Date: 03/17/09 09:34 am Title: Epilogue
I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I cried, I laughed and I even blushed. I love your story telling abilities. It brings me to a whole other world.
Date: 03/17/09 09:34 am Title: Epilogue
I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I cried, I laughed and I even blushed. I love your story telling abilities. It brings me to a whole other world.
Date: 03/17/09 12:12 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
Wow. I don't even know what to say. NOOO!!! Bushido! Or Yay!! For Bill and Tom. Ugh. I'm soo conflicted.
As long as Bill is happy.....^__________^
Date: 03/13/09 10:49 pm Title: Epilogue
nein!!! dont end it here pleeeaaseee lol i loved this story!! thank you!
Date: 03/13/09 10:46 pm Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
oh my gosh, sooo sad. i was rooting for bushido in this one, i wont lie. normally im on tom's side, but wow. wonderfully written!
Date: 03/09/09 06:26 pm Title: Epilogue
T^T oh, my, god! That was....|sighs| oh my god, I can't speak. I knew it happend but I'm just speacless (practically) I need to say that this was a very well written, interesting, captivating story. I have been seeing A broken Hallelujah for a while and the only things that have stopped me from reading it was that it was a sequel, and it had Billshido. As stated before in my last review I now somewhat like that pairing. So now I can read the sequel. My heart hurts from thinking of this story it was so awesome! Once again, very well written, completely awesome and captivating, and I can't wait to start reading the sequel! ^^v
Date: 03/09/09 06:18 pm Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
T^T I read this while in class *not the smartest thing to do but I wasn't caught* and I literally was telling myself "I can't cry in class!" out loud while I read Bushido's death. :( To be honest when I found out he was going to die I was all 'YES!' then I thought about it and was sad :( |hugs bushido| POOR BABY!!!! T^T And Congrats, this story has officially made me like Billshido A bit. Not much, but enough to where I'll consider *for a long time* to read a Billshido story. :3 Onto the last chapter!!! ^^v
Date: 03/09/09 01:57 am Title: Beichte
Since I've only read THD once (and that's just a tragedy), I'm relishing in the foreshadowing of this chapter, and the absolutely beauty of Bill and Tom's relationship.
Even though I know it's coming, I can't bear the tear that is coming in the relationship.
The beach scene was even more beautiful than I remembered.
Date: 02/11/09 10:56 pm Title: Epilogue
Loved this! Simply loved this! I am a very big Billshido and Tom/Bill fan and I thought that this story portrayed them perfectly! I am very sad that Bushido died though :'( and pissed at Andi for deleting the message. Tom was written beautifully and Bill was very compelling! Sheer joy! Five out of five stars! ;)
Date: 02/07/09 01:47 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
As a twincest purist (I didn't realise the story also marked Bill/Bushido as a pairing til the attraction was mutual... you can't imagine the flails that ensued with the mere first kiss and all the small shouts of outrage when it was more) I can honestly say I enjoyed the story throughly. I liked that it made me feel different emotions: I was happy when Tom and Bill were happy and getting along, I was mad when Bill cheated on Tomi (repeatedly..), I was sad for Bill being heartbroken and pulled apart, I was amused by some random stuff and of course I enjoyed the glimpse of this AU you have created. The imagery in this story is wonderful, you both managed to submerge me into a whole new wonderful culture and that's no easy feat: You guys deserve much praise! Loads more ^_^ *hugs* And thank you for keeping the not-related-twincest pairing. I was so afraid Bill was going to leave Tom heartbroken and flee with Bushido (ty Andi!) but at the same time I'm sad for Bushido too as I grew to like him as well.
Author's Response: I think that's the exact kind of even-handed reaction we hope for from each reader. :)
Date: 02/06/09 03:35 pm Title: Prologue
it helped, thank you for explaining :)
Date: 02/06/09 12:17 pm Title: Epilogue
i just read this fic and loved it :D can't wait to start reading ABH :)
if it isn't too much, i just would like for you to explain the relation between the quote and the story, because i didn't get it at all :/
Author's Response: It's the idea that we have to have faith that making the right choice will put us on the right path and be better for us in the end, including doing one's duty, which is the basic struggle Bill has the entire story, finding that faith (especially when he believed he already had it). Hope that helps. :)
Date: 01/30/09 12:57 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
I'm happy Bill ended up with Tom, but this chapter still made me cry.
