Date: 05/11/08 03:54 pm Title: Sloth
this great, you have done a tremendous job! keep updating!
Date: 05/11/08 02:48 pm Title: Sloth
Yeeeeeeessss! Something to be happy about today XD I never believed that i would ever want to be Gustav until now XD I really like your work ALL of it. The plot the scenes Everything. And ... Oh yea i bit my nail off while sucking my finger because of you!!! ^-^' Oh yea and i would really want to see a Bill/Self or Tom/Self in the fic cause your the bestein scenes...Thx...
Author's Response: You know, whenever I post, I always look forward to your comment!rnrnYou just give me so much confidence in my work seriously, you really make me wanna write more (:rnrnAnd er...rnYou want me to write about on of them wanking?!?!
Date: 05/11/08 01:36 pm Title: Sloth
oh shit
I feel bad for Gusti...but i mean..so what he didnt say anything...it might not hav emade much of a difference either way
gaah...this fic is really exciting
Author's Response: Yeah, I know it wouldn't, but it from gustis pov so its him feeling guilty.rnrnThanks for the review! rnXoxo
Date: 05/11/08 01:29 pm Title: Sloth
Great chapter Sian! I am so glad I could help :)
I think it might be good to hear how the twins are dealing with everything now, so maybe wrath or greed next? Wrath might work well...?
Author's Response: Thanks!rnAnd I've got the end all planned out, cause I'm going to have envy then wrath as the last two.rnIts just green and pride I need to work inrnBut pride is gusti againrnSo I guess its gotta be greed which is bill.rnSo maybe, him hogging the limelight?rnBah I dunno, I'llwrite more laterrnI've got my exams starting tomorrow so ....MergghhhrnI'll work something out!rnrnThanks again!rnXoxo
Date: 05/11/08 01:23 pm Title: Sloth
WOAH!!!!
seriously amazing story! :)
cant wait to read more, gosh its so intersting!
Date: 05/11/08 11:42 am Title: Gluttony
Wow the lust chapter was hot!! Shit, I'm hysterical.
And the gluttony, Georg really has a problem, eh o.0
Maybe sloth will come next, to see what you've came up with xD
*hugs*
Author's Response: (: thanks!rnrnAnd I'm busy writing sloth now (: should be up soonish rnXoxo
Date: 05/11/08 03:20 am Title: Gluttony
So intriguing... I'll be looking for the next update :-)
Date: 05/10/08 04:56 pm Title: Gluttony
Wow, this is so good Sian! Loved the quick update too^^
Hmm, I think sloth would be good next... Sloth is Gustav right? (Going by the banner.)
Author's Response: Yeah, the banner has the right sins for the right people (:rnrnAnd it was partially you who inspired me to write more so soon!rn I'd write more now but I'm tired xDrnrnThanks again!rnYour a real inspiration to keep this going!rnrnXoxoxox
Date: 05/10/08 02:31 pm Title: Gluttony
omg
this is soo good
I love how every chapter is bulit on a sin
sloth should definitley come next...but pride might be fun too...theres a lot that could be written about pride ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, sloth fits with the story line I have in mind but pride might fit too, I dunno, but it will probably be sloth.
Date: 05/10/08 02:19 pm Title: Gluttony
God with me today XDXDXD And yea it should be sloth ^^ I have no more comments i already said all i could say because NO COMENTS your fictions are the best... God make more sins for us to play with XDXD .
Author's Response: Awh, I might make a sequel for the 10 comandments if I finish this xD which I will so don't worry xD
Date: 05/10/08 02:15 pm Title: Gluttony
nooo, georg's a druggie! :( i liked this chapter, even though half of the page turned out in italics for some reason. O_O how strange. oh, and i'm voting for sloth. :D
Author's Response: Oh shitter, I must have not closed a stupid html tag!rnI'll go get that sorted now!rnSorry xDrnrnAnd I think I'm doing sloth anyway (:
Date: 05/10/08 02:14 pm Title: Lust
YOU!!!!.....YOU!!!... you leave me like: 6_6 Pple Where does she get her inspiration form???... Tell me girl is it for sale???? God why didn't you gave more than 7 sins ????? Why????? XOXOXOXO LOVE YA' GURL ... YOU make my day
Author's Response: Oh my! rnThis review means so much to me, you have no idea.rnThank you so so much (:rnrnYou make MY dayrnrnThank you
Date: 05/10/08 02:00 pm Title: Lust
O.O All i have is pure love for this chapter! envy please!
Date: 05/10/08 01:27 pm Title: Prologue
as far as i can tell, this is a great story with a great idea behind it. :) and no, the prologue wasn't boring - i liked it! XD your banner rocks, btw. it totally caught my eye. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!rnI'm thinking of going into to graphic design as a career (:
Date: 05/10/08 12:02 pm Title: Lust
oh my...this was good!!! =D
Date: 05/10/08 11:58 am Title: Lust
SON OF A BITCH... that was AMAZING O_______O
Author's Response: Aw -blushes-
Date: 05/10/08 11:56 am Title: Lust
Uhmmm ... You might want to cover your ears.
*screams louder than all the TH fangirls in the world* AHHHHHHHHHH OMMMMMGGGGG THAT WAS SEXY!!!!!!
Author's Response: Awhhh thanks!rn-blushes-rnXoxo
Date: 05/10/08 11:43 am Title: Prologue
i like the story =)
and i looove naughty twins
keep going