Date: 10/31/11 04:28 pm Title: Prologue
I read 18th chapter and epilogue almost breathless, it's stuck in my chest, where I felt incredible pain all the time. I'm trying to breath again, but every time I pull myself together, tears begin to burn in my eyes again.
this was..an emotional carousel. I'm still feel a little bit dizzy, but I couldn't get out of this. your story picked up the worst and the best feelings from me. and now I feel totally emotionally exhausted. and thanks to you I can see everything more clearly. :)
authors did something unpredictable! I will never look at Anis the same way as before. I've never been his fan and association with Bill has always been something quite unnatural. BUT you got me! ;) the character you created was absolutely outstanding and I will never forget to General Bushido! for me he had the most successful character of the story. and he deserved the glorious death of course. alternating passages of his dying and Bills making love with Tom were damned effective! I also felt a big relieve when he decided to say goodbye to Bill after all.
so it should be and so it was written - by two amazing Goddesses Little Muse Majestrix. :)
Bill's character was also very special. so beautiful, so complicated. his visions were fatal. the most interesting parts, really. every time they started to realised, I felt freezing ran down my spine. every vision tore his heart alive, and I think that he deal with it as best as he could. and what made with him burning desire for Anis and duty and love for Tom?..nobody would be able to make it. so many times I've seen myself in him..so many times I've made the same mistakes like him in my life so I couldn't feel even a little bit of something negative for him. thanks to him, I've started to take this story very personal and I've begun to think about the true meaning of my life. :)
and Tom?..oh Tom.. his transformation from Vave's hot-blooded, stubborn and insistent heir in a loving and devoted partner was almost the most moving part! more touching is maybe his sweet ignorance. he deserves to know the truth, even if it was cruel and painful. but I can't still believe..he really didn't know a little about it..?! impossible.
this whole tragic triangle was just a game of fate. after a few days of reading, the magical world has became my world too and I can't wait to get back soon.
THANK YOU FOR THE BEST ADVENTURE IN MY LIFE!
Date: 09/30/11 11:28 pm Title: Epilogue
thrilling, beautiful story. sexy, spiritual and wonderful. thank you so very much for this.
Date: 09/30/11 11:23 pm Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
makes me sad, too. *pets bushido also*
Date: 02/24/11 11:09 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
I don't think i ever cried so much in my life....goodnight Anis...
Date: 02/20/11 05:48 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
I cried, and that would be the second fic on this site to have that effect on me. I was rooting for Tom all along, but this was heartbreaking.
They, all three of them, were victims here. My heart breaks for the lost General, for Bill's lack of knowledge the moment it happened, and for poor Tom's lack of knowledge of any of it. Ouch. Well done ladies.
Date: 01/21/11 06:47 am Title: Presentation
I think this is going to become my new addiction...I won't be able to stop until I've finished it XD
Date: 01/21/11 05:30 am Title: Distress and Disappointments
What a strange, interesting world you created here XD I would hate to be a woman living in this world. I am looking forward to reading more of this soon :)
Date: 01/21/11 04:50 am Title: Most Auspicious Meetings
This is very interesting so far.
Date: 01/21/11 04:20 am Title: Prologue
I've heard many good things about this story, but for some reason I have never gotten around to actually read it myself. I'm glad I finally did though, and I think this is a great start. I'm still a little confused about a lot of things in this, but I'm sure I will pick it up as I go XD
Date: 01/15/11 03:05 pm Title: Epilogue
So, so, so good. Lovely worldbuilding, great use of characters, fantastic story-telling. Brilliantly written (and it made me cry!). Thank you so much for writing and posting this - it was such a pleasure to read.
Date: 11/29/10 03:51 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow. I have no idea why I wait that long to read this story. Probably cause of Bushido, since I read twins almost exclusively. I understand why everybody loves this fic so much now and I’m so glad I gave it a chance. I was totally addicted and couldn’t stop reading. You guys have such an incredible talent for storytelling, it’s amazing. I can’t find the word to express how good this story was. I can’t wait to read the sequel. I will have to wait for a time when I can read it mostly in one sitting, cause I know that once I start, I won’t be able to stop until I reach the end ! Thank you so much for this marvelous journey, it was such an honor to read this fantastic story.
Date: 11/03/10 08:16 pm Title: Epilogue
Please don't hate me for not commenting before this but I haven't been able to stop reading this story. Now that I have stopped sobbing at Bushido dying and Bill finding out, I must tell you what I thought of this fantabulous piece of fiction. This had to be one of the best stories I've ever read on here. I loved Bill with both Tom and Bushido and was ready to accept whoever he was with. This was so happy/sad and it moved me so much. Thank you for this awesome piece of writing.
Date: 11/01/10 12:59 am Title: Epilogue
Amazing fic! Seriously, i'm really at a loss for words. This was just absolutely fantastic.
Date: 10/28/10 07:45 pm Title: Most Auspicious Meetings
I love this!
Date: 10/28/10 07:19 pm Title: Prologue
This is fantastic!
Date: 10/14/10 08:26 pm Title: No Good Deed...
Sorry but Jorg/Jost makes me wanna puke XD
Date: 09/11/10 01:01 am Title: Epilogue
how the hell did you evil evil authors convert me?!!?!? I was a total twincesty going into this and that how it ended up yet...IM NOT HAPPY ABOUT IT!!!! poor little Bushi...but wow this was an incredibly well thought out fic! I love this world you created. Is it odd that I keep picturing the I-Pad when ever you meantion the data pad? anyway reallly super awesome spifftacular fic...you had me crying when Anis died...
Author's Response: No, it's not weird you'd think of the iPad, but data pads have been in Science Fiction at least since the original Star Trek. The iPad is the effect, not the cause. ;) THE FUTURE IS NOW. *boogedy hands*
Date: 09/04/10 04:39 am Title: Epilogue
Poor Bill =( A broken heart never fully heals =(
I really loved this story =D
Date: 09/04/10 04:34 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
I loved this chapter !
I'm glad Bill will be happy with Tom.
I love how Bushido died thinking of Bill, and how much he cares about him =) I'm so sad he died =(
Date: 09/04/10 04:18 am Title: Checkmate
Anderas made a difficult choice but it was the right choice I think.
I really hope Bushido won't die =(