Date: 03/01/09 11:40 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
Awesome! You kept it moving right along, and it's OK that the chapters were short, it kept my interest. Good fic!
Date: 09/13/08 12:09 am Title: Middle
this reminds me of the anime DEARS lol. i really like it so far though
Date: 07/10/08 05:46 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
XDD
tom's so proud of swearing. great though!
Date: 07/09/08 11:26 am Title: The Ringing Bell
i knew it! i knew she stuck it on the doc!
brilliant, awesome wonderful story. i loved it,
please please do the sequel soooooooooon
please!
Date: 07/09/08 01:51 am Title: The Ringing Bell
yay! im so happy that bella made it, andhappy that there will be a sequel!
Date: 07/08/08 11:50 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
Did I see well? A sequel? Yey!!! I can't wait. I loved this story since the beginning and you didn't dissapoint me once! I'll def be looking out for the sequel. Please make it as good as this one and you'll make us all very happy.
Date: 07/08/08 09:40 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
I can't wait to read the sequel...
Date: 07/08/08 05:23 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
WOW!
Beautiful ending. Sehr smart. :']
But why is everything coming to an end atm? I've read like, four final chapters today. xP
SEQUELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL PLEASE xD
Date: 07/08/08 05:14 pm Title: Arrival
I'm sorry but I have to disagree with everyone else who had reviewed. Bell should have died or however you kill clones. Sorry again, if I'm being mean but truthfully something BIG should have happened. It makes the story much better - and who cares if people hated you for killing Bell? They can't really hate you because it was a good story and authors may do somethings that you don't like. I'm glad you're making a sequal and I'm not saying I hated your story. This review is just giving you something to maybe think about when you write your sequal. Death is always good and if your a clone, you might not even feel it. Sorry (again) if you might be taking this the wrong way but for future reference, try to do something unexpected - to mess with the heads of your readers. Not something like saving a poor, unfortunate clone. Hopefully you will consider my citizism. Thanks again.
-PinkFluffyandEvil
Author's Response: Thanks for being honest ^_^ I was pretty close to actually killing her, and if I hadn't come up with another storyline while I was writing, I probably would have in the end. However, I needed her around for the next part. Her life's not going to be happy-perfect after this. Actually, I think death might have been kinder for her. *hides from Bell fans* And who knows, maybe she still will die. The Institute's not going anywhere, not at this point. Clones are still dying, and Bell may not be so lucky should she encounter it again. Regardless, what I do eventually have planned for Bell (variables can change, I'm pretty ADD with my stories until I actually write it) I hope it's unexpected. Thanks for the critizism, I appreciate it.
Date: 07/08/08 04:36 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
omg this is so and was and woow is so amazingly AWESOME i lovd this and cant wait for the sequal haha go bell
woop woop
ly
xx
Date: 07/08/08 04:25 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
That was a really sweet ending!
I actually got that fortune once... for real!
Date: 07/08/08 04:20 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
wiihii:D
Sequel!!
I'm waiting:D Trust me:)
Date: 07/08/08 04:19 pm Title: The Ringing Bell
lmao.
i loved this story.
especially the end.
"Yu gonna eat your fortune cookie?"
anyway... can't wait for the sequel!
Date: 07/08/08 01:13 pm Title: Come and see who's home
XD; srry >>;; fine from now on I'll point out all your mitakes
Date: 07/08/08 01:03 am Title: Come and see who's home
yays!!
>>;; I caught that mitake last chapter, but I just thought you'd noticed it
Author's Response: No I hadn't D: I count on you for these things, jeez T-T xD
Date: 07/07/08 05:03 pm Title: Come and see who's home
YESSSSS!!! BELLA IS ALIVE!!! WOOT!!
:) thanks for not killing her.
Thanks for the update and writing the best story EVER!!!
i've been dreading this is..THE END near?? Tom should get his own Bell..JK[not really] xD
Author's Response: Aw, thanks to you too ^^ I think a riot would have come after me if I had actually killed her xD You're right; the end is near... and there is a sequal planned ;D
Date: 07/07/08 04:52 pm Title: Come and see who's home
She's finally home again! I knew you wouldn't let her die!
Author's Response: Yup ^_^ I like her too much to kill her x3
Date: 07/07/08 04:22 pm Title: Come and see who's home
awwww
update soon
that was too cute
ly
xx
Author's Response: I'll write the next part soon =D
Date: 07/07/08 04:18 pm Title: Come and see who's home
Be quick :D
Date: 07/05/08 05:07 pm Title: Left
She came back! Bells not dead! YEEEEESSSSSSSSS
i knew she wouldnt do it, what did she do.....stick the doc?
ooooooo i need to know NOW!
yay i love this story, so gripping and so damned well written. im hooked!
10/10 my dear :)
Author's Response: aw, Thank you ^^ and you're right =D She'll explain her escape soon