Date: 05/17/08 11:01 am Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
For some reason I imagined Bill in gold shorts... I dunno why! Still, good story so far! kinda hot to imagine Bill dancing and stripping *dreams*
More please :D
Author's Response: KINDA hot ??? man that's a mental image I never wanna forget ;) thank you so much girl, it really means the world to us! ~luce
Date: 05/17/08 07:25 am Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
i loved it :D please gimme more!
Author's Response: so happy you do :) there will be more soon! ~luce
Date: 05/17/08 12:43 am Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
It seems they are a little out of character, but you know what, I totally love the idea of bill doing pole dancing! This boy is so hot in girly pants. Can't wait to see more of this story. Love it love it.
Author's Response: yeah, they are kind of out of character, but we really think they have to be for this to work out :) thanks you so much for this! ~luce
Date: 05/16/08 06:19 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
i like it so please update soon!!!
Author's Response: thanks, will do love ~luce
Date: 05/16/08 09:04 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
Ofcourse I would find my way in here!
I mean...
Your the author for crying out loud! ^_^
I haven't had a lot of free time douring to my exams these last couple of weeks but when I saw your name I knew I just had to read this one!
And how I know about the powder thing? *wiggles eyebrows* That's a secret... ;)
Author's Response: oh anne you make me so happy :) guh I think just about everyone is strugling with school right now, me and andy almost don't see each other, wich is bad considering we're writing this fic togther ;p and what a secret indeed girl hihi love ya, luce
Date: 05/16/08 07:46 am Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
oooooooooooo... not like it, you mean love it? I LOVE THE STORY and you of course :D Can't wait to read another chapter. It's developing quite nicely I must say. Will Tom in the future watch when Bill practise? I kinda expected Tom to find out later on in the story. To have Bill expirience more things. But will be fun if Tom starts to have wet dreams becouse of what he saw. And I still expect some jealousy when he sees Bill with the OMC as the pairing goes.
Write some more soon :D
Author's Response: hiih thankies love ;) this really made us smile, it's so nice to read the reviews that come in because it's actually those who keep us going ! so thank you very much and we hope you'll like the next one :) ~luce
Date: 05/16/08 03:54 am Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
Of course I liked it, I've been reviewing every chapter. :P *laughs* I love Bill in the princess shorts and the way Tom looked at him, it made me want to squeal and clap. I love the language you use as well and all the tiny laughs you put into regular sentences, you keep this fic light-hearted, but still really good at the same time. So, all I can say is, when's the next chapter coming out?
Author's Response: Oh my God thank you so much! we LOVE the reviewers that follow us through the story and we're so happy that you do :) the next chapter will be out sometime this weekend most likely, if nothing big comes up ;p again thank you so much, we apreciate it beyond measures! ~luce
Date: 05/16/08 01:41 am Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
I could actioly imagine Bill doing something like that..(ýeahh my sick imagination...) and I'm glad he finally told Tom! Update soon again! :))
Author's Response: haha thanks :) me and andy are having insanly much fun imagining Bill as a stripper ;p you wouldn't believe the conversations we have ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 09:27 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
Oh my Lucy!
My dealer is BACK!
I loved it! Yay! *clapping hands*
Please continue this! PLEASE!
Oh... And by the way.. Psssst... Did you know that strippers actually use powder on their hands so they won't slip off the pole? Just a little usefull (or not) information... Oh! I would love to see you throw in a funny comment or two about that! You allways write the best humor!
By the way... Did I mention that I absolutely LOVE THIS?!
Author's Response: ANNE *is all squealy and jumpy* hey girl, we're so happy you found your way to our fic :D oh my God and the powder...hahaaaaaaaa I'm already getting ideas ;p thanksies...just wondering, how on earth did you know that ? naughty anne ;) thank you so much !!! means the world to us ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 09:11 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
WRITE MOOREEEEEE =)
Author's Response: will do :) ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 09:10 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
I like it! I'm...not quite sure when it updated last, but this was a very good chapter! I can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: the updates are very iregular due to massive school work :) thank you so much ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 07:26 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
No, no. I love it! It's an original and amazing idea too.
Author's Response: thank you so much, reviews are really what makes us go on wih this :) ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 06:09 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
Hey Lucy! (And Andy too, though I don't know you.) Not gonna lie, this isn't my favorite story. I'm not sure why. maybe not enough conflict? I do a lot of acting and the number one rule is to "raise the stakes!" Maybe that's the problem? Come think of it it doesn't have a lot of rising action (yay for actor language!) Sorry I can't be more helpful.
Author's Response: hey Queen :) we are so extreemly grateful that you review this cus sometimes we need to actually get constuctive critisism as well, it is the only way to get better after all :) we wanted to make this story light hearted and funny rather than angsty, but the plot will pic up throughout the chapters! it's just taking us some time to get used to the idea of stripper!Bill ;p thank you Queen, it really means a lot to us ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 05:26 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
woooww.. i think it's really hot to imagine how bill can dance on a pole!! :D it's great how you describe the details about poledancing, and how you tell everything about their thoughts with a lot of emotion.
you definitely should go on! please update soon! i'm wondering if one day, bill will perform in a full club ;-)
Author's Response: oooooooh hihihi thank you so much, love you for your review !!! soooooooo much! God that was just *is blushing* thanks ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 05:14 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
oh, I love it! Really! if it weren't for you guys, I would never have thought to imagine the deliciousness that is Bill dancing on a pole XD
Author's Response: you wouldn't *goes HUGE eyed* wow that has been like a fantasy of mine for sooooo long ;) thanksies hun ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 03:50 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
Loved it! And I'm glad that Tom knows now =)
Author's Response: yeah we are too ;p thanks ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 03:36 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
Luuuuuuuuuuceeeeeeeeeeee *runs to you and glomps you to the ground*
I'M TIREEEEEEEDD....*cries on ur shoulder* this week has been...*looks scared*...horrible...!!!
my body is in a mess, my mind is even worst. x(
i cant get any sleep...i look like a fucking zombie!!!
i've been studing till 2.am and then i have to wake up at 5.30 am! ARGHH...!!!
I CANT TAKE THIS ANYOMER!!!... and this hasnt ended yet... O_O'......... omg, im gonna die, i swear.
IM SO SORRY!!!! IM SORRYYYYYY PLEASE FORGIVE MEEEEEEEEE!!!! *cries her eyes out*
I havent been *sob* online *sob*
i didnt got too much time to be in here..and when i was on you were off
Author's Response: oh baby, princess *cradles you and mumbles sweet nothings* it's summer soon honey, really soon, just a couple of more weeks and you will be free :) there is nothing to forgive prinsess, and if it was it would have to be life, sometimes it really sucks, believe me I knows ! *kisses your forehead* now go to sleep baby, please?
Date: 05/15/08 02:55 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
I love this story, it's awesome. A really good plot and everything! :D
OMG, Tom caught Bill doing it O.O And he liiiiked it O.o Oh my!
New chap soon?
Author's Response: oh thank you so much, it really menas the world to us to hear such things ! we will try to update really soon, promise ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 02:20 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
keep going,
tis a good story!!!
Author's Response: thank you, it means a lot! ~luce
Date: 05/15/08 01:57 pm Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
More, more more!!!!!
Author's Response: haha soon love ;) ~luce