Date: 05/31/08 03:23 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Lemme guess.. Reviews? ;D
Omg, I love this story!!! XDDD
That was very smooth of Tom, putting an icecube down that guy's pants. lol!
Date: 05/31/08 02:14 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
I will support you for both if ya'll let me have Bill and Tom every once in a while for wicked twincest things. *laughs* Sorry, I missed reviewing the last chapter, I was out of town. Anyway, the review:
We're finally getting to the twincest! *squeals* You're evil teases though, you make them kiss then go to bed, but at least we got to see Bill dance and Tom be all jealous. So, good jobs, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05/31/08 01:15 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
First, can I whine for a bit? It's too short! I wanna read more or billa's charm getting all the men fall head over heel for him. You're right, bills can turn any straight man gay.
I love his look in this one, smokey eyes, torn t-shirt, hot pants and high heels. I'm still hoping for fish net though.
And congrats on tomi getting a taste of billa, please keep it coming.
Date: 05/31/08 09:36 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Loved it!! =)
Date: 05/31/08 08:12 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
I love this story and finally they sort of kissed...a bit. But I'm sure more delicious things are to come in the very near future, right? RIGHT???
XD
Date: 05/31/08 07:52 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
hehe..I absolutely love this fic! It has such a different plot than many of the other:D gah...you guys are great!
Date: 05/31/08 07:51 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
*giggles* i love the chapter!!!!
Date: 05/31/08 07:21 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
OMG, his first show!!! *_*
I'd really like to be there for the next :P
Awesome story, really!
Date: 05/31/08 07:16 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Omg that kiss! *dies* loved! Glad Tom got rid of that creep at the bar as well, how dare he say that stuff about Bill! Man keep writing chapters like this and world domination will be yours! More please :D
Date: 05/31/08 07:05 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
DAAAMMMNNNN!!!! That's what I imagine whenever I am stuck with a horrible mental image (usually planted by a friend to be mean, cause they know I vang block mental images) - I'm that case, I imagine Bill and a pole. *drool* works every time.
Great job!! Well written. Totally sexxi. =P
Date: 05/31/08 06:51 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Heh, you would have some serious competition over the ownership of TH and the domination of the world of course. But the second is not so important XD
mmmmmmmmmmmmm... having Bill and Tom all to ourselves *droll droll*
I really loved the ice cubes in the pants. How can a stupid little thing like that idiot think about seducing Bill, doesn't he know that Bill is already occupied by a possessive Tom? Loved the kiss tough. Can't wait for Bill to realize that he really loves Tom, couse Tom now just has to understand that the Nile is not only a river in Egypt. :D
Continue the good work of course.
Date: 05/31/08 06:43 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Bill's performance must have been really hot, what with all the pervs and all :D
Good chapter.
Date: 05/31/08 06:05 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
No lap dance. whyyyyyyy TT____________TT
But I liked this chapter anyway. But if there had been lap dance I would have liked it better. I want a lap dance.
When I see Bill's photos I feel like a lesbian... After reading your story I feel like a lesbian even more. Bill is so feminine *____* and the fact that he wears girly clothes and dances on a pole (XDDD) doesn't help.
Anyway. Tom was the best :D:D:D but he didn't get a lap dance T_______T i bet he wouldn't complain if he did n_n
Update very soon! Me waits. As always.
buzi;*
Date: 05/31/08 05:32 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Ownership of me? ^^ Here's ya review! I liked it soooooo much. Jeez, if those men think they can have Bill in their bed, they'll first have to pass Tom AND me! And thousands of other fangirls! ^^
Go on!
Date: 05/31/08 05:19 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
I can imagine Bill dancing there, love the sight of it, just hot ;-)
Still in denial Tom :-p guess that things are starting to slib. Great move, dropping a cube of ice down to the man's pants. That serves him right because Bill is Tom's twin, he is his, isn't he :-p ooh they kissed :-p Yeah Bill way did you kiss your brother and why did he kiss you back, mmh I wonder :-p I totally have no idea, hihi. I loved this chapter, great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter so update as soon as you can ;-)
Date: 05/28/08 02:29 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
Wow, just finished reading the whole thing. And now I'm like
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Please, write more, and write FAST!
Author's Response: will write as soon as possible love :) thank you ~luce
Date: 05/27/08 11:34 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
lookin' good!
Author's Response: thanksies ~luce
Date: 05/27/08 12:50 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
You two are BRILLIANT!!! You bring together everything I wanna see! Lap dance, possessive tomi, innocent clueless bill with sex face XD, what more could I ask for? I love everything you wrote~
Andi walking on bill giving a lap dance, XD that's a good one.
Oh I know what else do I want, bill in fishnet stockings! Come on you know he looked delicious in those, let him try them on sometime.
Author's Response: so you want our little Billa in stockings huh? net stockings...well Andy, whatcha think, can we do that for this little reviewer of ours? ;p thank you so much girl, this review is really worth a pair of stockings I think xD loves ~luce
Date: 05/27/08 11:53 am Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
I had to re-read this chapter, because I had had a dream and I didn't know if I was dreaming about the content of your story or it was my own imagination ^^. I dreamt that I was reading your story, Bill was giving a lap dance for Tom and Tom told him that he was giving him an erection o____o" Bill giggled and hugged Tom.
Haha I love my dreams XD. [Not so long ago I dreamt about Bill giving Geo a blowjob o__o yuck!]
PLEASE UPDATEEEEEEEEEE or i will die.
buzii;*
Author's Response: aaargh *bad mental images* oh noes Iza, don't say bill, georg and blowjob in the same sentence...that's just...wrong! you will not die for we will update...one day...no I'm just kiddin with ya ;p ~luce
Date: 05/27/08 12:45 am Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
omg
LOL
well Tom is being awfully jelous and possesive for someone who's just looking out for is brother dont you think?
and Bill doing a lap dance, thats just...hot!! my god...imagine that with his new hairstyle and everything NOM NOM
Author's Response: ooooooh noooooooo Tomi's not being jealous at aaaal ;p hihi Em, you know I had a blast writing that lap dance scene xD thanskies love ya ~luce