Date: 05/05/08 07:28 am Title: Make Me Feel Better
omfg. first time smut writer? lmao, was very good for a first smut , i liked it!
Author's Response: happy you liked it, (: thanks for reviewing, (:
Date: 05/05/08 03:25 am Title: Make Me Feel Better
Mmm. I really liked all the sweetness in the beginning (I felt like my shoulders were massaged!), definetely enjoyed the smut in the end. Very well done for a first timer, ans very nicely done smut in general :) Just I feel like considering how sweet this fic was all around, cum could've been spelled in a normal way as to me, cum always makes it sound like a very bad 70's porn film featuring fake moustaches. Just a personal squick.
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it (: and the cum thing, i donno, i thought id try it. i have three more coming, so i might spelling differently there. thanks for reviewing, (:
Date: 05/04/08 10:13 pm Title: Make Me Feel Better
You have every right to be proud of it honey! And thanks for the mention in the story and chapter notes! If you ever need inspiration, or just someone to bounce ideas off... You have my email address ^_^
Author's Response: thanks, emma, (:
Date: 05/04/08 10:06 pm Title: Make Me Feel Better
wow! 14!? Really good smut for 14 ;)
luved the cute tom =) and of course the smut..who wouldn't? ;D
Andi
Author's Response: yep, fourteen, (: thanks so much, happy you liked it, (: ~erika
Date: 05/04/08 09:44 pm Title: Make Me Feel Better
yea for a first that was VERY good!
Author's Response: thank you very much, (:
Date: 05/04/08 09:37 pm Title: Make Me Feel Better
Cute! I liked it a lot, the beginning was lovely, I melted... I love it when Tom's sweet like that! And the ending was hot... You went with both of my ideas then ^^
There were a couple of typos and mistakes, nothing major, and your writing stiffened up at times, but it was good! (If you want a more detailed critique than that, I could email you tomorrow? You don't have to say yes^^) Damn good for your first smut though :)
I'm so pleased that I helped to inspire you to write this, and I can't wait to read the rest of the series!
Author's Response: Tom is great when he's sweet, right? I'm happy you enjoyed it, (: Yes, both of your ideas were amazing. I did write most of this from 11pm-2am, so that makes sense. hahaa. I'm very proud of myself for this one, and I don't care who knows it. More of the series will come when I get ideas. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Emma. (:
Date: 05/04/08 09:30 pm Title: Make Me Feel Better
BOWN-chicka-BOWN-WOWN
Das ist sexy!!!! :-)
Author's Response: hehe, i tried. thanks, (:
Date: 05/04/08 09:28 pm Title: Make Me Feel Better
Very good, my dearie!
Author's Response: thank you very much, (: