Date: 01/16/09 02:08 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
good thing that tom kept control of his temper^^
Umm you want a private show by bill?xD
Date: 01/16/09 01:55 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
xD haahaha lovely chappy! Gosh if Bill would practise on me *naughty thoughts*
Date: 01/16/09 07:23 am Title: Chap. 4 : High Heels
”I bet I could work your pole pretty good!” 0_o
the things Bill says and does...
so sexy!
Date: 01/15/09 09:22 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
heheehehe, busted billy xD
Date: 01/15/09 09:03 pm Title: Chap. 1 : Exotic Dancing
oh man this is really sexy^^
Date: 01/15/09 08:41 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
xD lol love this idea!!!
Very creative^^
Date: 12/29/08 03:56 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
I couldn't wait till Thursday for an update of Winter Kisses so I re-read this instead.
I love it. So much. :D It was really cute. I always knew Simone was a minx. ;)
I like the progression of Tom losing his logic throughout the whole story. It sort of tied it together for me.
Oh, and that guy that got escorted of the club...that was Jost, right? Haha....
Anyway...this is another story that's going on my favorite list... :]
Date: 12/08/08 01:38 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
very funnny it was good a little goofy and not serious but i liked the atmosphere of the story good job girls!
Date: 12/08/08 01:28 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
lol I love how the G's have been absent for such a long time and they show up now! very funny plot device!
Date: 12/08/08 12:18 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Yeah Bill danced well and got Tom all horney and then they kissed *beams* woo hoo love it love love it a lot!
Date: 12/07/08 11:22 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
the most shit-packed piece of logic – nice I like this line. As Tom was struggling with a rather unexpectedly ’hard’ problem – awesome line, I love it. “You have drugs!” – very funny, unexpected and very funny.
Date: 12/07/08 11:09 pm Title: Chap. 4 : High Heels
"Basically being normal teenage boys. Well, maybe one could scratch ’normal’, it wasn’t exactly normal to discuss the ’strip bar in the basement’. Other than that it was correct…well maybe scratch ’boys’ too, when talking about Bill’s new moves he seemed more like a girl anyway. And the cuddling part…it was brotherly…almost. For Tom and Bill at least it was brotherly, for everybody else…well everybody else didn’t know so, problem solved" - I love this bit it's so funny, saying something and then correcting it and then just basicly writing it off as a bad job *chuckles* very funny; ”I bet I could work your pole pretty good - oh god! ggguuhh!! and I'm spent! lol
Date: 12/07/08 10:53 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
I love it. Its really funny and super cute. I love exactly how Tom caught Bill. I was sure it was going to happen that way but it was still cute.
Date: 12/07/08 10:38 pm Title: Chap. 1 : Exotic Dancing
This really funny, and kind of cute, and I can't wait to see what Bill does on that pole!!!
Date: 12/07/08 08:00 pm Title: Prologue : The Basement
*claps* this is so much fun. I love the idea and great character development! awesome FL awesome!
Date: 10/22/08 09:56 am Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
i have only two words!
PLEASE and SEQUEL
Date: 10/13/08 08:12 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
Fucking uneblievable!!! >_<
I've laughed a couple of hundred times of this xD
DAMN GOOD story!!! LOOOVED IT :D
Where the HELL do you get your ideas from?! O_O
Oh, and sorry for the swearing by the way x]
As we say in Norway "Terningkast 6!!!"
Or... Ummh... You know... The number six on the dice XD *Blooooonde* :D *Hugs you* ^_^
Date: 10/08/08 05:41 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
I just reread the story and really can't belive that is finished. Won't you consider writing more or a sequel? I loved it soooooo much. I guess I can accept it like this and move on to other stories written by you.
I must repeat that you did a wonderful job on this story. One of the best so far.
Date: 10/06/08 05:31 pm Title: Chap. 8 : those who knows a little, and those who knows a lot
*Of course they can't tell the G's everything :P
*Oh god, that was hot!
*If only you knew, Andreas :P
I love this fic!
Date: 10/06/08 05:22 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
*Sexy times in the shower :)
*poor Andy, so horny :P
*One of the deep slices on his hip showed off that he wasn’t wearing any underwear.
-> that's so sexy!
*Great! The G's being in the strip club :P And then they realize it's Bill dancing up there :P xD
Love it!