Date: 05/07/08 02:49 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
wow o.o that's a new twist xD A stripper bar in the basement! haha
I really want to read more of this :P update soon!
Author's Response: thank you so much, we were really exited about this :) we'll update as soon as possible !!! ~luce
Date: 05/07/08 03:53 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
OMG
I am luaghing this is insanely amazing
a stripper pole in the basements?
what other serets are to be discovered omg...LOL
I love it...so far so good, its always hard to review the first chapter of something but this was great!
Author's Response: haha we're so happy you liked it Em :) I know it's hard to review the first chapter, but I'm very glad you did :) means a lot to us !!! luce
Date: 05/07/08 12:58 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
I have to know what happens next.. If there is a god, it will include Bill and the stripper pole.
Author's Response: points to Andy, you'll have to talk to her then, if you want a god I mean :) thanks ~luce
Date: 05/07/08 12:56 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
yep yep liked it.
Author's Response: so glad you did ! luce
Date: 05/07/08 12:33 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
Woohoo! Stripper!Bill and Tomi with his pockets full of ones :B
Author's Response: now THAT would be a sight for gods :D ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 09:53 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
GOD LUCY! My Stomache was like clenched through the whole thing!
I was like "whats in the basement!? whats in the basement!? WHATS IN THE BASEMNT!?" My dirty 16 year old mind filling with kinky images of what it could be..lol
I can't wait to see what Bill does about his "stipper pole" urge XP....A sexi sexi dance maybe?? ;D
For Tom maybe?? ;P
This story is very anticipating and suspensful...i LUV it! teehee
Can't wait for the next chapter!
*Hs&Ks*
~*Andi*~
Author's Response: haha we wanted to keep you waiting until the end of the chap and then reveal it to you, happy it worked ;) Sooooooo happy you liked it cus it means a lot to us, you should have seen the conversations we had ;p thanks Andi, love ya
Date: 05/06/08 09:53 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
haha i love this so far.
you must go on with this :))
Author's Response: we will, that's a promise ! ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 09:07 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
kinky, I LOVE IT. =]
Author's Response: haha oh yes ;) ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 08:09 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
omg bill seems so cute and sexy!
Author's Response: nice combination ;p thanks ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 07:59 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
I want their parents. A stripped bar in the basement would be totally awesome. Personally, I'd say screw the pole and jump behind the bar, but that's just me. :) This is shaping up to be a good fic and I can't wait for the next chapter. How is Simone going to explain this to the kids and does Gordon know about the basement? Why no Tv after 11 if the walls are sound proof btw?
Author's Response: your questions will be answered love, count on it :) ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 07:52 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
NIIICE OMG MORE
Author's Response: will do ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 07:49 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
you gonna make bill dance for me?
Author's Response: maybe *winks* luce
Date: 05/06/08 07:47 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
uuhh interesting, I'm intrigued ;)
Author's Response: happy you are ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 07:43 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
No, it's not wrong at all. Go on, Billy!!
My god, that was amazing.
I though they did orgys down there. Maybe they do :P
*hugs*
Author's Response: haha thanks, and no, no orgys, sorry ;P just a strippclub *hugs back* ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 07:34 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
Continue, continue! Loved it.
Author's Response: will do ~luce
Date: 05/06/08 07:30 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
This was interesting. I'm a little disturbed by the idea but I'd like to know where you're going w/ this. I'm sorry, I'm still to tired to write a good review. Update soon?
Author's Response: aw poor Queen :( happy it interrested you though and hope you'll like what comes next :)
Date: 05/06/08 07:01 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
Ohhhh thus sounds interesting. I wanna know where your going to go with thus. So please continue!!!
Author's Response: thanks, we'll update as fast as we can :) ~luce