Date: 07/06/08 07:34 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
Okay I have to, I just have to review it RIGHT NOW! O_O This. Is... *pulls up dictionary.com* ASTOUNDING! HA! There we go! That will work. I'd list all the other words too but even all of them bunched together just doesn't cut it. >=o I love it! Hilarious! Just...*shakes head* okay I'm continuing now.
Author's Response: haha that impatient are we ,) that's so sweet of you summers, me loves you, and andy too for reviewing !!! *kisses n hugs*
Date: 07/06/08 07:05 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
What an awesome story!
There were quite a few lines that made me laugh, for example "[...]to greet what sounded like ten elephants, but what was probably only his older brother. " or "[...] Bill already moved like an angel…a very dirty, scantly clad angel…ok so not an angel then."
The conversation between Simone and Bill almost embarrassed me at first because I couldn't help but imagining I had to talk to my mother about such things xD
And we have got some suspense as well, now that the Gs discovered Bill's and Tom's secret.... aww, I can't wait to read more! ... I can't wait to read more about a certain jealous and possessive brother... hehe :D
Author's Response: aw we're glad you like our humor darling, makes us smile ! and omg oO having that sort of conversation with my mom...I'd die ! haha and yes, Tom is a little possesive isn't he ,p
Date: 07/06/08 04:59 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
I liked it! But like OOPS, they found out! ^^ THis is gonna be great, right?
Author's Response: hopefully ,p thanks for this !
Date: 07/06/08 04:33 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
STORY IS GREAT. BUT WHAT HAPPENS?!!!!!? PLEASE FINISH IT SOON. PLEASE *POUTING*
Author's Response: we will continue as soon as possible, promise, but there are other stories (and vacations) taking up a lot of time
Date: 07/06/08 03:45 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
Interesting...
mhmm, I wonder what is gonna happen now that they know (:
love it.
Author's Response: hihi me too ,p thanks !
Date: 07/06/08 03:13 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
AAAAAAAAhahahha oh this chapter is too good with the G's finding out and everything!
Author's Response: hihi thanksies, makes us smile !
Date: 07/06/08 02:21 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
H'oshit! Can't wait to see what the G's do!
I missed this, dearhearts! Glad to see it's back! ;D
Author's Response: aw happy you are ! hihi and what the Gs will do ? ,p you'll find out!
Date: 07/06/08 02:20 am Title: Chap. 7 : Boys night out
I like the idea behind this chapter, though the G's just seem to be thrown in as a convenient plot device. If they were in the previous chapters I don't remember them. *shrugs* I like the teasing the two of you are doing with the smut, just giving us a little taste and making us wait for the whole thing. What happened to you two? You like disappeared for a while without up-dating, RL going alright?
Author's Response: the Gs were 'thrown in' because of the need to make the story a little wider and not only have it in Bill and Tom's small bubble ,) haha and what happened to us? well I've been away for vacation, Andy's lost internet for three weeks, I've had In the Attic to work on, Andy's got Signed in to work on...so yeah ,p thanks for reviewing !!!
Date: 07/02/08 09:14 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
I'm through with guessing what you want. I made a miserable job last time, so i'm just going to give you a review instead! ;)
Let me start by saying:
guaaaa... (drools like a idiot)
Garrgghhhh (mumbles incomprehensible)
Good, funny, hot, sexy, romantic and just soo adorable...
Thank you!
Last available chapter... Sighs :(
Happy to be of on vacation for a week, so there will be loads of new chapter to read when i get back! Hopefully? (Please?)
"Now he only had eyes for Bill…in a completely brotherly way."
Yeah Right!!! ROTFLMAO!!!!!!
Date: 07/02/08 08:46 am Title: Chap. 5 : Lap Dance
Tom's constant denial is rather endearing... And funny! :D
Lap dance... POOR Tomi... Hehehe... :)
"So if you wanna stop whatever it is you were doing, can we get on with this or what" Oblivious.... That's an understatement! :) Love Andreas!
Hmmm, Bill dancing, Tom tending the bar and on occasion playing some self written music for Bill to dance to...(just me, myself and my brain wishing...) and some sex... (some other part of me wishing...)
This is a HOT, funny, sweet and just wonderful storie!
THANK YOU, both!!!!!!
Date: 07/02/08 08:18 am Title: Chap. 4 : High Heels
"Who wouldn’t think Bill was hot like this right?" I'm right there with ya... Gulp!!!
"I bet I could work your pole pretty good" Yeah.. That's very innocent! NOT! Poor Tom! ;)
I REALLY like this one! The humour in there are just absolutely hilarious!
ROTFLMAO!!!! :D
Thank you!
Author's Response: haha why do you think we write this *drool* hihi and yeah, when was I ever innocent ,) aw and you like our humor? that is so sweet !!!
Date: 07/02/08 07:59 am Title: Chap. 3 : Guitar lessons
Well you've got one thankful fan here!
I'm glad i decided to start reading this even though it's not finished. I just hope you guys do that, because this is really good!
Thank you!
Author's Response: it will be finnished, I can promise you that, when I'm not sure though ,)God, so extreemly happy that you like this !!!
Date: 07/02/08 07:44 am Title: Chap. 1 : Exotic Dancing
OMG'es this is... and...
HOLY FUCK.... (smiles like a madman...)
This is exactly what i've been rambling on about, Lucy! Longer stories with more character depth and more meat to the bones so to say...
I like it a lot... :D
I've only read two chapters, but... I think... Maybe Tom playing and Bill dancing?
A big Thank You to both of you!
Of to the next chapter!
(keeps on smiling...)
Author's Response: haha yeah so you like it huh ? I have to dissapoint you and say that there will be more one-shots, but I think you might like those too ,) well, Bill will dance, but no, no playing (I presume you mean the guitar) happy this made you smile ,)
Date: 06/12/08 05:29 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Wow o_O
Never thought I'd think Bill wearing leather shorts and leather boots was hot, but dam,, you blew my mind *_*
Can't wait for more!! ;D
Date: 06/11/08 11:15 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
WHEREZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATEE WRRRRR WRRRR *turns into little wild kitten*
Did you forget about this story?T____T
Author's Response: yes I did, but you reminded me and noe everything is gonna be okay, *pets little wild kitten and feeds it new BillaPole goodies* nice kitty
Date: 06/08/08 11:26 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
God, you guys like to tease... a kiss! A single kiss! The boys must be ready to implode XD
Date: 06/02/08 12:05 am Title: Chap. 6 : Work
I'm guessing....
Tom && Bill to have sexy time?
=D
Date: 06/01/08 02:03 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
OMG! *dies*
I'm gonna guess ya'll want reviews?? XD I, personally, would prefer private ownsership of TH, but hey! Whatever tunes your guitar! XD
*tackle hug*
This is great! I LOVED what Tom did to that creep! Next time, he should put laxatives in his drink. *rubs hands together schemeingly*
Date: 06/01/08 05:14 am Title: Prologue : The Basement
I really love your story. That's just the right story for me. :D
I should read more English fanfictions.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05/31/08 03:43 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Work
Hey, I liked tom's reaction to the guys talking about bill. it's so cute how protective he is. and they finally kissed! and they weren't drunk! yay! can't wait to see where this goes! And lucy, check you're email. update soon.