Date: 01/25/09 03:54 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my.
It's taken me a while to read this, and to begin with i didn't want to, as i dislike bill/bushido pairings. But now i am so pleased to have read this.
I cried when i finished the penultimate chapter and the ending was spectacular.
You're both very talented.
lufii
Date: 01/25/09 10:47 am Title: A Time To Be Born, And A Time To Die
i'm rereading this story for the 2nd time and i enjoy it more than the 1st time...now all is more clear and i understand better...
i cried like a baby when Anis died...with Bill in his mind and heart...it was such a painful moment
and i'll cry more for Bill's pain in the next chapter when he'll find out about Anis death
this story is so complex,at first i didn't get it : how Bill can love them both? why the Gods wanted to marry Tom and to cheat him with Bushido?
now i know it all
i'll say MAKTUB ,if u know what means...
Date: 01/18/09 04:47 am Title: Epilogue
I am sobbing right now.
I want to scream right now, but I won't.
Your talent amazes me. They way you two rip emotion from underneath my feet is astonishing.
This ending is heartbreaking and yet so immaculate.
I can barely form enough words to tell you two how phenominal this story is.
The way you portray the absolute devistation of Bill is breathtaking. I find myself wishing there was possibly an alternative ending to this story, but that would leave to many loose ends.
This is the second time I have read this story, and I think in another month I will read it again. Please, please, please never stop writing.
P.S: Sorry for any typos, as it is rather hard to type when you are crying.
=)
Date: 01/02/09 01:21 pm Title: Epilogue
Okay, so I have spend over 15 hours, in the past 3 days reading this fic alone. And I must say this is colossal and is one of the best fiction I have ever read, one that just pull your heart out and put it back.
To start off I'm not a fan of Bushido as the real person. But you two talented writer had the magic of portraying him into this lovestuck lonesome warrior who never really got any love. I grief for his death, even being a twincest fan.
Tom, first he's this 'playboy' and really I didn't put much hope in the beginning. But he grew into this protective, caring sahvahd. He is amazing and if I happen to have a husband like him I'll die without regret.
Finally Bill, my poor baby. As much as I love the real Bill, you two ladies had made the character extraodinary. He'd gifted/plagued with visions, bearly more than a child and consumed with his own desire, and at the same time condemn by his religious conscience. I don't blame him for being slutty, swaying back and forth between the two man. For he is torn between his emotions and commitment himself. I love that he showed his childish side before Andreas (love Andreas as well). The chapter with Tom almost sending him away made him specially vunerable, mades me want to cuddle him. Not to mention how you decribed him like a nymph from out of this world, which truly fits him. Bill and beauty is inseparatable.
The plot is facinating. The whole AU setting, amazing. I have difficulty saying how I love this fic since my vocabulary is too limited. To cut it short, you have written a legendary fanfic and should be remembered.
I must read something more light hearted before I go on the Broken Hallelujah. Although my fingers cannot wait to click.
Date: 12/17/08 10:06 am Title: Epilogue
Oh wow!
I've read that in one go and it was just so beautiful!
Since Bill's vision, I knew Bushido had to die, and yet, reading the battle scene, I couldn't prevent myself from hoping he wouldn't, that you would find some kind of way to avoid his death.
I know it was the best choice, for Bill to truly be happy with Tom, but it still made me sad, my eyes were full of tears.
Congratulations and thznk you for this incredible story.
Date: 12/03/08 09:54 pm Title: Epilogue
I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY A LOT A LOT!
I do think the ending was the better path to take, because it, personally, made more sense to me. But it was still rather sad!
I definitely cried a couple times.
This story was AMAZING. Good job!