Date: 06/23/08 09:30 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
I feel bad for Bushido =/ Yeah it was the best choice for the story, since Bill needs to be faithful to Tom and all that, but I definitely think there's room for Billshido drama. Is Tom ever gonna find out? Is Andreas ever gonna reveal that he deleted Bushido's message, and how is Bill gonna react when he finds out about Bushido's death--if he's too emotional, then people are bound to get suspicious.
Anyway, wonderfully written as always. I'm looking forward to more :)
Date: 06/23/08 09:19 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
i am not pleased *cries i'm off to join bushido! i hope the next chapter isnt the epilogue or something. tt'd be dreadful.
Date: 06/23/08 08:44 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
Actually, dancing is the last thing on my mind right now. I have been for Billshido all along, so his demise has made me a bit emotional. The way you wrote his death was beautiful and worthy of him! I feel Bill was lucky to have such a great person to be part of his life. I think it will make him into a better person himself.
As the inimitable JRR Tolkien put it in the LotR, some things need to be lost so that you can keep them. (not verbatim quotation of course)
All in all, another unforgettable chapter from you two. Congratualtions and dry your tears ladies. :)
Date: 06/23/08 08:31 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
noo' why??? i was against the Bill/Tom pairing.
since Bushido turned up in the fic, i wanted him to be with Bill somehow. i thought that somethng will happen, he doesn't have to die. or at least a last contact between them... :(
it was so sad.
but i agree with everyone's opinion, it is a well-written and exciting fic.
Date: 06/23/08 08:23 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
Wow, that was very dramatic, and I must say I am torn, I can honestly say I don't feel like dancing for joy at all. ._.
Date: 06/23/08 08:20 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
Oh God, you made me cry. It's beautiful! I won't dance, I don't dance because of this. I'm actually sad. But he died with Bill in his thoughts, didn't he? So, isn't he kind of happy now? *wipes tear away*
Date: 06/23/08 08:15 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
That was so beautifully written! Honestly this is better than most fantasy books I've read! Even though we had it coming, I just can't stop crying after this chapter. I mean, even though I was leaning more towards bill/tom, Bushido was such an amazing character, and so dedicated to Bill... I'm sure I'll re-read this story a lot, and cry each time
Date: 06/23/08 08:09 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
poor Bushido *tear*
Date: 06/23/08 08:02 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
We already knew, it would be heartbreaking for either pairing. I have found myself on an emotional rollercoaster. Sometimes supporting for the twins, other times all out rooting for billshido. But that was just your intention, wasn't it Little Minxes!
Anyway, it is indeed a bittersweet goodbye to billshido. And I'm glad to see you did it in such a kind, delicate and respectful manner. I hope they all find some peace of mind now...
Anyway, thank you for this great chapter. My feel good moment during my day.
Just one more word: epic.
Date: 06/23/08 01:50 am Title: Checkmate
Oh. My. God. Andreas is SUCH an asswipe. That was not his decision to make and I seriously just want to.. adlKJDLKJF!! D:
The ending of this chapter killed me. I could actually feel Bushido's sadness and hopelessness through your words and.. UGH. ;_; Again, pleeease don't kill him. If he can't have Bill, at least let him be happy with someone else. His character is way too sweet here. :( :(
Perfect chapter yet again though.
Date: 06/22/08 01:11 pm Title: Checkmate
F************CK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just want to punch Andreas in the face, and hard. I'm not sure of which pairing i like the most, cuz this story is so awesome that i'll just love it anyways.
But whatever happens, it should be Bill's decition, not f*cking Andreas!!!
ugh...now that i got that out of my chest:
Love your story man... =)
Date: 06/22/08 04:07 am Title: Checkmate
So if Bushido finally got Bills messages, why did he still go off to battle? Or did Bill not explain his vision in his messages to Bushido? Cause thats what I thought Bill did. Maybe I read it wrong or I made that part up. lol.
So was Bills message to Bu a simple "Hey Bushido, its Bill. Call me back when you get this message!!!" :P
Author's Response: Lol, Bill didn't meet him, and therefore, he assumed he had pushed Bill away, that Bill didn't WANT to meet him.
Date: 06/22/08 12:34 am Title: Checkmate
I don't even know which mindset I am anymore x'o
but yeah .. I think i'm happy o_+
poor bushido though ;/
bah, I always think so much when I have finished reading a new chapter of this story x' ) absolutely love it! the whole universe you have created :- )
Date: 06/21/08 09:20 pm Title: Checkmate
uh oh...
god, more, please.
Date: 06/21/08 06:50 pm Title: Checkmate
Wow, I'm actually feeling bad for Bushido. Who would have thought? I guess that part was really well written. To have made me sad I mean. I'm glad Bill and Tom are alright together but still... wow, I can't believe I'm saying this. Update soon
Date: 06/21/08 06:12 pm Title: Checkmate
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
IM SO SAD RIGHT NOW !!
I hate Andreas! I wished so much they got to see each other again before he left... :(
Date: 06/21/08 05:11 pm Title: Checkmate
No. I donīt want to Bushido die, because in that case he will be still sacred for Bill... no, Bill must find out by himself that he belongs to Tom... Tom is so good, so good guy, he doesnīt deserve such a behaviour... pls, let Anis live but Bill must fall in love with Tom... soon!!!
Wonderfull bittersweet story... update it soon, pls !!!
Date: 06/21/08 04:06 pm Title: A Time To Seek, And A Time To Lose
I hate Bill for his love to Anis... and the worst is that I understand him... if I knew that in the end there will be true love between Bill and Tom (especially from Billīs side), I will be happy - but I do not know nothing... Iīm sad and desperate...
Date: 06/21/08 03:32 pm Title: Checkmate
ohhh no
andreas i'll kill u...
update ASAP
Date: 06/21/08 01:56 pm Title: Checkmate
I don't..know...what..TO THINK. Because I really liked Bushido but like...Bill needs to be with Tom.
Anyways congrats on the award! You guys definitely deserved it!