Date: 05/17/09 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This has lots of potential. you write well and the plot so far looks good. i hope you do continue--and soon! :) keep up the good work.
Date: 06/25/08 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
So far, I love this.
Date: 05/10/08 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
You shoud really update this story it seems really interesting you should keep it going.
Date: 05/06/08 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
damn good start I so think you should continue.
Date: 05/06/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
continue, continue !
Date: 05/06/08 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
oh my goooooooooooood
this is so über sweet *goes all bambi eyed on you*
wow I mean...just WOW
the consept of Tom being the bullied one, poor baby
and your Bill was just so cute, very well written
you managed to hold that wonderful scense of piece througout the whole chapter and I really liked it !
hope you'll write more love
*hugs you*
Date: 05/06/08 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
I can tell it's going to be a very good story =]
Date: 05/05/08 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liikkkeee it.
It's really good, I'm sorry I don't really have good reviews, the scenario Tom is in, seems really difficult. I really hope to see more chapters and more dept as the story progresses on.
I would love to see you continue this.
Date: 05/05/08 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes you should defenetly continue it is very interesting.And very good keep writeing.
Date: 05/05/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, it's sweet. I'm liking it so far. :D The summary drew me in, and I'd like to see it continued.
Date: 05/05/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow this is really well written! I would love to read to more of this =)
Update soon! Danke,
Andi
Date: 05/05/08 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitly continue this!
Date: 05/05/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
oo! PLEASEEE continue this!
I'm really liking it!
♥