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Reviewer: EmoAngel5227 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/10 11:41 am Title: Chapter 2

holy speaker whiskers. i really liked it! VERY surprising! which is a good thing, ive been obsessed with death and murder for a long time now :D

Reviewer: Alina Van Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/08 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 2

It was kinda enjoyable, but where's the reality? Would Bill really do that, even for Tom? I'd start a whole rant on realism and credability... But my shoulder and wrists hurt, so I'll take the typing easy.

I liked it. I want more, but it didn't seem real enough.

Author's Response: I have a wb atm,but I'll try and continue it.thnx for the review,I really appreciate it

Reviewer: luckystars4XO Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

i like it but the 1st chapter contradicts itself 1st bill is made at tom (u never tell us why) then bill is the one in trouble (again you dont tell us why) you need to be clear about what you are saying

Author's Response: I WILL explain it at the next chapters.Glad you liked it...

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