Date: 04/16/23 12:55 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 02/06/20 03:23 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
this was a really good story!
you should do a sequel to this!
Date: 12/28/12 07:43 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
So hot ! I could imagine how sexy Bill might be in skinny clothes...
I really loved the steps to go from a brothers' relation to love and desire.
Amazing story !
Kiss - kty
Date: 02/18/11 02:06 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
That was sexy! I love a stripper Bill :D
Date: 02/09/11 06:33 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
That ended way too soon. Way way way too soon. I'm feeling like I got robbed of my climax or something lol.
Date: 02/09/11 06:19 am Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
A lap dance from Bill? Hell to the fucking yea. Especially if he dances in that outfit he wore on Sukkiri earlier today...
Date: 02/09/11 06:10 am Title: Chap. 4 : High Heels
”I bet I could work your pole pretty good!”
Hahahaha really cracked up at that. I bet he could too ;-) Not sure if your fic is adult rated lol. I can't remember.
Date: 08/17/10 03:30 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
I like this story very much. It was fun and original, I really like the idea of strip club in their basement:D And Bill as a stripper? Amazing:))) Simone was kinda benevolent, when she let Bill do that. And I like the way Bill love his weird hobby. I mean... unusual, not weird:D
Tom was pretty confused when he started feel different about his little brother, and I like it... when he checked Bill out in his hot leather clothes and felt weird about it, or when he was jealous... great:D
Hope I did not make too many mistakes, itīs not easy to say in English whatīs on my mind. Sorry about that:)
Date: 02/20/10 09:33 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Haha I loved the sarcams! really fun!
Date: 05/07/09 12:16 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
hahaha poor andi!
Date: 04/18/09 09:22 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Dear firelucy,
I have read this story some time ago and I cannot say how much I love it! I really liked it and a couple of friends of mine also.
Of course, I must not forget the coauthor!
At a certain moment, I thought I maybe could translate it for the Dutch Tokio hotel forum. I am sure they will like it! In addition, the forum needs some new story’s, it is a bit empty down there.
Nevertheless, to translate it, I need your permission. That is my request. Am I allowed to translate your fan fiction and post it on the Dutch forum? Of course, I will translate the reviews for you.
It will take me some time to translate the whole bit, but I will finish it.
I am curious for your answer.
Yours sincerely,
Dian (missde@live.nl)
PS: I am sorry if this is double. But we had some problems with the internet when I posted it as 'contact author'.
Date: 03/28/09 02:51 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
He's cool. Ayo Technology from Milow fits tot this piece : "Twirling around that pole and swaying his hips seductively in rhythm with the music, completely lost to the outside world."
Date: 01/31/09 11:25 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Wow, this story is hilarious man.
Date: 01/31/09 11:06 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Wow, Bill's fucking hot...
Date: 01/31/09 11:00 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
"and he was going to get another lap dance."
That was so sexy the way Bill gave Tom a
lap dance.... I wish... Damn TOKIO HOTEL!!
Date: 01/31/09 10:46 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
“Oh Bill, please don’t cry.”
Awww... I love it when Tom get's all big-brother-protective-mode. It's just so adorable!!
Date: 01/31/09 10:41 pm Title: Chap. 1 : Exotic Dancing
Ohlalala!! Sexy Bill is dancing!!
Date: 01/19/09 08:51 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Great Story :)
Good job
Date: 01/16/09 02:25 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
hahahaha, poor andi! sucker should really open his eyes haha.
Very nice story:D
Date: 01/16/09 02:17 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
xD oeps? lol
Shower scene was HOT!