Date: 10/06/08 05:13 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
*Yay, Bill's first dance :D
*Bill working at the club, and so is Tom :)
I think Tom is getting turned on..
*Get lost, stupid man!
*Haha, that ice cube xD
*They kissed :)
Date: 10/06/08 05:04 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
*Sexy, Bill wants to dance when the club is open :P
*That lapdance is kinda hot!
*“You have drugs!”
“We do not have drugs Andi, that’s just…eye shadow.”
“Oh, black suits you better though.”
-> whahaha xD How stupid can one be? xD
Nice work!
Date: 10/06/08 04:54 pm Title: Chap. 4 : High Heels
*How cute, Bill being all emberassed because he asks Janice to teach him some moves :)
*sounded like ten elephants, but what was probably only his older brother. xD
*I so like to see Bill in those boots :P
Nice chapter!
Date: 10/05/08 07:48 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
*I so would like to see Bill dancing on that pole :p
*Drunken Bill, oh how wrong you are, Tom :P
*Well, well, well, Tom is admiring a dancing Bill :)
*Don't cry, Billa!
*Tssk, Tom, don't tease him on a moment like that! :P
*I'm glad Bill told Tom everything :)
Nice work!
Date: 10/05/08 07:30 pm Title: Chap. 1 : Exotic Dancing
*I'd like to see Bill undressing in front of his mirror like that :P
*Oh no, Simone caught him :O
* Why do we have a fucking stripping club in our BASEMENT?”
-> I'd like to know that, too.
*Switch roles, and switch roles again :P And now Simone is asking Bill about his dancing :P Nice progression!
*Yay, Bill gets to practice in the basement :)
Nice chapter!
I love the build-up!
Date: 10/05/08 07:13 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
I already like it!
I was reading and I was the whole time like : What's in that basement?
Finally I know, this is going to be fun :)
Date: 09/28/08 01:38 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Yep! A BIG Thank You goes out to Dixxi for that amazing banner and for making you finish this story! :)
The sex was HOT!!! Holy H_ll....
You still got the talent to write really good smut, girl... :)
“Ironic how I finally got to ride your pole.” Gulp...GLXBLT, drools...
It's not fair to Andi... I wonder what he will think when he finds out... Oh well, we will never know, will we???
I am still amazed that you seem to have such intricate knowledge of gay sex... ;)
Not complaining, not complaining at all ...
A HUGE Thank You, for completing the story!
Anders
Date: 09/28/08 10:18 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Oh they ending. I'm a bit sad but it was an amazing ending though =D
"It really wasn’t nice seeing his little brother like this, Tom thought, all worried out of his mind in those tight leather pants…wait, eyes up Tomi-boy, no ogling Bill’s body now!"
haha, Bill is just irresistible. Poor him, he's all worried because they know now. Bet it isn't as bad as he thinks.^^
"“Fuck, you do know that brothers don’t do this, right?” Tom only pulled away for a second to catch his breath before diving again in without giving Bill a chance to answer."
who cares I don't haha (A)
You know that was just sooooooo hot, this story was just all hotness =D
“Ironic how I finally got to ride your pole.”
O_o almost killed me there :-p
That was just so hot, got butterflies now :-p
“They won’t tell me!” Andy whined, flopping down in an armchair just to be pushed out of it by Georg. "
Poor Andy :-p nobody wants to tell him anything. Maybe he just have to find out on his one haha.
Great ending, for a great story to.
Good job you guys =D
*hugs*
Date: 09/22/08 02:32 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
you should do a sequel
i really enjoy your writing
Date: 09/21/08 11:27 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
wow , i wanna read more xxx
ty soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo x 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 hehe tyx
Author's Response: lol, thanksies lucy, love ya for it <3
Date: 09/17/08 10:41 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
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JESUS F*CKING CHRIIIIST :O it was amazing, and you even put me in this chapter! (i love when you mention the pole, haha XD)
Yaaaay, I finally got my awaited lap dance, a naked one in addition :P i am as hyper as person with a flu and fucking headache can be n___________n the sex scene was sooo hot, and omg how I want to be THAT particular pole :P haha Andi still doesn't know that he is soooo close to his beloved strip club and I think that it will not change soon. it's sooo cruel, buahaha :D
I feel so special that you mentioned me in the chapter end notes of a story that will be quoted for years all around the world :P I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!
Me needs to find some dark place to cough my guts out and die in peace. So me says good bye and loves you.
Buzi;*
Author's Response: lohoool iza of mine, I'm so happy you liked it ! well I had to put you in this chap now didn't I, it was all your doing after all ,) oh my God *is imagining being Bill's strip pole...is imagining Bill using Tomi as a strip pole...naked...dies* so he definitively got to dance on Tomi's pole in the end xD thank you so much for this iza, oh and by the way DO NOT DIE !!! very important !!!
Date: 09/16/08 12:51 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
omg omg
the end?
the fucking end
O_O
sorry I was just surprised
I love that
the sex...wow
WOW
the best Ive ever read...and I mean it
ride your pole
LOL
you killed me there
and the secret, I love the G's...and how Andreas is so clueless, Mcdonalds xD
and yes, a Wolfs tale, that fic is pure love and the banner is fantastic!
Author's Response: aw, sorry for making it the end, it was just time, you know? oh my God, thank you so much for saying all of that, love you for it em (like you didn't know that already) so happy you like the new fic, that means so, so, so much to me! see ya around girl, love ya <3
Date: 09/16/08 12:49 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
This chapter is so hot it made me wanna scream reading every line. Bill is such a teaser and the best of it is he is faking innocent most of the time. Darn, hate to see it end so soon, but you girls did a wonderful job.
Date: 09/16/08 01:36 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Great chapter :D I loved reading this ^^
xx Chi
Date: 09/15/08 11:31 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
wow, you revived this fic! and then you finished it... *pout* i want some more pole-dancing billa -- he's a hottie ;D
Date: 09/15/08 08:26 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Hey Luce! And Hey to Andy too! Great end to your story! I love how smut makes everything better. Whose idea was it to make Andreas clueless? So funny! Loved it!
Date: 09/15/08 07:45 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
are you kidding with me ?!?!?! :O
omg, it's over :'|
haha - but I have enjoyed this story so much ^_^
this last chapter was HOT o___o
thanks for sharing (L)
Date: 09/15/08 04:53 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
This story is just "big cinema"!! hehe...really liked it, specially since it had a kind of different plot than many of the other stories^^ ...sad it's over=( but you two are my favorite authors, so I have much more to read:D
Date: 09/15/08 04:08 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
that was HOT
*cough*
Date: 09/15/08 03:49 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Wwwwooooo yes baby!!! Lap-dance and a good fuck. Tom's a lucky guy. Cone to think of it - Bill is too. *drool* =P