't know whether I should be sad or thankful, lol. I expected them not to be together, because I couldn't imagine the storyline if that happened. It would be too easy, in a sense.
Anyway, I felt that it was a bit rushed at the end though. The part with Bushido, because it came so suddenly and then ended almost abruptly. I liked the concept but perhaps it could have been developed a bit more?
Still a wonderful chapter, nevertheless. Update soon!
Date: 06/21/08 11:05 am Title: Checkmate
i fucking hate andreas.
Date: 06/21/08 10:35 am Title: Checkmate
*is mindset 2*
Though I feel bad for Bushido =/ I bet there's gonna be lots of drama, though, between Bill and Andreas. *sigghhhh* Oh, well, Tom's a good guy, he doesn't deserve to be cheated on.
Love it! Please update soon :D
Date: 06/21/08 06:55 am Title: Checkmate
I just imagine all the fuss going about with the wedding, and all those florists and robemakers...can't help but imagine them as over the top flamboyant awesome hair cristal complection queens...
On the last part of the chappie i would like to yell and kick and scream and beat the living hell out of the first person that comes in front of me right now, but i must accept things i can not change. I still hate you for what you did with Bushido though...
Date: 06/21/08 06:06 am Title: Checkmate
I used to think that you never read your reviews, but then I saw someone that offended you. Knowing that you do read your reviews, I want to tell you that every installment I read, every update, is some sort of bittersweet beauty. I love to read more of this story, but I know that it will end soon. I want to spend much more time in this universe that you have created.
Author's Response: Steinsgrrl, we always read and treasure our reviews; it simply would take a great deal of time to respond to everyone. But we are always watching for them and gleefully read every one (the longer, the better). That is why we did NOT appreciate when someone attacked our reviewers. We value every word you all leave for us. We assure you, it encourages us like nothing else, and we appreciated your review all the more (we both "awwed" at it, lol). Thank you for reading and enjoying the universe we built; we've certainly enjoyed building it for you.
Date: 06/21/08 05:29 am Title: Checkmate
This is tragic, on Bushido's part. Mindset #1 here feels heartbroken. :(
And a bit angry. For whatever reason, I have not much liked Andreas throughout most of this fic, and this last act of his solidifies my anger toward him. However correct he may have felt he was in doing that, he had no right...
Date: 06/21/08 05:02 am Title: Checkmate
I've never been able to really decide which mindset group I was in. Even now, I'm not sure. I think Bill's my big problem. Anyway, I love this story more and more every day. This chapter more than others, I must admit.
You did a great job and always will, I guess.
Tabata
Date: 06/21/08 04:53 am Title: Checkmate
I am glad and thank you. which brings me to the group with mindset# 2. ))))
Date: 06/21/08 04:30 am Title: Checkmate
Loved it. It was an amazing chapter. I'm waiting for your next update!
Date: 06/17/08 08:29 am Title: No Good Deed...
And the plot thickens even more!
Can't wait for the next one! :)
Date: 06/17/08 12:21 am Title: No Good Deed...
OMG! Shit really hit the fan in this chapter didn't it. o_O
I'm torn between who I want Bill to be with just like everyone else. x__x Can't Bill pick both? 3some anyone? lol
Date: 06/16/08 07:08 pm Title: Push and Pull
I hate bushido GOSH
Date: 06/16/08 07:01 pm Title: Bittersweet Surrender
the main idea of the story is good.
But i did not kno it would be a bushido/Bill love..:S..
I wished it would have been a bill/tom cuz I dont really like bushido and bill together but yes:)
Author's Response: That's why it's best to read the pairings in the story profile.
Date: 06/16/08 03:52 pm Title: No Good Deed...
I completely agree with what Chayenne7 said about this being a book.
I seriously don't even look at it as a fanfic anymore. You've created such a unique, AU world that thinking of them as *that* Tom and Bill from Tokio Hotel is the furthest from my mind. This has seriously become a novel and it's definitely one of the best stories on the site.
But still, you better not kill Bushido or I'll hunt you down. >(
Date: 06/16/08 03:46 pm Title: Prologue
I love the prologue .
I wanna read more tho :)
Date: 06/16/08 02:18 pm Title: No Good Deed...
Ok, I lost the review I wrote, my computer hates me so this one's gonna be a lot shorter. Basically I said I think your character development is brilliant and possibly the best I've ever seen. I'm frustrated w/ Bill, and I'm annoyed that he seems to like Tom as soon as Bushido's gone. Update soon.
Date: 06/16/08 02:13 pm Title: No Good Deed...
I guess its all winding down now!
Date: 06/16/08 12:01 pm Title: No Good Deed...
this chappie made me cry...and sad...
i hope tom will say that he's sorry...
Date: 06/16/08 11:29 am Title: No Good Deed...
Great chapter! This story is amazingly complex!